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pRopaaNS1337 -> Poem about Internet (2/25/2014 18:46:10)

/I made a short poem. I want to know whenever it's any good, because depending on your opinion I might try writing more somehting like that for specific situations.

That day will come when we trust in`ternet
In distant strangers equipped with masks
We already do in written numbers
In written names and in tasks

That day will come when masks will fall off
And we`ll see faces and their thoughts
That day we’ll see what happens inside
And make us able to forgive.



Kian -> RE: Poem about Internet (3/11/2015 23:26:13)

Honestly, I've read this over twenty times already and it still makes little sense to me. Artistic freedom, anyone? [:D] In any case, it's definitely well written and I strongly encourage you to keep doing these!



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