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WolfWing needs a major Update. So I shall provide it.
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/894/wolfwingfo3.jpg

WolfWing is The Grandfather of VampireSlayer E and Cenera. He also is an activist tring to keep the 4 Races of Darkovia from waging war with each other. He has a Deark Secret That Dewlok has saved him from.

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For the entry of Prince Atlas Maxwell, the link to Sasha Maxwell, his wife, as of now links to his sister Jessica Maxwell. Instead it should, obviously, link to Sasha Maxwell, his actual wife.

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It should be said in Kalanyr's bio that Sarah the NerfKitten is his pet, but she is of questionable loyalty to him.

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They say the the Archmage Kalanyr has a pet nerfkitten, the first ever to be discovered. Unfortunately for you, it seems that not only is that true, but that it has escaped! On the bright side shares in foam and cardboard are looking up.

This also gives a hint to how powerful he is, being able to keep Sarah, a level 130 void monster as a pet.

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I don't know which is incorrect, but in the Strange Friends Entry, the undead is labeled as "Cagliari", and in HIS entry, he's labeled as Cagliara.

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just a small notice: does Sarah Renee have a new dress?

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Gaspar:

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Gaspar once slayed the Dragon King in a rage after the Dragon King almost killed Xerxes, but that didn't stop the Dragon King from reviving himself.

'Slayed' ain't a word. The past tense of slay is slew. Trust me, I'm an approved author (that, and MS word says so, too)

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for wolfwing that is the old picture here is the new one:

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a220/DLSeth/EvaSouls/wolfwing.gif

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Well, he has some lines so ill put this down.

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Drako

Bio: A blue dragon that is leading other dragons in a revolt against New Granemor

Location: Dragon War on Granemor

Function: To lead other dragons in an attack, which he calls a "protest" about New Granemor

Picture

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For the description of Donovan minions: I dont think the werewolf is the son of the were king. The werewolf just not call his leader their king, but call him their father as vamps call Safiria their queen instead of their mother.

So, i think these is the way it should say:

A werewolf, vampire, and werepyre who infiltrate the ranks of The Were-King, Safiria, and Wolfwing on behalf of Donovan. (avoiding the part of the son)

No. The werewolf in question is definitely his son in the true sense. Note his own earlier dialog.

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^ so After Falerin's reply, we can safely say that the werewolf is Werewolf King's Son? So we can change from 'The werewolf *seems* to be the son of Wereking' to ' The werewolf is the son of Werewolf King'

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Wobbly Rock

Bio: A mutated rock, given intelligence from the Mutant King

Location: Deeper in the No Mans Land

Function: To warn you that orges run the land and that some were once nice humans but have been turned into orges by the Mutant King.

Wobbly Rock

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Bio: An Emperor of the No mans Land, that works hand and hand with Visia

Location: Deeper in the No Mans Land

Function: To send the Orge Shaman to attack you and season your carcass I dont know I forget! <--Im joking here

Mutant King

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From the New War, 'Search for a Cure'

It revealed that White Abbess is also called Lady Evina

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Okay how about these NPC's...index time

lets tackle the list

Debilzard needs to be added to the index
Doofus von Strudel needs to be added to the index
Dragon/DragonLord should go after Dragon King's Axe
King Frost needs to be added to the index
Kosefia needs to be added to the index
Lady Evina needs to be added to the index
Lavistria and Lauren need to be switched
M'Orc should be the first on the "M" List
Nakaru has two things wrong with it....first its spelled wrong its Naraku and second it should go after Nalu and before Narg
Sam needs to be added to the index
Seahawk needs to be added to the index
Space Girls needs to be added to the index
Finally Were-Moglin and Were-King should be switched

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On the entrees themselves why have these....

why have two Cor-Demis???

Cor-Demi

Cor-Demi

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Lady Evina, aka The White Abbess ,

Picture of Lady Evina without the hood. Here

White Abbess is in the index but Lady Evina is not

Location: Search for a Cure!
Cenara

New picture of her. Here

Location: Search for a Cure! and The GraceFang/NightReign Cycle: 4-Way Darkovia War!

Function: (CONT.) Cenera was cut by a debris fallen off in Nightbane's Castle which had some of her father's/ Balius' (aka Nightbane) blood. She was then infected with a strange contagion that caused her to age and mature quickly. She was in the end cured by Dewlok's Healing magic and herbs found in No Man's Land. She now will either die or transformed into a Dracopyre.
WolfWing is the grandfather of Cenera.
Dewlok

Function: (CONT.) He cured Cenara who had was infected by a strange contagion with special healing powers (different from ordinary moglins) and was able to break the link with the Annunaki.
Dewlok was once a guard of WolfWing and had secrets hidden from Cenera about Balius (aka Nightbane).
Vampire Slayer E aka Edward

Function: WolfWing is the grandfather of Edward.
WolfWing

Location: Search for a Cure!

Picture Broken, here a new one!
Donovan

Location: Search for a Cure!

Function: (CONT.) He wishes to become a Dracopyre in order to become the strongest predator in Darkovia

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Nightbane's/ Balius' former lieutenants
Location: Search for a Cure!
Function: A Dracovamp Adept and a Dracovamp Lord, named 'Handmaiden' and 'Second Lieutenant' respectively. Once Served Balius (aka Nightbane), now becomes a need for a ritual to let Donovan become a Dracopyre.

Picture:

[image]http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5104/baliusandnightbanewh6.jpg[/image]

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All the relations, so messy 8|

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New picture of Sheila. Here it is.

Also, in this post, and also in this one, I am credited as Duskie, my old name. If you trust me when I'm saying that's me then you can change it to Memory of a Nightmare. If you don't, don't.

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For Refrence in Gaspar's Entry it lists his sister's name as Neva it is actually Nava. This is confirmed by Cyrus.

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New image for Snootch:

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h130/ziyingjiang/snootch.jpg

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The rare elephant man! Half-man, half elephant!

^ In Jypley's exhibits... that guys is half-elf

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Wind Spirit
Bio: A spirit that guards the Sky Bridge to Soriranashi-Sonikan, the Cloud City.
Location: Sky Bridge
Function: To guard the Sky Bridge which leads to Soriranashi-Sonikan, the Cloud City.

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Name: Gween
Bio: This furry creature fell from the sky. A legend says that these cratures become evil little hallows if you feed them with candy. (I'm not good writing this kind of stuff, so you can modify the info as much as you want... I just took the info from the scene where you meet with sage Uldor...)
Location: The Mistery of the Falling Star (Mogloween 08)
Function: Helps you fight Diretooth. He is also a pet...
Attacks: apparently he attacks 100% of the time...
Hits:Two
Type:melee
Element: Earth

Picture 1
Picture 2
Picture 3 (This is the picture of the pet, that kinda explains the little gray thing in the left corner [at the bottom])...

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In the Gween NPC entry, creature is misspelled as "crature"

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In Demento's page, it says "During Frostval '07, he provided you with Charr his Cinderwolf to help you fight Froidog the Ice Dragon. "
shouldent it be "during Frostval '03"?

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In the entry for Garrott Cutthroat, the link in the pedia spells it Garrot Cutthroat. Garrott is missing a t.

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Knut the Brownie

Bio: A small Brownie, just looking for some food. After you defeat him, he'll offer you some Anti-Batter.

Location: Ebil Twilly Quest

Function: To give you Anti-Batter for the Cheese and Rice.

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll182/Orodalf/Brownie.jpg

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You might want to add this guy

Kubby

Bio: A moglin caught by Visia in no man's land. She shapes him to be the (first?) moglinator

Location: Battle with Visia!

Function: monster in the war, comic relief (kind of generic moglin humor?) and part of Visia's monologue

(I'll try to get a pic)