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9/8/2011 23:17:11   
Goldstein
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That was amazing. I felt so warm inside, seeming my character being used by someone else so skillfully. Truly, you do Strebor good. It sounds like he's finally grown up a little, too. I'm assuming this story-line is occurring independently than the one were Strebor meets Experimental in SkullDeep?

EDIT: Also, I have acquired the rights to the third page in this thread. All successive posters must pay me a three dollar fee for using it.
Post #: 51
9/9/2011 0:01:47   
Vector
Member
 

 wait, what? it's my thread, goldstein! any and all demands must be approved by me first! ok you can issue the fee, but since its my thread, you'll have to exempt me from it.

oh, come now dear boy, this is only my first story. you needn't be so kind.
independence from the medical license story was my intention, actually, but... no comment on anything else? dont make the rookie sad! :/

< Message edited by Vector -- 9/9/2011 0:04:45 >
Post #: 52
9/9/2011 0:16:19   
Shadowlord9k
Member

I have narrowed down his weaknesses a bit:
Self-Destruct Mechanism (I think I can see a fake button being used to mock/manipulate...)
Fire
EMP cannon/grenade/gun/sword/magic ball of death/etc.
Water (His tears may prove it otherwise)
Sudden power boost
Becoming "human" (or gaining a soul)
Reality bending
Magic
Death himself
Sonic screwdriver
Engineer
Etc.



Hmmmm not that narrower...
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 53
9/9/2011 0:22:52   
star screamer
Member

@Shadowlord9k So you are weak to the Doctor, what if Rose attacks you or maybe Martha or amy
AQW  Post #: 54
9/9/2011 6:38:23   
Goldstein
Member

I like how I saw more "said" than anything. That's good.
Post #: 55
9/9/2011 9:47:07   
Vector
Member
 

 @shadowlord9k: i never wouldve thought of self-destruct.... but no, none of your guesses are right. keep trying if you dare.


EDIT: you might like it, goldstein, but i'm not too proud of it. that's just me whining like a baby though lol

< Message edited by Vector -- 9/9/2011 9:48:41 >
Post #: 56
9/9/2011 11:55:29   
Shadowlord9k
Member

Vector: Really? I mean putting a self-destruct would be kinda obvious to do...

I did rule out other weaknesses such as:
Paradoxes
Lava
Fish
Etc.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 57
9/9/2011 12:53:34   
Vector
Member
 

 i'm sorry, fish? that just made me laugh.

i think i might pull something off with self-destruct, but it can't just be a simple override where somebody could just press a button and BOOM. the cyborg is in full control of himself, remember, which includes the poorly re-named robotic copy of suicide.
Post #: 58
9/9/2011 13:19:25   
Shadowlord9k
Member

There is a reason I ruled out fish.

Maybe the self-destruct could be more like a override switch.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 59
9/9/2011 19:19:01   
Vector
Member
 

 *shudders* i just had the craziest, nightmare inducing concept that might even defy Artix's crazy ideas when I started writing my next chapter: (WARNING: do not reveal this spoiler to help prevent the spread of mental scarring! dont worry its still age appropriate, just really, really bizarre)


spoiler:

Super Death in a bright pink outfit


umm... i can haz therapy?
Post #: 60
9/9/2011 20:58:40   
star screamer
Member

I know how to read spoilers and that is just scary! Not as scary as a pony wearing a mango though

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AQW  Post #: 61
9/9/2011 21:21:38   
Vector
Member
 

 i just dont know if i should just make a vague reference like someone mentioning it or just leave it alone entirely

made my decision. i hope i made the right choice

EDIT: sneak peek time! this one's for much later in the story, but i'll tell ya anyway: when the war finally comes around in the story, it will be a real war; direct fighting between good and evil, not some silly goose chase for important war-meter items. (coughcorescough) i'll try to make it as 'clean' as possible, though, but like i said its for much later

< Message edited by Vector -- 9/10/2011 0:26:02 >
Post #: 62
9/11/2011 22:24:11   
Celestin123
Member

That sounds very interesting, Vector. Your story is looking pretty good so far and I can't wait to
see what happens next!=P

< Message edited by Celestin123 -- 9/11/2011 22:55:33 >
AQ  Post #: 63
9/11/2011 22:50:20   
Vector
Member
 

 did you read my updated chapter, though? or has it been forgotten by a trivial arguement?

anyway, noone seems to be guessing what the cyborg's possible weakness could be... oh, about that:
technically the typical EMP from science fiction (or some creative minds) would actually work, but since the cyborg already knows about that... 'weapon', so to speak, the actual effectiveness is limited to a lucky throw/shot. Skulldeep wasn't messing around when they wanted the absolute best super soldier, but there is one sort of EMP that could spread fast enough to make a guaranteed kill... or at least threaten.
Post #: 64
9/11/2011 22:58:42   
Shadowlord9k
Member

Vector: Let me guess, a computer virus.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 65
9/11/2011 23:39:47   
Vector
Member
 

 possible, but its not what im thinking of...
Post #: 66
9/11/2011 23:41:05   
Shadowlord9k
Member

Vector: a modified computer virus? Or maybe a literal Blue Screen of Death.....
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 67
9/12/2011 0:53:45   
Vector
Member
 

 *sigh* have you forgotten chapter VI?
Post #: 68
9/12/2011 1:22:16   
Shadowlord9k
Member

...maybe, I'll go reread it now.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 69
9/12/2011 23:51:00   
Vector
Member
 

 it's kinda nice to see how well Demo and the cyborg are getting along... maybe too well. what do you guys think?
Post #: 70
9/13/2011 0:06:20   
Shadowlord9k
Member

Vector: Hmmm I think I see where you're going with it.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 71
9/13/2011 21:34:48   
Crystal Lion
Member
 

 I spy a Frakenstein's Monster reference. :p

Also, aww, the pairing's cute.
Post #: 72
9/13/2011 21:42:41   
Vector
Member
 

 made blatantly obvious by the classic exclamation in the character thread

glad you like, just remember there's still a chance where he could turn back around and support skulldeep instead. always is, but i'm not guaranteeing he will.
Post #: 73
9/13/2011 21:52:10   
Crystal Lion
Member
 

 Write whatever you think the plot demands, I say.

Could I try illustrating the kiss scene? Just wondering, do you have a screenshot of the cyborg? Or his character page? Unless Experimental is the cyborg here.
Post #: 74
9/13/2011 22:04:21   
Vector
Member
 

 ...r-really? you'd do that? umm... wow...

(experimental is the cyborg. in the story though, he truly has... had no name, until Demo thought one for him, as you just read. yes, that means you can do it )
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