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11/26/2011 18:30:48   
Clown the Jester
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Yeah the story makes alot more sense if ya read Comedy and Tragedy...and oh yes...I found the poem...heh heh heh...very amusing. It reminds me of something I read a long long time ago...but I forget exactly what it was.


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12/4/2011 10:36:27   
Goldstein
Member

Dern Boston! You scary!
Post #: 77
12/4/2011 14:08:56   
star screamer
Member

Great chapter as always my Gray friend.
But it makes me wonder, would you
not even kill me, or try to at least?
If not, you are weak. HE HE HE HA HA HA!
I would like a fight to the death Gray,
HOW 'BOUT HE NINTH!? It's a date then.
AQW  Post #: 78
12/4/2011 17:33:13   
Clown the Jester
Member

OOOOOH! I like the parralelism to Grape Jr. nearly being blown up by a Clown Boy in a tunnel and the time in Comedy and Tragedy where Grape Sr. got blown up by ME!


WA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HAH A!


Looks like Grape Jr.'s in over his league.

AND NOW WE KNOW GRAPE'S LAST NAME! How exciting!


AQW Epic  Post #: 79
12/4/2011 18:09:40   
Drakkoniss
Creative!
Constructive!


Well, I suppose it is about time to read a little story.

The Chaos Carnival split apart, hmm? Interesting...

And they are yet powerful, as well, it seems. 750,000 under their protection... One wonders as to the logistics behind it.

His psychology and mindset continue to worry me... This new Gray... How will he be able to hold up, I wonder.

Hmm... interesting feets of acrobatics... rather lacking in higher level skills, but still...

His lack of reliance on his technology also makes me think about just how effective he will be...

Interesting car theif...

Pfft... Fool, thinking that stealing a car couldn't actually hurt someone... He's wrong. So many potential ways that could hurt them...

And the fact that he let himself be hit... he needs to improve his form quite a bit, before he's ready for what he wishes to accomplish...

Good to see the fact that he let him get so far was intentional, or else that would look very bad. XP

I wonder if the fact that you allowed him to hit you will have repercussions. That would seem likely, and could cast doubt upon the New Gray being the Old Gray...

Hmm... Again, I am met with curiousity, as I read of his interesting feats of acrobatics.

And then there's the question of whether or not he will have the skill to handle Agent Boston... Personally, I don't think he'd be able to, unless Zafara recovers, and they are able to take him together.

No, no it wasn't the only score... I wonder if he actually did have the detective skills of his father, if he would be able to have detected their movements to the river area, though... He probably would have planned it out better, I think, though... That's another one of his problems. He doesn't think things through strategically, sometimes, although he's done better than many would.

And so, his fanaticism causes him to believe he shold not use his technology, yet again...

The mention of "that Omnicorp gang" makes me wonder if they are stupid, or if either a gang named themselves after the company, or it opperates in a much more violent manner than one might think... Well, it seems it's just that one guy who is an idiot.

Good thing he held back enough to not immediately attack them, and was actually able to glean that little tidbit of information from that affair...

Hmm... if he had banged his feet upon the floor, that could have gone horribly.

...and not killing whenever possible, as well.. THAT is quite interesting...

3 second charging time on the Oblivionator, eh? Interesting.

If he lets those Clown Boys live... that could be even worse than being hit by the man's screwdriver and letting him get away for a while for the case of him being the Gray Silhouette...

Mmm.. I never liked the BOOM-ingdale's Oblivionators very much, either. The radioactive side-effects, among other things, make it a distasteful weapon to use, let alone supply people with.

Suprising to see that the weapon was actually in the shop, though...

And along with the vapor, there's also the fact that the room's size limits the amount of oxygen, as well... even if the cumbustible materials in the air weren't there, it would be stupid to use a flamethrower very much in there...

The fact that he left the flame thrower there, where it could have been grabbed in the fight with the remaining enemy, disappoints me... he needs to learn to use battle tactics more effectively...

Black Vengeance... That makes it even worse...

This makes him even more susceptible to attack... Oh, and the lack of force in the explosion surprises me... that should have been able to potentially kill him, and if I hadn't known better, I'd have thought it might.

Glad to see you included the disorientation the effects of explosions cause with that much power and at such a short range, though.

Third degree burn damage to the arm, as well... That is foreboding, considering what I know...

At least the Oblivion Core didn't explode...

And so, it comes to the moment of truth... Boston... and Zafara...

Hmm... good deductive skills... but he still has yet to understand the nature of the weapon... hmm, indeed...

I do not remeber Gray having a weapon on hand, so I suppose the taunt lost a bit of its edge, there...

Yes, I would imagine the loss of fear as a weapon must hurt his chances quite a bit, with those injuries... and he knows it.

Good to see that he finally figured out who he was, though.

Yes, I thought the fact that he would ask at all gave him away as not being the original... The first question, and possibly the second one, as well.

White eyes... Hmm...

Boston's skills, on the other hand, are quite sharp... I agree. This fight won't end well. His only course of action should be to stall... I doubt he'll do that, though.

I am guessing he also has been trained to read his enemy's movements, so as to always be prepared... he's good...

Good... as I suspected, Zafara was able to recover...

As I thought, Boston is using high technology on his side, as would befit an agent of such a profession. I already had noticed that before, after he was able to take so many of her blows, and especially after he recovered so nigh-miraculously, but it is still worth mentioning.

Good choice on his part, to attempt to end the fight soon.

I look foreward to Zafara's follow-up chapter.


< Message edited by Drakkoniss -- 12/4/2011 18:10:47 >
DF  Post #: 80
12/4/2011 21:19:36   
Goldstein
Member

I think this OmniCorp gang will be a very interesting faction. A bunch of guys in suits and ties with machine guns hidden in their briefcases.

Even Strebor would admit that that is pretty cool.
Post #: 81
12/8/2011 17:07:42   
delta blitz
Member

Sorry I'm late to the party, I was kinda training for the last few days......Still though a very epic chapter, it seems that the new gray silohuete has learned the same thing that the nature ninja learned over the years. No man has the right to say who lives and who dies (though in some cases killing is neccessary for survival or protection). I always thought the new grey was using muy thai not karate but meh, I guess I can understand that. Also hasn't blue gear seen Zafara before, why does it seems like he doesn't know her, her face is showing after all.

< Message edited by delta blitz -- 12/8/2011 22:23:15 >
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12/8/2011 18:23:21   
Jae10
Creative!
Constructive!


My...so much has happened and I almost have so little to say because I am just absolutely stunned at how incredible this story is! It's such a thrill to read and I always enjoy Gray's writing style. He's soooo talented. The Mastermind is incomplete and it's already another maserpiece in my eyes. Quite honestly, I wouldn't be writing much of anything if not for both you, Clown & Gray.

Gray! I'm so pleased at the way you handled SCIF. They are a versatile sector of the goverment. I was actually shocked the Gray Silhouette was a former SCIF agent. I feel a bit honored by it, lol.

Addictive plot!
AQW  Post #: 83
1/16/2012 13:52:09   
Arachnid
Member

quote:

Agent Boston was caught off as the woman in red armor leapt up from the ground where she had been thrown, flying into Agent Boston with incredible speed. The S.C.I.F. Agent only had enough time to look up as she plowed both her feet into his chest, launching him across the Subway Platform. His back slammed against the wall opposite us, a good fifteen feet away, dropping to the ground.

TAKE THAT!
Heh heh.
Definitely loved the chapter.
I need an idea for the follow up...hmmm...

~Lady Zafara
AQW  Post #: 84
1/16/2012 23:05:09   
Jessa K
Member
 

As usual, you've managed to impress me as few authors can. Man, this stuff was epic. I normally save fanfic reading for before I go to sleep, but I just couldn't wait a few more hours to finish reading this! Few authors are able to create moods, feelings, and such as you do. An author myself, I realize how difficult that to do. You seem to have natural talent that very few have.

Fantastic, and I will likely be checking hourly for updates!
AQW  Post #: 85
2/9/2012 8:44:41   
Immortales
Banned


Nice story
Your still continuing this right?
Post #: 86
2/9/2012 15:20:47   
Clown the Jester
Member

I think Gray Silhouette is still continueing the story. I haven't seen him in a week but I beleive he has other priorities he must settle before he resumes Reborn.
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