Home  | Login  | Register  | Help  | Play 

(ED) The Screams of Pain! ~Commentary.~

 
Logged in as: Guest
  Printable Version
All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> AE Fanfiction Discussion >> (ED) The Screams of Pain! ~Commentary.~
Forum Login
Message << Older Topic   Newer Topic >>
12/24/2012 8:23:24   
The Demon Mage
Member

Alright! Prologue's up. It's a bit short, just six hundred words or so, the following chapters will be most likely 4-6 pages long or so, since I don't feel like writing too much and I've noticed that not too many people over here at these forums write really long stories (as in 10-15 pages per chapter). In fact, I haven't noticed a single one so far. :/
Anyway, feel free to discuss! I know that the prolouge is quite repititive and quite un-interesting. I'll try to spice it up as the story goes along. As you may have noticed, the main character will be lusting for revenge so expect betrayals and action, and perhaps, if it is allowed, one or two suggestive themes.
Here's the link, hope you enjoy and don't forget to comment/review! http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=20966127&mpage=1&key=?
Let me know of any mistakes and plotholes that I have made please.

< Message edited by The Demon Mage -- 12/24/2012 8:29:39 >
Post #: 1
Page:   [1]
All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> AE Fanfiction Discussion >> (ED) The Screams of Pain! ~Commentary.~
Jump to:






Icon Legend
New Messages No New Messages
Hot Topic w/ New Messages Hot Topic w/o New Messages
Locked w/ New Messages Locked w/o New Messages
 Post New Thread
 Reply to Message
 Post New Poll
 Submit Vote
 Delete My Own Post
 Delete My Own Thread
 Rate Posts




Forum Content Copyright © 2018 Artix Entertainment, LLC.

"AdventureQuest", "DragonFable", "MechQuest", "EpicDuel", "BattleOn.com", "AdventureQuest Worlds", "Artix Entertainment"
and all game character names are either trademarks or registered trademarks of Artix Entertainment, LLC. All rights are reserved.
PRIVACY POLICY


Forum Software © ASPPlayground.NET Advanced Edition