Home  | Login  | Register  | Help  | Play 

Finding Home. - Comments Thread

 
Logged in as: Guest
  Printable Version
All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> Other Creative Works Discussion >> Finding Home. - Comments Thread
Forum Login
Message << Older Topic   Newer Topic >>
12/23/2009 10:50:48   
Willkill12
Member

Comments thread, for my story Finding Home. Is you can thin of a better name, then please tell me! ;)

By the way, if you like the story then you should read my other one, Unknown Soldier.

Finding Home. Original Story

Unknown Soldier - Original Story

< Message edited by Willkill12 -- 12/23/2009 10:56:27 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 1
3/24/2010 16:45:17   
Willkill12
Member

Intro --Although time period dif… --…are some sim.-2 examples (methods+campaigns)--however forensics
Spending time and money on the wrong sort of campaigns --Both cases had difficulties…--key similarity was___. --YR - not Geordie- ruled out - wasted time and money-Sutcliffe rules out… [2] --NP In the JTR case [7]--outlined vague eg.’suspicious/praps-a-know’--futile/pointless-many were-misled police and wastedtm --conclude:similar-misleading-wastedtm-no progress
Police Methods --Attempt to red-hand --[6]ufodigest --likewise female-hope to catch--NP idea of dogs--[6] similarly JTR also involved ___;bloodhounds--Both failed-JTR chased/laughed at; not used
Forensics --intro --JTR left clues; not useful eg.x2 [7]Jack the Ripper video --however dif. Is their usefulness to catch. --tech in JTR not good-19thC-couldn’t be used--JJ 5thV £5 could traced --[3] --Sutcliffe in 5000 - shows potential to catch --however bluffed (clever)
Recording Information --intro --reward meant write ins
-clogged/imp cross-ref/some u, some n/no progress
-NP In JTW no reward/home offive beca. Crafty
-Due to this+police n/approachable (bloody Sunday),
-smaller write-ins/easier to record
-although none helped
RI - Photos of the Deceased
With ex/MK, says [6] --dif as YR takes all due to more tech/cameras/couler unlike 19thC
Conclusion --answer to Q --This is beca. campaigns sim.=dif. Reasons --YR PI was fail like JTR because cruel/no fault --whereas fault beca. Careless/mistake police JTR
-so reasons behind are actually v.dif.
-NP Most decisive=(in enquiry) forensics
-Although no catch, potential. (interview>effective)
-nowadays, forensics>useful(DNA) = evidence of power in tracing in YR
-JTR no tech or links or obvious clues
-key diff. is YR none either but still potentially catchable

< Message edited by Willkill12 -- 9/26/2010 16:07:43 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 2
Page:   [1]
All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> Other Creative Works Discussion >> Finding Home. - Comments Thread
Jump to:






Icon Legend
New Messages No New Messages
Hot Topic w/ New Messages Hot Topic w/o New Messages
Locked w/ New Messages Locked w/o New Messages
 Post New Thread
 Reply to Message
 Post New Poll
 Submit Vote
 Delete My Own Post
 Delete My Own Thread
 Rate Posts




Forum Content Copyright © 2018 Artix Entertainment, LLC.

"AdventureQuest", "DragonFable", "MechQuest", "EpicDuel", "BattleOn.com", "AdventureQuest Worlds", "Artix Entertainment"
and all game character names are either trademarks or registered trademarks of Artix Entertainment, LLC. All rights are reserved.
PRIVACY POLICY


Forum Software © ASPPlayground.NET Advanced Edition