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2/4/2014 14:27:30   
Elryn

Custodian (DF)


 =AQ= War of the Fangs: Evolution! War Stories and Poems

This is where you may discuss of each other's war stories and poems if not on the war thread itself in the AQ General Discussion forum.


< Message edited by Elryn -- 2/6/2014 16:03:44 >
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2/4/2014 21:27:21   
popinloopy
Member

Muchiha, I love it so far! Acknowledging the fact that much times has passed, adding details of new events into the story, it's fantastic so far!
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2/4/2014 21:38:08   
Muchiha
Member

Thanks popin! I promise this is one story that shall be done on time I decided to create a lengthy Intro and possibly a detailed Conclusion. However, the Chapters in-between shall be brief, yet informative as this war progresses. I happen to have a good amount of free time this week. My final chapters for my NvP War Story are gonna be uploaded in one shot around Saturday so I'll be free to focus on this current one soon. :)
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 3
2/4/2014 21:49:10   
flashbang
Member

*whistles even though I can't whistle irl* Muchiha, that detail was nice. I like how you gave us a bit more of Madara's Background and how you introduced shadow as a dual element.

So, who feels like me making a story?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 4
2/4/2014 21:49:50   
kors
Member

Might just have to start mine soon too...

Oh and Muchiha, when you post them make sure all of us waiting get to see it! I'll have to read it all in full again but hey why not take a look back at how much all of us from then have changed over the almost full year?

@flash: Go ahead and join the club! The more the merrier!

< Message edited by kors -- 2/4/2014 21:51:09 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 5
2/4/2014 21:52:31   
Muchiha
Member

I thank you for your kind words friend!

It's always up to you Flash. I love reading your stories regardless. Your presence in the forums is enough for me. But if you want to then go for it! And don't forget to include the Light Nukes!

As usual, I shall be incorporating forumites' characters. :)

Yes kors, I'll definitely inform you all! Especially the ones featured in it.

< Message edited by Muchiha -- 2/4/2014 22:00:36 >
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2/4/2014 22:03:21   
flashbang
Member

@Muchiha and kors Remember, if you want you can always use Wyrm and Staff. And yesh, THE LIGHT NUKES!
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2/4/2014 22:05:44   
Muchiha
Member

Oh flash, those Vamps don't know what's in store for them >:D

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2/4/2014 22:09:27   
flashbang
Member

Wyrm will side with the werewolves. Staff, I don't know. Should he stay neutral, be part of the #WolfPack, or be a part of the #VampireEmpire(name pending)?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 9
2/4/2014 23:27:45   
popinloopy
Member

I think it goes without saying, but if you want, you can use popinloopy is your story as well.

This goes for anyone who wants to write one. Feel free to use him, no need to ask.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 10
2/4/2014 23:34:10   
battlemaster25
Member

I have now posted the prologue of my story.

Asides from drama, the purpose of this flashback is to demonstrate exactly why Storm is less than fond of vampires.

< Message edited by battlemaster25 -- 2/4/2014 23:50:20 >
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2/5/2014 0:03:34   
popinloopy
Member

@battlemaster
Absolutely spectacular! The detail surrounding the past makes me all the more eager to read the rest.
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2/5/2014 8:42:14   
kors
Member

As both Popinloopy and flashbang have said, Kor is usable by anyone wanting to use the Chronomancer Werepyre!
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 13
2/5/2014 14:56:00   
Muchiha
Member

@battlemaster25: You have set the bar high for anyone wishing to create a War Story for this event! Incredible Start to what I believe will be an incredible story. I can't wait to read what happens next friend :)
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 14
2/5/2014 17:00:12   
Seth Hydra
How We Roll Winner
Nov14


 I'd just finished my first chapter, and before I could save.... my laptop crashed!!!!

Now I'm just too disappointed to write again!!

_____________________________
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 15
2/5/2014 17:44:11   
Muchiha
Member

Aww that's terrible ss :(

You can just give a brief introduction to your story like myself. Whatever you choose to do is fine. Whether contributing to the body counts on the battlefield to telling tales of this War.
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2/5/2014 19:39:00   
popinloopy
Member

I would like permission, please to intertwine stories. Such as, if I were to write a story (which I might), I'd like to include something like:

I heard screams coming from the woods. Wishing I could help, I almost considered abandoning my guard post to see what was going on. Though, I had always been a loyal soldier. I just couldn't leave my post. Suddenly, I heard a voice. It screamed "Please Storm, just go!" Only cries of anguish followed. That crossed the line. I abandoned my post and hurried off in the direction of the noise. By the time I arrived, all that was left was a corpse of man, one of a werewolf, a few of vampires, and then some vampires that were still alive. In a fit of rage, I slashed away and they were gone in an instant. I took a moment to weep for the poor souls, then realized that my post was still abandoned. Two lives already lost, I was not about to let vampires get in and take many more. I rushed back, but it appeared as if I missed nothing. Out of the corner of my eye, though, I thought I saw a familiar shadow. I used my ability to detect magic, and I found faint signatures of dark, light, and all other types of known magic except void. Even Shadow magic could be found. Recognizing the familiar magic, I smiled and shot a single light his way, not harmful but showing I knew he was there. I faintly saw the outline of a grin before he leapt away.

This probably won't be in my story, but is just an example. Could I perhaps intertwine stories, if you'd all be ok with it?
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2/5/2014 20:36:26   
battlemaster25
Member

I'd be up for it. I always like being able to work with other people writing stories.

(By the way, Gale's body wouldn't be in the clearing. The vampire lord would've taken it back to the castle. Fresh corpses are full of blood, after all.)
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2/5/2014 20:37:51   
popinloopy
Member

I know, it was just an example. And I DID say the vampires were still there. Must've gotten there before they left, y'know?
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2/5/2014 20:58:18   
battlemaster25
Member

I'm contractually obligated to nitpick. Article 10, Section 4, Line 3 of the Battlemaster Code:

"The client must, under any and all circumstances, draw attention to any perceived errors regarding themselves or their characters."

Also, just a general note, expect my first proper chapter tomorrow.

< Message edited by battlemaster25 -- 2/5/2014 20:59:07 >
AQ  Post #: 20
2/5/2014 21:19:54   
flashbang
Member

@battlemaster25 . . . That's so sad. You just want to go cry in a corner, but you also want to stay and read more.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 21
2/5/2014 23:13:42   
kors
Member

Well just posted my contribution! I decided that I needed to dust off Rinia and bring her close to the place of her birth, and a zealous paladin's dream. And I comment on my character's werepyre status, after all it is said in-game that neither side likes them so why should the nameless masses of the Wolf Pack be different?
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 22
2/5/2014 23:33:48   
battlemaster25
Member

Ooh, nice job kors. Your stories are always top-notch, and that seems to hold true here. I especially like how you describe the way people speak and act in good detail, makes them seem more real.

Also, as a side note, I'm throwing my chips into the "anyone is free to use my characters" pot. I might just be using a few characters myself, it's only fair that I return the favor.
AQ  Post #: 23
2/5/2014 23:45:50   
popinloopy
Member

@kors
I already love it. Conflict between protagonists this early on? Surprising and suspenseful.
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2/6/2014 16:21:45   
battlemaster25
Member

And, Chapter I of my story has been posted. Yay!
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