Drakkoniss
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Good to know, SL9K. Thank you.
Yes, a lawyer, as were the Evil's first victims my parents and my first wife.
Thank you for the complement, Kinz.
Her sacrifice would be... 8 years before C&T? Seems about right.
Yes; Too many elipses. I fixed that problem, as you may have noticed when reading part 4.
That was both an expression of super strength and fire creation/manipultion, Jessa. Not too unlikely, when you think about it. It was not so unprovoked as you might think, as it was both done out of a sense of... justice, and in self preservation. Adrenaline can effect one's judgement, and the decision was split second. He needed to be stopped, regardless, and it was his first expression of powers. That means he had little to no control over the degree of usage.
*shrugs at the gun comment*
It's not some random pyromaniac. As I said previously in this post, that was Drakkonic Evil at work, and he had absolutely no control of his actions. I felt that was in fact quite original, and it was supposed to add a sense of mystery at the time. Got Clown guessing, at least.
You must realize his house was just burned down, his entire family other than his sister (who was not present, and he has an emotional schism between himself and), including his unborn child were just killed, and that he was helpless to stop it. That stirs up deep emotions in someone, and made him not quite pensive, so to speak.
Whims, with regards to language.
Yes, yes, more elipses.
I would like to state that currently my abode is much more complex and extravagant than it was then.
Note that this was years ago, and that MW3 wouldn't have been invented, even if the videogame community's train of thought (among other things) happened to follow the exact same line as it does in this one.
[quote*mutters* Guy needs to learn how to control his emotions. I mean, if looks really can kill, then...][/quote]
Note that I currently wear black shades. Also that emotions being what they are, and with so little time between the tragedy concerning his family and that moment, considering that fights bring out emotions significantly, and with the fact that the man was using fire.
Fire had not been only his weapon of choice within that last week.
It is a biography, Jessa; An autobiography, at that. Perhaps it is that you are more used to the norms of story writing, but regardless, I have very little experience in writing.
Do normal stories not leave a significant deal of detail for the reader to fill in? Regardless of that, I understand what you mean. It may be the earlier chapters that altered your perception of the story as a whole, as the last one had quite a bit of detail, mon cheri. I shall take that into mind, however. I was concious of the relative lack of detail in the early chapters, going in to this, anyway. I hope that is/shall be improved.
I thought there was a masculine version of Mary-Sue... But whatever. I shall look at that link shortly.
This keyboard makes it uncomfortable and difficult to type. lol (I'm typing this from a cousin's house; ;))
Sorry to have seemed to have your high hopes dashed, darling. I shall do my best to make you look back on that comment and laugh, later.
< Message edited by Drakkoniss -- 3/3/2012 21:45:35 >
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