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Eukara Vox -> Furrball Letters ~comments~ (7/13/2008 23:50:44)

Alright this is an experiment. A small attempt at my strange sense of humor. I will understand if you do not find it funny as my humor is not exactly common.

So I give you letters from my cats: Furrball Letters

Food and Sleep
Casper's AQW Experience
This was resurrected out of the files. Story is OLD.



time losh -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 1: Food and Sleep (7/14/2008 1:42:43)

Ha ha ha ha ha, oh, thats good Eukara ^^

Kitties are funny [8D]

My keyboard makes a rather nice sound when I type I think, it's not super loud clackity clack, it does alright lol



er23. -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 1: Food and Sleep (7/14/2008 1:52:52)

That got a few laughs out of me. Congratulations, you have passed my laugh test. *shakes Eukara's hand*

I just have to say, when Deuteronomy speaks, the text is sometimes rather hard to read. I think it might be better if it was changed to a different font.

My keyboard is kinda flat, since it's a laptop, but it can be kinda loud....



Eukara Vox -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 1: Food and Sleep (7/14/2008 9:43:13)

Yay! I made people laugh!

@er23: I made the font bigger, so hopefully that will help. Deuteronomy needs a more sophisticated font, as he is supposed to be the more mature of the two.

I changed the entire font. This should be better.



Amboo -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 1: Food and Sleep (7/14/2008 22:28:00)

Casper sounds fun, [:)].

You are very good at humour.



Eukara Vox -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 1: Food and Sleep (7/14/2008 23:24:58)

Awww, thank amboo. *snugs*

I hope to add a new letter set each week, of course, if RL complies.



r0de0b0y -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 1: Food and Sleep (7/14/2008 23:51:23)

Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay....Dear God, I take back everything I said, thank you for giving me a sense of humor. I'm glad I'm not a laugh-deprived shell like her and- Just joking.

I laughed. Which hurt because I just ate cake. And you've also inspired me. Well, I'm off to post your clearly copyrighted works...



jerenda -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 1: Food and Sleep (7/16/2008 1:45:24)

I laughed. Cats are my favorite animal. Them and dolphins. Anyways, in the Young Wizards series or whatever it's called (first book- So You Want to be a Wizard by Diane Duane) the cats say things, but not in so many words. They have a very unique way of speaking. You should read it, you'd like it. ^_^

Anyways, on to C&C.

quote:

...it must really annoy Him to hear her hitting the keys while she writes."
Why is "Him" capitalized?

quote:

“Impertinent kitten! I would like to see an attempt to displace me, for I am not moving.”]
*giggles*
What's with the extra ] thing?

Ah, so they do capitalize the "Him". ^_^ Nevermind my first edit, then.

Cute. I like them. They make a good pair. [:D]



Brynn Summers -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 1: Food and Sleep (8/22/2008 20:12:08)

Here is my first edit for you, my dear Eukara!

quote:

“I would not put it past her, Casper. Now if you would please remove yourself from in front of the keyboard, age before idiocy, you know.”


quote:

For some reason, the mini people are home all day, and I have come to the conclusion that they do not understand the way things are supposed to be.


quote:

Everything is just how I like it, and then you come to bed and disturb my perfection.


I really like this approach! I have always loved stories about animals especially when they are mischievous (like homeward bound)... I really want to see it keep going!



Ciaran -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 1: Food and Sleep (10/6/2008 12:41:09)

I have one acronym for you: ROFL. This is just like my previous cat (who had to be put down at the age of 13) and my dog.
"I would hit you, but you're so stupid, it wouldn't be worth it." <-- I could swear that Ashle said this a few times to Cubby.
Now it seems like Cubby, who's six now, is saying something similar to my current kitten, Rascal. His nickname is something inappropriate to this forum... he's really destructive. It's not like "you're too stupid" or anything, just like...
*Rascal attacks Cubby* "Wanna play?!"
"leave me alone, I'm tired and aching."
"Are you sure?" *Rascal attacks again*
"Yes, I'm sure. Go away." *Cubby growls*

I did find one thing that seemed off.
quote:

“I would not put it past her, Casper. Now if you would please remove yourself from the in front of the keyboard, age before idiocy, you know.”

It feels like something belongs between "the" and "in," but there's nothing there. Thought I'd point this out to you.



Ciaran -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 2: Dear AE Staff (10/7/2008 16:27:49)

Hehehe... this is definitely like a pair of cats. You're really good with the feline psyche.
I noticed that one part of the chapter, post, whatever you call it doesn't have the font or italics to indicate who's speaking. I'm guessing it's Casper, but I don't know for sure.
...Deuteronomy? What kind of a name is that for a cat?

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Eukara Vox -> RE: Furrball Letters ~comments~ Entry 2: Dear AE Staff (2/19/2013 14:03:56)

I posted one of these from WAY back. Razgriz asked me to make sure it got put up XD



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