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15cman -> RE: No Small Poetry Here CC (6/5/2009 18:00:17)
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*whew* You've got quite a few poems under your belt.I don't have time to read them all so I'll just skim.
One thing I noticed about your poems is that they are very descriptive.One example is Ebola's Grip.That's a pretty good quality, as it makes readers get a good description(if sometimes very very morbid description XD) and know exactly what your thinking as the poem unfolds.Although you use that, for lack of a better word, morbid description and the generally the same format for writing.While this is OK, it is also advisable that you try a different kind of description and and format.
For desrcription, I'm not saying go from what your writing to happy time!* I'm just trying to say go at it from a different angle.After reading(thoroughly this time :P) some of your poems that were somewhat the same in the way you write about it, I found that I got bored with it.I just stopped at some point and continued to write my review.
As for your format the only thing I can say is this:Don't let yourself fall into a general way of writing poetry.Try every way you know of writing and even every way you don't know.It's always good to get a feel for different things(examples:shape poetry is a good option if you don't know what to do, if a bit slow)
But I do like your poems.Otherwise known as school is kind of a favorite of mine, as it reminds me of MY school =P.
* (insert blanch here)
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