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Anon Y. Mous -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (9/19/2009 21:12:28)

I jes read through your latest poems. I'll just talk about "The Impossible".
I like the content. It made good points. The only thing that didn't quite feel right was that I got the feeling that it was kind of a broken up paragraph. (Lots of "that"s in that sentence.)


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KageArashi -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (9/22/2009 23:59:20)

She who writes in green,
Stands high as a queen.
With the gift of words,
like a Sheppard she herds.
Leading a generation,
through a writing vocation.
She speak her heart,
as her words depart.
Through our eyes,
it a great prize.
Which we all should keep in mind,
when our own paths we must find.
You thank you, Green_Girl,
for letting us depart with this pearl.

Ninjat Poof!
--KageArashi



Gianna Glow -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (9/29/2009 2:05:59)

Lol, sorry about the wait everyone. I'll be getting to it soon. i'm almost settled into college and will be able to pick back up writing soon! :D Expect at least one poem put up tomorrow if I'm lucky... i started a new one tonight... so I should be done with it by tomorrow.
@Brante: Thanks! I'll get to work on fixing that! I'll also keep praying for you that your life settles out.
@mistermafio: Thanks! I'm glad you liked them! I purposedly did the switch there just for a change, but I've always been kinda iffy on it. I'm gonna go back and reread it and see what I think now. :D
@anon y mous: thanks! :D Glad you liked it, and yeah, it is a little disjointed. *sigh* if i ever get a ton of free time, i'm gonna go fix a lot of my poems.
@Kage: Awww! Thanks! That was so cute!



Gianna Glow -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (9/29/2009 19:18:38)

New poem! I actually wrote this as as a homework assignment for one of my education classes... its called Teacher
Sorry, i have one more, but I didnt finish it yet...



Helixi -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (10/1/2009 9:47:07)

Like the new one, greeny.



Gianna Glow -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (10/1/2009 16:51:57)

Oops, not sure what happened there.... stupid copy 'n paste button! Teaching There....



Shreder -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (10/18/2009 21:19:48)

I just recently came across L&L, so I'm way behind everyone else, but I would like to say your poetry is great. Anyways I'm too swamped with school work to do much in the way of critiquing now, but maybe some other time.



Gianna Glow -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (11/1/2009 22:30:04)

Thanks Shreder!

Also, a note: Those of you who have noticed a lot of posts and such have disappeared. I decided to take down some of my poetry and thus had to remove all things related.



BrantePyrus -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (11/18/2009 19:10:47)

Any likelyhood of more poetry anytime soon?



Gianna Glow -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (1/16/2013 18:23:39)

New poem.

The Search



Gianna Glow -> RE: Green's Free Verse Poetry - Comments (2/28/2013 17:20:53)

New poem up. I wrote it for my english class. Its supposed to be a sonnet, meaning iambic pentameter, 14 lines, with a b a b c d c d e f e f g g rhyming pattern. It was fun to do.

Anyways, its called Never Again



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