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Baker -> Merlet (epic poem) (5/16/2009 19:39:22)

Yes, I wrote an epic poem. D: It's 20 Word pages long, so I totally understand if none of you ever reads the entire thing, but I felt I had to post it in all it's epic-ness (ha ha). I used asterisks to separate what I feel are the different scenes in the Word document, but I've posted each of those sections as a separate post in this thread so it's not such a daunting read (looks a bit silly for the first, which is just the required invocation of the Muse, but it's needed for the longer ones). Read as much or as little as you wish, and please let me know what you think about the parts you do read!

Final note: The title. I thought about the titles of well-known epics from the past (Beowulf, The Iliad, The Odyssey, etc), and none of them contained any notes about what to name an epic poem other than the fact that the hero's title should be somewhere in it! Apparently I unknowingly - I've never read the play - gave my epic poem a similar plot to Hamlet, so I decided to take advantage of the fact in my title! I'm very open to suggestions, though, so feel free to let me know if you can think of a better one.

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Baker -> RE: The Merlet (epic poem) (5/16/2009 19:41:25)

Merlet

Sing, Muse, of that most noble of princes,
Merritt, son of the king Cornelius
And the wise and ancient earth goddess Eukara.
Sing of the sport of the gods –
His journey to claim his birthright from his dreaded uncle Schuyler,
The usurper and traitor, agent of the Shadow.
Tell of the fall of the Four,
And the rise of a king.




Baker -> RE: The Merlet (epic poem) (5/16/2009 19:42:51)

The hero twirled to the right,
Swiftly tearing his sword out
And darting it forward.
His opponent,
Crouched at the far end of the now-empty tavern,
Did not flinch as he saw Merritt preparing:
He merely took a deep breath and waited for the assault.

Puzzled by his foe’s inaction but eager to defeat him,
Merritt struck forward,
Darting through the scattered tables and chairs
As he drew back for a two-handed blow.
The mighty sword,
The light from the remaining lanterns glinting off its mysterious runes and carvings,
Whooshed back and surged forward,
Aimed at the short neck of the stocky, motionless enemy.

The enemy,
Seeing the magnificent weapon parting the air directly in front of him,
Released the pent-up air in his mouth,
Ejecting along with it a long jet of flames.
Out they poured,
Licking the length of the blade as a dog licks its master,
Spreading past the hilt to play along Merritt’s sleeves.

Shocked at this sudden
Display of god-like powers,
Merritt took his concentration off the blow and slowed his weapon down.
Despite this and the hellish heat exerted upon the forged steel of the sword,
However, the blade continued uninhibited like the master ignores its pet’s affection
And drove into the neck of the fire-breather,
Slicing through muscle and vein
As the foe gasped a final sigh of disbelief before
Collapsing on the rough, filthy floor of the tavern.

Merritt relaxed at the fall of the enemy,
Thanking above all the god Io for gifting him an indestructible sword,
Before detecting the scent of burning cloth
And hurriedly smashing open and dousing his sleeve in a nearby wooden keg of ale.
This done, the hero returned to the fresh corpse and searched it.

Like a mole darting through its burrows and tunnels,
Merritt rifled through the pockets and pouches of the fire-breather’s garments,
Gathering together and examining everything he discovered.
He explored every crevice, nook, and cranny in the hunt for his treasure.
The many folds of clothing contained ten coins of varying mints and values, crumbs,
Scraps of paper, shavings of wood and metal, lint, two quills, and a plain dirk.
None of these, however, caught the attention of the searcher.
Although Merritt knew not exactly what he searched for,
The god Io told him it would be an object of the gods,
So he continued to rummage.
Frustrated after a time at his failure –
And unhappily considering the possibility that this fire-breather was not one of the Four –
Merritt ripped open the dead man’s bloodied shirt, and
He finally spotted it:

Secured around the fire-breather’s headless and bloody neck
Rested a large ring of keys of varying size and material,
All of them completely unremarkable and commonplace –
Except for one.
A small, dark key,
Apparently forged of some sort of durable metal,
Rested deep amongst the others.
Normally such an item would not pique the interest of the hero –
As a wandering and questing man, locks meant little to him –
But a supernatural being clearly took part in the creation of this particular key.
It held no constant shape,
Twisting and transforming ominously,
And, lifting it up to his eye,
The hero found himself lost in the depth of its absolute darkness.

No common darkness seized a man’s attentions like the darkness of the key;
Like the eyes of a lover
Or the vast emptiness of the night sky it ensnared Merritt,
Who barely escaped its grip before he lost himself.
Tearing his eyes away,
The hero felt sure that this key would be vital in the battles to come,
So he mimicked the fire-breather by
Hanging it closely around his neck like a precious necklace.

He retrieved his bloodied sword from the scuffed floor of the tavern,
Wiping it on the dead man’s body then sheathing it,
And wrapped his jacket and cloak tightly around his body
Before slipping out the back entrance of the lifeless tavern and into the night.




Baker -> RE: The Merlet (epic poem) (5/16/2009 19:43:51)

The gods gathered around the great game board of the world,
Peering down upon the innumerable pieces
That drifted across the mountains and valleys, rivers and lakes, oceans and seas, plains
And deserts, forests and jungles, and towns and cities of their domain.
Here and there glowed tiny sparks of light,
Flitting amongst the dull background of humanity.
These were the gods and their heavenly-touched chosen ones,
And the deities seated around the board watched them
With particular interest.

On this day, all but one bright spark passed largely unnoticed by the assembled company.
The god’s eternal board represented Merritt,
Son of an earth goddess,
As a small green spark floating gently in the eastern kingdom of Tyl.
The board only granted the great ones a limited and far-off view of the world
(Which forced them to employ other methods to gain more exact information),
But all the players knew that Merritt and the god Io had just won another victory.

Merritt fought for his birthright and honor,
Traveling distant lands seeking out his enemies and the clues of the gods.
The dread-duke Schuyler years before had murdered the hero’s father,
King of Arundel and his own brother,
Employing four mercenaries and warriors to seize the throne for himself,
And Merritt quested to destroy these four agents and end the reign of his traitorous uncle.
To achieve this feat,
The hero required the assistance of the gods –
The beings that held dominion over the fates of all things.

Eukara, Merritt’s mother and ancient duchess of the earth,
Convinced the gods to interfere in the struggle,
But only by suggesting a God’s Game:
That most dangerous of contests ever conceived.
The great ones sported not by fighting, not by dueling, nor even by debating;
Instead, they gambled.
They gambled their many powers and abilities,
Risking even the right to live among the great gods,
And constantly sought to better their positions at the expense of their enemies.

Two such enemies,
The Lord Io and his longtime rival –
A mysterious deity known only as “the Shadow” –
Supported the opponents in the struggle between Merritt and his uncle.
Merritt’s mother,
An important god in her own right,
Had told Io of her son’s quest,
And one day he had proclaimed a new Game to the other great ones.




Baker -> RE: The Merlet (epic poem) (5/16/2009 19:44:58)

Io had leapt forward in his gilded throne,
His short, fair curls of hair shivering as
He firmly knocked his jewel-incrusted scepter on the ground and proclaimed a challenge:
“Lords of lords, kings of kings, and fathers of fathers,
I today challenge any one of you to a game upon this board,” he had begun,
Snatching the attention of the room with his flattery and important, resonating voice.
“Take notice of the kingdom of Arundel,
One of the many to be found in the luscious and beautiful west of this world.
Her king, Cornelius, has just fallen upon the field of battle,
Mysteriously stricken down amongst his own troops.
This death, however unfortunate it may be, presents us with an intriguing struggle.

“The king’s only son is far from home,
Forging a name for himself on the anvil of heroism and solitude.
The boy is a goddess’s daughter,
A true son of the earth,
And his mother Eukara recognizes her son’s chance for greatness.
The throne is his to take,
And she knows that he will gain glory and eternal fame no matter the result of his return,
So she presents his struggle as a gift to the almighty gods of heaven.

“The only and powerful brother of the deceased Cornelius,
The dread-duke Schuyler,
Forcibly holds the throne in the prince’s absence,
And there is sure to be a great struggle if the prince returns to his kingdom.
As in all struggles between men,
Someone will take the spoils of this war,
Someone will gain as others lose, and the mighty will struggle for dominance.
What say you, lords of men?
Shall we grace these heroes and mortals with our bets, partnership, and presences?”

A hush had settled over the hall like a vulture hovering over a meal:
It circled above the great ones’ heads,
Surveying its surroundings before gathering its wings and diving down,
Sinking its talons into the calculating minds and hearts of the assembled host.
So hushed, the savvy contenders eyed each other,
Reading and considering the faces of their neighbors.
The contenders –
All by necessity veteran cheats and swindlers –
Knew that this game would embroil all of them in some way
(any worthy god has his hand in everything),
But the ceremony and tradition of the bout required maneuvering and jostling.

Finally, the plotting ground to a halt,
And a figure glided into the center of the hall.
Like a great deep Shadow,
The figure’s edges were blurry and undefined;
Its form shifted and changed as the onlookers gazed into its vast, deep form.
The Shadow was different than the other deities.
Unlike most, it did not reach the heavens through battle or birth:
As all shades do, it merely appeared and vanished of its own accord,
Its presence constantly felt but never heard or understood.
The silhouette did not speak,
Instead causing its speech to appear in the minds of others,
And even the stoutest of gods cringed as the nothingness crept into their thoughts.

“I take that challenge, lord of love and death,” thought the figure.
“This dread-duke must contain a spark of myself in him to be so truly wicked,
And I await his victory over the heir and his nurturing mother.”

Io, disturbed by the speech bouncing through his head but anticipating the challenge,
Smiled warmly,
His ageless face crinkling with barely-concealed excitement and glee.
He and the Shadow clashed the most of any beings,
Struggling for domination in everything from the stars twinkling in the sky
To the fish navigating the sea and the dust floating on the wind’s currents,
But neither ever won a clear victory.
Here, he was certain, their feud would finally be resolved,
Perhaps in his favor.

The other gods chose their sides,
Gathering behind the strong-armed Io and the shifty Shadow.
They placed their bets –
Powers, abilities, forms, dominions, kingdoms, temples, and sacrifices
All thrown upon the eternal game board like coins on a knotted gambling table,
And jeered and boasted about their impending victory.
At the same time, Io and the Shadow threw in their own, more personal lots.

The lord of love agreed to risk his dominion over the power of death,
Turning the doomed scythe of the reaper over to the shade that so coveted it.
Meanwhile, the dark one gambled his right to live among the gods,
Agreeing that his defeat would mean his banishment from the heavens.
The rules were certain:
No gods could directly interfere,
Limiting themselves to remaining detached, neutral observers of the affairs of man.
Merritt’s journey would lead him first to destroy the four supernatural beings
Hired by his uncle to aid in the murder of the hero’s father,
Gaining a particular item
(each planted by the gods)
From each victory that would help him defeat his uncle at last.

First came the indestructible armor.
The ultimate protection from all physical and mortal attacks,
The armor was forged originally for Io himself,
And only its incredible light weight surpassed its complete protection.
As a thing of the gods,
Its sheen never wore,
And it could bear no scratches or dents.

Fittingly, Merritt’s next item was an unbreakable sword,
Tempered over the fires of the sun
And carved with ancient and powerful runes ensuring its strength and slicing force.
Adultus, god of smithies and weapons and an ally of the Shadow,
Contributed this blade to the Game,
Reluctantly relinquishing for the sake of the contest
One of the greatest weapons ever forged.

The third item,
A key crafted by the Shadow of his own nightmarish substance,
Transformed to unlock all doors
And allow entry into any space.

The final treasure the hero needed to gather himself:
The blood of the beast the Pheron,
Blood which granted the drinker invisibility until the consumption of ordinary water.
Io gifted a small unbreakable vial to Merritt
That would contain and preserve the liquid until the hero required it.

Despite these oaths and rules, however,
Both sides knew from the start that the game would change as the situation changed,
And that well-timed and discreet cheating was a requirement.
The gods had gathered their jeweled thrones around the vast playing board,
Feigning relaxation and detachment as the pieces slid into place…




Baker -> RE: The Merlet (epic poem) (5/16/2009 19:45:58)

Merritt rested gently on a mossy and rotting log,
Allowing his overused muscles to loosen as he basked in the warm glow of the sun,
And looked out over the narrow brook chuckling past him.
Reflected onto the azure water in front of him,
The hero’s olive skin shone back the soft rays of the sun,
His sandy brown hair flipped in the gentle breeze gliding through the surrounding forest,
And his shocking blue eyes flashed like the spark of greatness buried inside him.
His bare chest,
Its perfection marred only by the bitter scars and wounds of a hunter and a warrior,
Rose and fell steadily as his sharp mind drifted through the waves of his memories,
Riding the waves of his successes and dreams
Before tumbling over and over again into the sand at his failures.

He thought of his journey of the past years,
Of the trials passed and still lying ahead,
And of the gratifying revenge that awaited him at the end of the road.
Three of the Four were defeated,
Their evil souls banished from this world and their gifts taken.
The invincible sword and armor lay nearby,
Wrapped in durable cloth to protect their impeccable surfaces from the dirt and sun,
And the key rested coolly against his scarred chest.
All that remained was collection of the mystical life-blood of his final enemy,
Followed by the spilling of his traitorous uncle’s blood into damp stones of his dark hall.

Suddenly, the earth beneath Merritt interrupted his meditation like a bear in bloodlust,
Ferociously growling and roaring as it rolled and shook.
Its jagged teeth –
Various lichen-covered rocks concealed among the trees –
Gnashed, and the mouth of the beast
Threatened to swallow the olive-skinned hero as he stubbornly remained perched.
He knew much about the myths and theatrics the heavenly ones used to scare man,
So he prepared himself for his mother, an earth goddess, to appear.

The earthquake ground to a halt,
And a woman’s form gradually materialized in a protruding rock.
The woman’s distinctive features formed an exotic and unusual beauty,
Offering elegance and splendor while hinting at vast power and ancient intelligence.
Merritt recognized his mother immediately,
But her presence temporarily robbed even his lungs of their breath.

“My son,” the goddess began in her gravely and firm voice,
“It is wonderful to see you again.”

“And you, my mother;
Too rarely do you make time for your mortal son,” he said,
Rising from the log and allowing a slight smile to grace his face
Before clutching her close and touching his lips to her soft, rounded cheek.

“So you think, loved one, but we gods talk and see even more of you than you know.
You do well in your quest,
And appear to nearly be ready to seize your revenge and birthright,
But do not think things will be easy.

“The Shadow is worried by your success,
Fearful that he will lose his bet and be forever disgraced,
So he comes this night to rob you of your armor.
Do not fight him –
For he will surely destroy you and happily be rid of this game –
And allow him to take the plate as you feign sleep.
Even the great Io dares not directly challenge the Shadow and risk a war,
But he will endeavor to steal back the armor and return it to you.”

Understanding the danger of attempting to fight a god,
The olive-skinned hero nodded and acknowledged his mother’s advice:
“Yes, mother, surely you speak wisely.
This Shadow appears to be unlike any mortal foe of mine,
And I dare not risk a fight with him.
I shall let him do as he wills and pray for Io’s assistance.”

“Excellent, son,” praised the mother goddess.
“Your next enemy is a creature of the darkness in the light:
He cannot be seen by human eyes even in the bright sunlight.
This foe dwells in the deepest and darkest region of the Kalindar Forest,
Residing among the wolves and bears and other beasts,
Meaning that your journey to locate him will be perhaps as dangerous as your battle.
You are lucky, however,
For Falerin, the lord of the winds and patron of travelers,
Offers you safe passage on a light, low-flying cloud.
He shall come for you in three days time.
And remember,
Once you kill the beast,
Collect his blood in the vial given to you by the gods.
This will protect the contents,
Also ensuring that you will never run out of the precious potion.”

“Thank you, dear mother,
For your help in my quest for honor and vengeance.
I will see you, gods willing, after this fight,” said the hero,
Embracing his mother again before she smiled a warm goodbye and vanished.
The ground rumbled again,
And she was gone.




Baker -> RE: The Merlet (epic poem) (5/16/2009 19:47:13)

That night, the Shadow swooped down from the heavens like a crow.
It descended down upon the sandy-haired hero’s camp in the absolute darkness,
Eyeing Merritt’s motionless form huddled in blankets
Like a scavenger watches predators
As it carefully extracted the impeccable armor from its cloth covering
And replaced it with an exact replica.
The deed done,
The Shadow hurriedly wrapped the armor once again and
Stowed the true armor somewhere deep within its flowing form
Before taking to the air again with eerie silence.
The Shadow could not and did not smile,
But, if possible,
Its darkness deepened a shade as it hovered away from the scene of its wicked act.




Baker -> RE: The Merlet (epic poem) (5/16/2009 19:48:28)

Merritt stepped off the wispy cloud and onto the solid ground once again,
Breathing out a sigh of relief as he did so,
And turned to watch the small white puff of air zoom back up into the sky.
His carriage had arrived late that morning,
Containing on top of it a polished plate of armor and a note that simply read “Io.”
The hero assumed that his patron had retrieved the indestructible armor,
Eagerly securing it over his chest before casting the Shadow’s replica into the dirt
And seating himself and his few items lightly on the cloud.

Now, after a long, unnerving journey high above even the birds,
Merritt prepared for his foray into the unknown forest that they ahead of him.
He hung his sword around his waist,
Adjusted his armor to ride more comfortably on his chest,
And set off on a path leading into the forest.

At first, the path took the olive-skinned hero through a lightly wooded region:
The trees were short and young,
Full of new, green leaves and separated from each other by dozens of feet in areas.
Recently fallen leaves and branches sparsely decorated the dirt of the forest floor,
Which sporadically crunched as woodland creatures wandered through the woods.
Sunlight shone through the openings between the trees,
Illuminating the squirrels, dove, jays, cardinals, eagles, deer, porcupines, rabbits,
Weasels, and other creatures dwelling in and among the life-giving trees.
The hero felt no danger in this part of the forest,
Enjoying the vibrancy of the wildlife even as he readied for armed contest.

As he continued into the forest, however,
Things soon changed.
The trees –
Much taller and thicker than the young trees on the outskirts of the forest –
Grew closer and closer together,
Shutting out the sunlight with their thick, overlapping branches and canopies.
A thick coat of dead leaves and rotting matter coated the ground of the forest,
Concealing long, thick roots that made walking hazardous.
Less and less animals scurried through the undergrowth,
Preferring to remain high in the trees or totally hidden from the trespassing hero.
In the lengthening shadows,
Merritt began to spot the shapes of larger animals and predators,
And he often found his hand straying to the hilt of his sword
At the crash of a branch or the howl of a beast.
Finally, after several false alarms,
The hero found himself in the centermost area of the forest.

He looked around him,
Expecting to see some indication of his arrival at the battleground,
But he saw nothing but the thick trees encircling him,
Heard only the far-off shrieks of the tree-dwelling birds,
Felt only the spongy leaf matter under his feet,
And smelled only the salty sweat crawling down his forehead and face.

Then it attacked.

Out of nowhere,
Merritt felt a sharp, stinging pain on the side of his head,
And lights flashed in his eyes and blinded him.
He could not hear, either, due to the ringing in his ears,
So temporarily forgot where he was.
The blows continued to rain all about the hero’s body and head,
Glancing off his armor at times but usually thudding into his arms, legs, and skull.
Swipes both blunt and sharp struck Merritt,
Evidence that the beast possessed claws of some kind as well as brute strength.
A jagged pair of teeth even found their way into the muscled flesh of his arm,
Sinking in tightly before he managed to dislodge them with the help of a nearby tree.
Soon enough, he found himself so unable to resist the foe that he did the one thing left:
He ran.

He ran like a bull,
Stumbling through the layered undergrowth as he sank into piles of leaves,
Barreling into trees, and
Tripping on protruding branches and roots and rotting tree trunks,
But building up so much momentum that he could not be stopped.
As he ran, the hero’s senses trickled back to him he and
Listened for the sound of an invisible pursuer.
Hearing none –
And beginning to formulate a plan for seeing and defeating an invisible enemy –
Merritt slowed his sprint to a jog.
He continued to run until he returned to a lighter area of the forest,
Where he waited.

The sandy-haired hero knew from the gods’ instructions that his enemy,
Once it tasted the blood of its prey,
Would not abandon the hunt until it killed or was seriously injured itself.
He felt confident that his opponent would track his scent and blood to this place,
Ducking and hiding among the trees as he came.
The hero therefore decided to prepare a system to warn him of an approaching enemy.

Merritt began by gathering dozens of dry sticks and branches from all around him,
Setting them in positions around the small circle of trees he hid in;
This way, the sound of cracking and breaking twigs would betray an intruder
And give the hero a chance to spot his concealed enemy.
To finish his trap,
The hero opened a small cut on his arm,
Spilling a large amount of blood on his shirt.
He then removed and placed this shirt on a rock in the center of the small glade,
Secreting himself behind a large tree nearer to the exit of the forest.
He assumed the creature would approach from the center of the woods
And chase after the pungent smell of blood emanating from the bloodstained garment;
Once it did so,
The olive-skinned one would pounce,
Skewering his foe upon the broadsword dangling from his waist.

Things were not so easy for the mighty hero, however.
The monster did come charging into the trees after Merritt’s scent,
But it soon recognized a trap and the hero heard it tear off again through the trees.
When it returned several minutes later,
It came much more cautiously,
Lightly padding out of the trees and skirting the clearing;
Only the snapping of twigs and light squelching paws in the mud betrayed its approach.
As the noises came closer and closer to Merritt’s hiding place,
His heart beat faster and faster.
Like a war drum leading men into battle
It began slowly,
Adding beats and speed until it roared and bounced through the hero’s head,
Inspiring him to plunge into a vicious duel.

Then, the hero heard the noises of the beast’s approach came to a halt a dozen feet away.
He jerked his head in the direction of the last noises,
But saw only the trees and plants of the forest.
Worried, Merritt scanned the ground in the hopes of seeing tracks
Or something else that would reveal the location of his opponent.
The hero’s hopes were dashed –
No tracks rested among the dirt and mud,
And he was still blind against this foe.
He examined the ground again,
This time looking slightly away from the location of the most recent noises.

There he saw an unexpected shadow,
That of a man-sized, two-legged beast.
The uneven edges of the shadow told the hero that the Pheron truly was a monster,
Covered in dense hair that protected it from the weapons of man and animal alike.
As it stood,
Its shadow betrayed the twisting of its head
As it searched for the concealed hero with eyes, nose, and ears.

Sensing his only chance to surprise an enemy accustomed to surprising others,
The hero sprinted out of hiding,
Jerking his sword from its sheathe
While he darted across the short distance separating him from his foe.
He leapt into his invisible opponent,
Violently thrusting his sword into the air he thought contained the beast.
The strike missed as the enemy turned,
Only scraping the monster’s side before it rammed into Merritt’s sword arm
And caused him to drop the weapon out of pain and surprise.

It tumbled to the earth as Merritt gripped the shaggy arm of his unseen adversary,
Latching on as it struggled to break free by pounding his chest with its free claw;
Grimly, the hero again praised the god Io for the great strength of his armor
Before tightening his vice-grip.
He spun to his right,
Dragging the monster with him and then releasing as his arm stretched out.
This mighty tug set the hero’s foe crashing into a nearby tree,
Howling in pain as it smashed into the substantial trunk and fell among the roots.
Merritt,
Caught off-balance by his great exertion,
Also fell to the ground.
He felt a slight shudder beneath him –
His mother could never stay out of his affairs –
And looked up just in time to see several huge, gnarled limbs fall from the canopy
To bring the beast’s howling to a violently sudden end.
As the last pulses in the beast’s small brain ended,
Its heart stopped pumping the magical blood through its veins,
And it gradually came into view.

A curious mixture of bear and wolf and human sprawled in the dust before the hero,
Wickedly-pointed teeth bared and face fixed in a final expression of rage
Even as its soul departed the cruelties of this world for the heavens.
Dense brown hair grew all over the creature except for on its face,
Which remained much like a human’s but for the teeth and elongated, snout-like nose,
And the claws protruding from the ends of its sinewy arms and legs were long daggers.

Merritt picked himself up off the floor of the forest –
Retrieving his sword as he did so –
And walked over to the corpse of the last of the Four.
He took his time in crouching to collect the incredible blood resting in its veins,
Using a long hunting knife to open a cut in the Pheron’s arm
Before taking the vial from his pocket and placing it on the wound.
Curiously, the blood itself was transparent,
Giving the hero the appearance that he was simply collecting water from a small stream
Rather than extracting the blood of a slain foe.
This illusion,
He realized,
Would make it easier to consume the liquid when he needed it,
So he welcomed the curious development.

Soon enough, the small vial could hold no more.
The hero tightly plugged it closed,
Hanging it around his neck alongside the miraculous key still resting there.
Merritt rose to his feet,
Rearranged his weapon and dirtied clothing,
And gave the monster one last look as he strode out of the forest,
Already hatching plans for his return home to Arundel.




Baker -> RE: The Merlet (epic poem) (5/16/2009 19:50:11)

Merritt crept down the long, unadorned hall,
Listening for the sounds of an approaching guard or maid or castle resident,
But he heard nothing.
Inexplicably, the castle walls appeared to contain not a soul,
As the last people the hero had seen were the three guards in the gatehouse.
Aside from the general appearance –
Solid stone walls, high ceilings complete with huge wooden beams, large fireplaces,
Elaborate hanging tapestries, and fine cloths and rugs –
The castle did not bear much resemblance to the home of Merritt’s childhood.

No renowned foreign chefs labored in the vast, empty kitchen;
No bards roamed the halls singing ditties of great heroes and lords of the past;
And no great heroes perched at the highest table in the dining hall,
Displaying themselves for all to see.
Instead, the place seemed abandoned,
As if all its residents had spontaneously decided to leave:
Dirty pots and pans in the kitchen stood stacked and ready for cleaning,
Fires smoldered and guttered in the fireplaces,
And the royal hunting dogs in the stables remained tied to their posts.

The hero continued down the hall,
Marveling at the sensation of living and walking without seeing one’s own feet or arms.
He had departed the forest after defeating the last of the Four,
Again traveling by way of the wind god’s cloud,
Heading directly to the castle of his forefathers.
He did not want his uncle’s agents to alert the dread-duke of the death of the Four
And the return of his vengeful nephew,
For the hero knew that the element of surprise remained his greatest advantage
Against the treacherous usurper.
Upon arriving outside the town resting at the base of the huge, looming castle
That served as the seat of the prosperous kingdom,
Merritt had immediately swallowed a generous volume of the magical blood
And prayed once more that Io would see him through battle.

The sandy-haired hero again whispered prayers to the lord of death and love,
Asking for help in finally winning sweet revenge
As he continued his journey through the maze of hallways.
Like a garden maze, the corridors’ walls all held identical decorations and hangings;
The same patterns twisted along the rugs lining the floors of the passageway;
Even the suits of ancient armor against the walls seemed to be spaced at equal intervals.
This maze held no end, however,
Never ceased curling and bending and branching off into yet more halls and rooms.
Finally, though, Merritt rounded a corner and walked into the largest hall he had seen.

Its ceiling was higher than the rest,
Its walls stood twice as far apart as others,
And it ended at two massive doors held onto the wall by hinges the size of a small child.
These doors were constructed of dark, knotted wood –
Clearly several inches thick and impossibly heavy –
Held shut by an odd triangular lock set squarely between the two doors.
In all this travels,
Merritt had never gazed upon such a lock,
So he counted himself fortunate once again for the treasures taken from the Four.
Two rigid guards garbed in the blood red and black uniforms of the dread-duke
Obstructed the entrance into the room beyond the doors,
And, upon seeing this danger,
The hero bounded back around the corner from which he came.
He waited for the shouts of alarm to ring out
Before remembering his invisibility and sighing in relief.

Merritt slinked black around the corner,
Eyeing the guards as he considered his next action.
He was not worried about opening the large doors –
The ever-changing key around his neck would ensure his passage –
But he paused at the notion of killing the innocent guards,
Especially because he would require the army’s support to rule the kingdom
After his uncle’s death.
His hesitation did not last for long, however,
And he quickly drew his sword and strolled down the hall.

The olive-skinned hero aimed his strike for a time,
Ensuring that both men would die before either realized the danger
By swinging his rune-covered sword so that it struck both men in the Adam’s apple.
Two puffs of red mist followed the blade as it slowed and returned to the hero’s sheathe,
Followed by two small gurgles as the men slipped silently to the dark, cold stones.

Merritt frowned at the wanton loss of life,
But knew it necessary to the quest so grimly stepped over their bodies.
He faced the door,
Trying the handle on the off-chance that it might be unlocked:
No such luck.
Accordingly, the hero blindly fumbled around in his shirt,
Tracing the string around his neck down to the ring of keys dangling on his chest.
He removed the Shadow’s key from the hoop,
Shivering as its murky black surface came into contact with his fingers,
And slid it into the large, unusual lock on the door.

The key slowly expanded to occupy the empty space around it,
Then, as it turned itself in the lock,
Merritt heard a low click rise out of the depths of the door.
Task accomplished and purpose fulfilled,
The Shadow’s key hardened instantaneously,
Showing again the god’s mistrust of even their favorites.
Losing the useful key worried the hero,
But he trusted his mother and the great god Io to guide him through the coming clash.

He slowly pushed open the immense doors,
Forced to apply all of his substantial strength to a task designed for many men.
Once the door was open large enough for his passage,
Merritt slipped through it and into the hall beyond as the door creaked shut behind him.

“Noble and honest people of Arundel,
Today we celebrate the memory of old King Cornelius,
Our heroic lord cowardly cast down by the heathen tribes in battle five years ago.
Since then,
His brother Schuyler has ruled the kingdom with benevolence, piety, and generosity,
Honoring those, noble and peasant alike, departed from us,” proclaimed a voice,
Launching into a haughty and praising speech about the great King Schuyler.
Searching the long, high-ceilinged hall he had just entered,
Merritt found the speaker standing on a stage occupying the far side of the room.

Between the hero and the stage,
A dozen tables spanned the several hundred feet of the room.
Hundreds of people sat at these tables,
Enjoying the broad array of food and drink scattered among the tables:
Turkey, chicken, geese, dove, pheasant, deer, beef, antelope, swine, bear, fish, squash,
Bread, broccoli, asparagus, corn, beans, lettuce, cabbage, onions, cheeses, and more
All found their way into the enormous feast.
Staggering amounts of food –
Coupled with dozens of different drinks –
Threatened to break the tables and servants ran to and fro bringing ever more fare,
And cutlery clattered and glasses clinked as diners from nobles to farmers to maids ate.

A smaller, equally laden table rested on the stage,
Inhabited only by distinguished lords and ladies of the court.
At the head of the table sat a man donning an elaborate jewel-encrusted crown.
He was slight,
No more than average height and weight,
But even from afar Merritt sensed a presence about him.
Despite the smile painted on his face,
The dread-duke gave off those around him a feeling of – at best – uneasiness.
A cruel scar starting below his eye and running to his ear spoiled a handsome face,
Which featured stark blue eyes, salt-and-pepper hair, and an unremarkable nose,
And his stare made its targets avert their eyes and shuffle their chairs away from his gaze.
The chair at the end opposite the duke sat empty,
For, as Merritt knew from his early years in the castle,
No woman could stand that stare for her entire life, regardless of the man’s power.

While Merritt stood and watched the banquet continue,
His uncle rose from the table and approached the speaker’s podium.
As if on cue,
Even the loudest diners cut off their conversations and craned their necks to see the duke.

“Welcome, lords and ladies, farmers and fishermen, maids and nurses,
To my humble gathering!
It is a pleasure to see you here enjoying the celebration of my passed brother,” he began,
His light and cheery voice surprising the sandy-haired hero,
Who marveled at the man’s two-facedness.
The speech continued,
But Merritt felt his stored anger over his father’s murder begin to swell up.
He decided to attack then and there regardless of the armed guards standing at every exit,
Striking down the traitor in front of the hero’s rightful subjects.

Merritt walked towards the stage,
Skirting the tables and revelers as he marched determinedly.
The hero reached the stage at last,
Stepping lightly across the raised wooden surface
To prevent his boots from clacking as they met the polished floor.
He strode all the way over to the podium at which his uncle still rambled,
And came close enough that he could smell the onions on the dread-duke’s breath.

Merritt seriously considered drawing his sword and ending things then and there;
However, he knew that doing so would not serve his purposes:
A hero must battle,
Not murder.

Instead, the olive-skinned hero bounded over to the nearby royal table,
Removing a goblet of water and throwing the contents down his throat.
Swallowing, the hero felt a tingling sensation that began in his throat and spread
As parts of Merritt’s body became visible.

A murmur in the crowd became a scream as the diners caught sight of the hero,
Who appeared to be the young King Cornelius they saw in tapestries around the castle;
So similar were the son’s looks to his father’s that many thought a ghost had appeared.
Still others assured those around them that the duke had planned all of this –
A mock appearance by the very man they feasted in honor of –
To amuse and entertain the audience.

The vengeful son dispelled these ideas as he whipped out his sword with a flourish,
Pointing it at his stunned and motionless uncle as he declared:
“I am Merritt, son of Cornelius and Eukara.
With the great god Io as my witness,
I have come to destroy you,
Traitorous uncle,
And take the kingdom that is rightfully mine.”

The dread-duke’s mouth dropped open at the hero’s bold proclamation,
But, much to the excitement of the spellbound revelers,
He soon regained his composure and his mouth twisted into a wicked smile.
“Ah, Prince Merritt.
I wondered for the longest time when the day of your return would come.
What took you so long? Too afraid to fight an old man such as myself?” he mocked,
Stepping from behind the podium and pulling out his own weapon.
This action caused the guards –
Cautiously approaching ever since the hero’s materialization –
To replace their own weapons and watch the events enfolding in front of them.

Their rest was not to last long, however,
As Merritt roared and charged at the traitor.
At the same time,
The hero’s mother shook the ground with the force of several earthquakes,
Convincing finally all the partygoers that this fight was more than a show.
They ran in droves for the doors,
Crushing others under the stampede of bodies in their haste.
The earthquake continued to rage,
Knocking over tables, plates, goblets, statues, tapestries, and paintings,
But the hero and his foe clashed nonetheless.

The ferocity of Merritt’s first attacks surprised the dread-duke,
Who was hard-pressed to stop the blows,
But the vengeful hero soon slowed as his rage subsided into determination and resolve.
He focused his attacks carefully,
Hammering an area over and over again before shifting targets with lightning-fast speed,
And found himself on the defensive when his uncle did the same.
Back and forth they struck,
Thrusting, slashing, beating, stabbing, and twisting,
Without any change in advantage.
Sparks flew and small cuts appeared as sword touched sword and body;
The duel continued.

The two fought in a similar manner,
Defensive at times and exploratory as they searched for the key to defeating their enemy,
And both were foiled by an opponent prepared for such tactics –
No prods or tests revealed weaknesses in technique or armor.

Merritt stepped back to parry a blow from the dread-duke and,
As he did,
He heard a loud pop in the high ceiling above him.
Looking up, he saw an enormous glass and metal chandelier
(dislodged, no doubt, by the earthquake shaking the very foundations of the castle)
Break from the ceiling and plummet to the floor.
It fell like a raindrop from the sky,
Light reflecting off the crystal like sunlight passing through falling water.
The chandelier landed five feet from Merritt with a crash that rebounded through the hall.
Glass and metal shards splashed out from the adornment as it shattered,
Showering the duke as he ran forward to strike Merritt again,
And the hero knew his chance to end the fight had come.

He sprinted forward and drove his sword in front of him,
Catching his shocked uncle in the side of his torso and twisting the blade.
The runes on the weapon bathed in red
As they sliced through sinew and bone as if through butter.
The dread-duke –
His entire side ripped open by the mortal strike –
Thumped bodily into the wood and did not rise.
When the body at last thudded to the stage floor,
Merritt’s mother ceased her earthquake.

The hero,
At last watching his uncle fall and be still,
Experienced no joy at the death of another of his kin,
But rather a sense of relief washed over him.
With this final death,
The killing could finally come to an end –
Or at least pause for a time.
The new king looked down upon his dying uncle for a final time
Then turned his heel to look out over the ruins of the hall as he thought about his future:
A new life after the death of many, a new challenge after the games of the gods.

Standing occupied with his thoughts,
The hero did not see the Shadow enter the hall.
It entered through the high ceiling
And flew directly to the dread-duke’s side.
The Shadow lifted the man out of the growing pool of blood around him,
Virtually carrying him behind the motionless hero.
It summoned a black dagger out of the air,
Placing it in the dying duke’s hand
And forcing the hand towards the false armor guarding Merritt’s back.
(The death of both men at each other’s hands would mean a draw with Io,
Which the Shadow saw as its only chance to save itself from banishment.)

Merritt felt a slight poke in his back,
Turning around to see his uncle standing unsteadily behind him,
A dagger held loosely in a lifeless hand while blood continued to gush from his wound.
Obviously he had tried to kill Merritt out of spite,
But Io’s armor had defeated him in his final effort.
The Shadow stood just beyond the defeated duke,
Not moving out of disbelief or anger –
Merritt could not tell which.
The hero swiftly drew his sword and swung it into and through his uncle’s neck,
Sheathing the weapon as he remembered his mother’s advice about the Shadow’s power.

There was a loud crack near Merritt as the great god Io appeared.
He bore the scythe traditional of the death god,
And gathered the duke’s soul before the Shadow tried anything else
To strike down the new king.
This done, he clapped Merritt firmly on the back, saying,
“I declare this game officially completed,
Myself the victor.
The hero Merritt has defeated his uncle and all four of his evil agents around this world,
Doing so without undue assistance from any supernatural beings,
And he has taken his birthright for himself.
This means that you,
The one known only as the Shadow,
Are here and forthwith banished from the home of the gods in the heavens,
Confined to the earth and whatever levels of hell suit your kind.
May you never trouble god or man ever again.”

Io then turned to Merritt,
Thanking the hero for assisting in his great victory
And giving him the blessings of the great ones.
The god glanced around at the hall with its scenes of death and complete destruction,
Admiringly murmured, “What a game,” and departed again with another resounding pop.

The hero stood looking at the Shadow for a time,
Turning as he heard the sound of Io reappearing.
The god said,
“Oh, and I want my armor back,”
So Merritt began to remove the plate given to him by Io.
Seeing this, the god shook his head, saying,
“Not you, hero, him,”
And staring at the Shadow.

The Shadow slowly retrieved a polished, unblemished armor from within its robes
And handed it over.
Io took the plate,
Giving Merritt a wink and a wry smile before vanishing into the air.




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