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Acient J -> (ED) Loner: Comments (1/15/2011 15:55:10) (ED) Loner

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luop70 -> RE: (ED) Loner: Comments (5/12/2011 18:09:01) fanstastic so far. cant wait for the new ones... Also you should have it in the next story that the "Creators" as i call them who made the virtual reality world are working against him. Like he was not supposed to be made the way he was. That all mages were a mutation. The creators would send in the beasts that they had made to destory him and all mages. But one problem would happen. All the beasts would die from the mages power... As i said earlier GREAT JOB. Luop70 Out

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AgentLyre -> RE: (ED) Loner: Comments (8/2/2011 14:24:51) Yes, I would really like to read more of this one. You really made your audience feel for the character Gremlin. Mind if I ask if you placed this on deviantArt yet? You'll get more feedback when you talk to the battleon group members there. So far so good!

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