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Mritha -> RE: (DF) Tales of the First Togmancer discussion (4/21/2011 0:24:56)
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Copper was too busy planning a strategy with his pet to listen to Mr. Mystery. He tested the memtal of the Pac-Muncher.
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2 years ago, he was going to Oaklore to help Sir Ano(He never did get the name pun) when Rolith
Should be a space where it is underlined
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Now, Copper knew everything about togs, from how to moroph into them to how to speak togese.
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The locker, nada.
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By the time it got into all the uses you could get out of the elemental orb of energy, the strange togs weree long gone, out for the count, brainfrozen.
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This time I'm not going to get something in my face!- He then heldd up his longtog, which automatically swallowed Djilbo's head
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Copper took advantage of the situation by punching Str'gon in every part, every part, I stress tosay, of his body with a musculous dravir arm.
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-So, what are you going to donow, except for be the most powerful Togvirmancer around?
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One hour later, Artix was chopping undead with glee, completely forgettinghis lossagainst Copper.
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So saying,he mailed it to Warlic's crystal ball and continued on his round.
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Then he went over to Oaklore to visit rolith and show him about his new powers.
Rolith
To make it a little more obvious to tell where one chapter ends and another begins, I would recommend bolding each chapter title, using a slightly bigger font, and/or starting a new post for each chapter :)
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