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extreme wizard -> (AQ) Legend of the StyxSteeds critique (5/2/2011 19:16:57)

This is a new story I'm working on about my charecter. I'd appreciate some comments or suggestions to help me write this as I go.
EDIT: Another chapter has been added and some mistakes have been fixed.
EDIT2: Chapter 2 is here.
(AQ) Legend of the StyxSteeds




Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (AQ) Legend of the StyxSteeds critique (5/7/2011 18:02:05)

How accurate do you want your story to be? Do you want everything to be in line with the story of the rest of the game? Or is it not that important to you?

Thing is, we do not know what happened to King Alteon in AQ and Falerin refuses to give us some information on him.

Loved the first chapter by the way.




extreme wizard -> RE: (AQ) Legend of the StyxSteeds critique (5/8/2011 16:08:47)

This isn't going to go along with the rest of the story, it has a plot that will appear in the next chapter (coming soon to theaters near you!). I thought of this story while driving home from Missouri and I couldn't wait to get started. Unfortunately, school has other plans.




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