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Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/15/2011 14:17:13)

Jae: Well I know that they are probably the other 3 forumites that wanted to be in his story, I have no idea who 2 of them are though...




Sorceress555 -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/15/2011 16:21:53)

Wow, this is a great story! Love it. Though I'm a Grammar Nazi so I must protest against the minor spelling/punctuation/capitalization/etc. errors in your story.




Goldstein -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/15/2011 22:14:46)

Well then, I'll have you know, Love it is not a full sentence! Grammar Nazi should also be capitalized since it's referring to a specific title. I always take great pains to make sure I am correct when it comes to grammar and spelling, but I suppose I do have a few mistakes. I'll try and fix those as soon as possible. Besides, you should read some of the other stories. Hoo boy are they bad.

Anyway, now that school has started, I'm creating an update schedule: Mondays and Thursdays! Starting today!




Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/15/2011 22:39:17)

Does that mean there will be a new chapter today?




Goldstein -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/15/2011 23:06:10)

YEAH!




Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/15/2011 23:55:06)

Good.


Now Commentary:
I'm not sure what side WarPro2 is on anymore.
I think I fall under the or something...
Interesting mask you found, and the weapons as well.
So you did answer that question. Good.
Wait who is Johan?

Good chapter, too bad I'm not good at commentary.


EDIT:
Woohoo finally in a story.




Sir Night -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 0:11:50)

Looks like things are starting to look up for the good doctor. Well, except for the fact that everyone wants to kill him...




Watziname WAT -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 2:49:38)

So ya made me an assassin?
You just made my day :D
Thank you,dude!
Love your story,by the way,can't wait to find out what happens next.

And @ShadowLord9k
Fear not fellow Shadow,you WILL be a main character in chapters B-? (possible M) in my story.




Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 4:05:45)

WAT: Assumine you do not reset it many times, by the way what side is WP2 anyway?




Goldstein -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 7:09:42)

Johan is the German weapons dealer Celestin captured in the previous chapter.




UnityDestroyer -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 7:39:02)

Where am I in your story?




Celestin123 -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 10:57:40)

Another wonderful chapter Goldenstein! Although I noted that you mentioned that I don't have much money and I
feel that I should protest cuz to tell the truth, I could be considered rich since Desolous left me enough money to last
me about a decade of survival(hidden in his Journal/Diary) before he disappeared and I've "collected" a lot of money since
then(when I first started out as a super-hero I did it Robin-hood style![i.e. stealing from villians and giving to the poor....and keeping
a bit for myself.[Keep in mind I was only 13 when I started out fighting crime, now I'm 16! Although that's only character-wise]] and since then I've found other ways to get money) considering that and the fact that a decade hasn't even passed since I got the money,
I'm really rich compared to normal people and small-time super heroes.

Another thing I should note is that although my character could be difficult to capture due to his multiple personalitites, you
seem to do it quite well(cue the applause)! Hmm.... it's interesting that I'd go all the way to Bangkok for a weapons dealer,
although if he rubbed me the wrong way then that IS something I would do. He must've been arrogant with me, for arrogance
enrages me rather quickly>.> anyways can't wait for the next chapter although I'm not on nearly as much as I used to be so......

@Unity: Maybe you're hiding.[:D]




Goldstein -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 17:47:33)

Well, Celestin didn't have that much money on him. Johan will be VERY important, much later on. And Unity...uh...




Sorceress555 -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 17:59:14)

Hmm, you're right, I should've said 'I love it' instead of just 'Love it'. I suppose I'm a bit of a hypocrite in that case. By the way, how do all these forum people end up as characters in your story?




Goldstein -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 18:17:53)

*whispers* Only the cool ones. In the case of things like villains and heroes, I usually ask to use a forumite's character, simply because it builds a great community. Otherwise, I create characters on my own.




Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 18:21:37)

Sorceress: I think Goldstein asked for characters at one point.

Maybe Johan is Unity's relative. Never said I can't come up with plots. Or Unity was just kinda in the background in Bangkok.




Goldstein -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 18:43:02)

Unity, you never asked to be in it. Or did you? I don't remember.




Watziname WAT -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 23:10:05)

Uh Goldstein.'Bout that Johan thing.Rohan's my real first name <<




Goldstein -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 23:17:23)

Funny!




UnityDestroyer -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/16/2011 23:36:43)

A month ago, Goldstein.

I like hiding!

Especially hiding at the roof, and ending up falling.




Vector -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/18/2011 22:25:31)

lol somebody needs to cut back on the caffeine [;)]
totally got a kick out of the new chapter




Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/19/2011 0:39:59)

That almost seemed too easy.




Goldstein -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/19/2011 20:06:59)

Quite. ;)




Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/22/2011 23:06:16)

If you need ideas for what to do to it I could suggest a few.

A good chapter as always.




Arachnid -> RE: (HS) Who Needs A Medical License? Discussion (8/23/2011 12:14:31)

Ima write a response to these new chapters now from my POV...
YOUR STORY IS AMAZING! =D

~Lady Zafara




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