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Drakkoniss -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/3/2011 19:23:37)

Tut, tut, tut... I shall reveal my knowledge and my hand in due time, I think... (That was Drakkoniss speaking, not the Mastermind, incase anyone was wondering, since it sounded like something he might say...)

Eh, he could be a human, he could be one of the most powerful smasher's the world has ever seen; Who's to say?

It is quite gripping, isn't it?




1fire1fire1f -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/3/2011 22:35:46)

what is this reborn thing about?




Shadowlord9k -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/4/2011 11:33:56)

Drakkoniss: I have some ideas on what the MasterMind's master plan.
Fire: Please, read the story
Clown: I just assumed that the mastermind was a genius...




Clown the Jester -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/4/2011 16:53:36)

A genius...hm...I agree with you Shadowlord9k. That seems the most likely.




Drakkoniss -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/4/2011 18:25:37)

Well, of course he's a genius... He isn't called the Mastermind for nothing... How do you expect he'd be able to come up with all the plans of his various criminal enterprises without being one?




Shadowlord9k -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/4/2011 19:19:50)

Drakkoniss: Magic.




star screamer -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/4/2011 19:25:08)

DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am too far behind in grays story,
I am so lazy




Clown the Jester -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/5/2011 7:04:20)

It is a large read. Heh heh heh.




Arachnid -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/22/2011 20:54:36)

Hmmm...
I honestly wish I had time to make another chapter...
And I wish another one comes out...
Hmmm...

~Lady Zafara




delta blitz -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/23/2011 17:25:50)

@arachid: I wish for a new chapter to read as well, also I wish for a few other things but that doesn't matter. I would ask you to comment on my story but I don't wanna feel like I'm trolling again.




Clown the Jester -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (10/24/2011 15:49:53)

Grape told me that he's working on a new chapter but since his chapters are so much longer than most of ours it takes him a long while to get stuff done. Also we both have to look over it to make sure it doesn't contradict anything in Comedy and Tragedy or our final story thing.


It's a slow process...and I haven't been able to help so much since I've been working on my Halloween Story. Woot! One more week...and I'm not even half done...hm...I gotta pick up the pace.


HEE HEE HEE HA HA HA HA!


The story at this moment is 45 pages long size 11 font single spaced in Microsoft word...so...ya....I don't know whats gonna happen...hm...

Heh heh heh




star screamer -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/23/2011 19:33:02)

>:) Nice chapter my Gray friend...
HO HO! Oh realize that I wanted Mastermind to keep the oxygen off,
either way, I'm already dead.... >8D




Clown the Jester -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/23/2011 20:30:35)

WA HA HA HA HA! I liked it too...though I gotta say The Mastermind's engoal..is...well...its ok. Still amazing descrtion of the guy.


He's so sharp he cuts the air with his mind. HOO HOO HOO HOO!

And to think I thought the Chaos Riots were my idea...heh heh heh...amusing. The guys good.




delta blitz -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/23/2011 21:26:17)

Curse you clown. You could have pmed me to tell me a new chapter was out, I almost missed the epicness. (Note I don't really spent as much time talking on the forums anymore). The chapter was genius though, the master mind reminds me of the smasher who is adept at strategy and out thinking even a more intellectual opponent. I wonder what would happen in a battle of the mind between those two. But anyway I enjoy how the mastermind thinks though I am sad that I won't be mention in this story as grey has told me. Though I understand how David the zero Blitz is not compatible with the malachite due to him being a alien, I don't understand how come someone like davinci is so low on the intellectual food chain.




Drakkoniss -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/24/2011 13:22:05)

I think it might be time to read this about now. I suppose we'll see... One sec, I'll check to see if anyone's on now really quickly, and come back to read if not. No offence, it's that I want to see if a few people who aren't normally on when I am on are on now, because it's the morning.

Yes... far more dangerous than even that cunning prehistoric creature. Far more intelligent, too.

Hmm... quite disciplined... It takes a lot of time to get used to such a schedual... I haven't been awake that long for a norm in quite a while... Sometimes in life, you must be extremely patient... extremely patient, and mentally strong, hard willed, and physically resilient. Almost inspirational, but now I must stop admiring that foe of mine's resolve, and get back to reading about his opperations...

I suppose, in retrospect, I could have used molecular reconstruction to suplement my body even more, and kept it awake, exchanging the carbon dioxide I exhale for vitamins, caffeine, ect., but then again, I suppose it worked out fine enough, anyway, and while I was remaining vigalent in HeroSpire, my mind was also busy with many other tasks... I actually had split my conciousness to multiple bodies, doing multiple things, seperately, and my mental capacities for certain things were somewhat reduced... But it turned out well enough in the end... Horribly, in some aspects, but much better than it could have.

Well, it hid his location from most smashers... There are a very few flaws in its design, compared to what it would have to be to prevent EVERY possible detection method, and I discovered the fact that that was him a while ago, after scanning the city with my mind, and putting the inconsistancies in a mental file, which I pulled from later, and was able to use to discover where the Mastermind was at the time, but it is still very difficult to detect, and I had to actually go there in person to make sure it actually was someone, instead of interference caused by certain types of machines that possibly could give about the same result, which is saying something, considering under most circumstances I'd be able to rule out all possible alternative explainations for something of the sort... Nevertheless, a very advanced machine.

True, the classical compositions can sharpen one's mind, and are quite pleasing to the ear. I prefer more modern works, but they are still quite good, and I would probably choose them if Rock and Roll happened to never have been invented, or if it was never refined.

Finally going to actually move more publicly over all that time, hmm? Nice to see his work will finally be revealed to the population, instead of the very few of the rest of the community that happen to know of his existance.

And yes, timing is crucial, and choices of actions are incredibly important in such a venture.Many things that could go awry if certain things were not calculated very, very efficiently, and accurately... He is truly one of the greatest strategic minds of this era, and I suppose we will eventually see if he is truly THE greatest.

Seems almost arrogant of him to believe that he could see through every trick and deception put forth... But then, he has a unique mind, and I should not think he would underestimate the majority of his opponents... No, I think that almost every one of them could not put up a fight, so to speak, in the games of the mind that he has been playing for these years. Not all people are so simple, though, and I know that there are little fragments of information that elude him, and irk him so... A couple people who's motives are not quite so easily seen by him... Or at the very least one.

Very ammusing to see him squirm with those bits of insight he can't quite grasp...
Those little things that are not quite right, where he looks to see that night; Those little things, here and there, which sortof ruffle up his hair, which cannot be easily seen or known, as simple as a hidden stone, and yet they escape his noble mind, as all the threads intertwine, with many things, his web he weaves, but all this info could deceive;
Will his mind catch the time, the place, and in the space with which he can, will he conquer all of man?
Yet to see, this world we know, does still quiver like a bow, and in the hurricane, who's will shall sew the little seeds that shall, in earnest, grow?
These great things, we do not know, as the world's plotlines go, and intermingle, as death's realm grows. We shall see, if his might shows, how the world shall crumble.

And so, let us see, I say to you, you brave, you proud, you few, who to the world, a change could shew, and so the world will be thereafter.

Now, as I think it is enough, I shall read of this noble stuff, which Silhouette in night does brew, a very interesting slew, of things for which we shall see are true, this story great- right now!

...Yes, I'd say the Red Death could be quite essential to his knowledge in that respect. The true question is how much, and if it shall be enough to change the course of things to come; Things are rising, and the ancient tales of old come forth with new vigor these days. LET US SEE JUST WHAT SHALL HAPPEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I could be a poet if I wanted to, but meh, I don't feel that is a likely career choice for me.

Maybe they are not a threat just now, but shall they be in the future? Great beasts of ancient petigree could rise, with great power, and they could change the course of things quite dramatically.

And yes, that Gray Silhouette is a bit less profoundly skilled in certai nrespects, when compared to the other, and I myself question how he shall change events... Many new things to take into mind... Many problems that could be caused, or solved...

Seems the Mastermind is aware of his identity, then, and he's not filling his pawns completely in, which I was already aware of, but still find ammusing.

No, I think his father was a bit more deductive in the field, but then again, he was trained for it, and showed aptitude. His son, however, did not have the years of field opperations training and experience his father had, but his ability is remarkable because of that fact, as well, even if he is not quite of his father's caliber.

I think I will post this now, and then edit it.

Almost uncovering the Mastermind... hehe...He did, although not completely... Reminds me of how I worked along side him and his deductive genius to help him in that regard, among other things...

I, personally, am thinking more long-term in my plans to destroy the Mastermind's plans. Little things here and there... Lose a few battles, gain advantages in the war to come, slowly. Gain information, get closer to the point I need to be at, eventually. Ect.

The attack on Yercom is intriguing...

And his composure under threat makes that situation very ammusing...

And yes, I would imagine my Alliance would decrease in power without my supervission... But I still have things at work, and plans in place.

Very ammusing, hearing them talk... I think the situation will eventually change quite a bit, as the Mastermind has alluded to.

Almost never wrong would be more of an adequate statement... He changes his plans to always give him an advantage, but there are little bumps in the road that jar his equations every once in a while.

I wonder if he added the fact that Ancient Darkness can turn defenders to his side into his percentles... That is a variable that could be quite difficult to defeat.

That would depend on whether or not L.O.C.K.D.O.W.N. has the capability of actually holding Ancient Darkness, though.

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH, how funny it is to watch him squirm... and yes, I think he could make those predictions pretty well, albeit with a certain margin of error; He IS a fanatic, you know.

Nice plan for striking once he's lost his use, or it would be, if the Mastermind didn't have scenarios in place for just such an occurance.

I like that last little jab at Ancient Darkness' pride. Quite... droll, and courteous, considering.

Quote: Securities around the room prevented it from being picked up on radars, metal detectors, heat scanners, x-ray vision, and other spy detection devices as well as make impossible to enter through teleportation, or phasing through walls. *unquote* <^-Not impossible to get around, but very difficult.

I imagine one of the crazier of them firing a gun at the Mastermind, and it deflecting off, and then hysterical laughter insuing, with stern looks from the Mastermind, albeit most would think it would be impossible to get a gun in there, but still.

Yet again, I note that he does not tell the others it is not the original.

Syrena's mention makes me think of how events will come to pass...

*chuckles at Hottica's silliness, and the fact that her name reminds me of a certain someone* ROMANS!!!!!!!

Yes, I'd think he'd dislike it. That subject could cause all the villains of the city to become disloyal, and possibly even rise up against him, ruining his plans altogether.

Interesting reasonings as to why he used Clown... Hmm...

Dangerous ground he treads on about there... Almost makes me think he had not anticipated and shaped the events of that meeting to his will.

Hehe... I thought something like that would happen. The Mastermind is a very precautionary type of person. He probably had many other plans he could have activated if one of the others chose to betray him.

Finally they actually get to business, instead of speaking of the somewhat obvious, and grasping for information and hope. Pfft.

This makes me wonder just how the opperation shall be implemented, and what strategic advantages it shall give, specifically, and also makes me wonder what certain events shall play out like, and what effects they shall have... I know things.

It also makes me wonder why he's refering to the Heroes and Villains as if they are sports teams...




star screamer -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/24/2011 17:58:41)

/e waits patiently for more of Gray's beautiful piece of work.




Drakkoniss -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/24/2011 18:02:11)

YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO WAIT!!!!!! That's cheating... :/

lol




star screamer -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/24/2011 18:13:01)

So I must sneak a peek inside Gray's mind to find out?




Drakkoniss -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/24/2011 18:26:56)

Eh, sure. Why not? Give it a go! XD

If you can, that is...




Clown the Jester -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/24/2011 20:07:27)

Heh heh heh...Grapes good at keeping secrets...I'm wondering which 2 specialists Mastermind is talking about.


Hm...what do you guys think?





star screamer -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/24/2011 21:02:38)

Batman and Robin. It's always, Batman and Robin.




Drakkoniss -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/24/2011 21:45:39)

Boston, and someone else. Perhaps Detroit?




Clown the Jester -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/24/2011 22:56:12)

WA HA HA HA HA HA! Funn-ie...Funn-ie. Heh heh heh.


I could imagine Mastermind pulling such a gag.


Maybe to gag Grape as well. OH HO HO HO HO HO HO HO!

BIND AND GAG THAT IS!

HOO HOO HOO HOO HOO HEE HEE HEE HA HA HA HA!




Goldstein -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/25/2011 1:24:00)

It is 1:21 in the morning, my eyes are smarting, but I managed to slosh through this entire story in one sitting. My headache is killing me, but as I fumble with the keys, the black letters blurry, I can only hope that I stay awake long enough to post this so that you can know...

This story is exceedingly good.

Zzzzz....




Drakkoniss -> RE: Operation R.E.B.O.R.N. Discussion (11/25/2011 23:54:33)

Glad to see you liked it. Did you read Comedy and Tragedy?

Oh, yes... Also, I would like to know if anyone took note of my poem in that mess of a comment.

Anyone?




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