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Sir Night -> (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/8/2011 0:49:32)

The story is here.



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/8/2011 1:16:51)

Reminds me of a SyFy movie.



But good, keep it up.



Sir Night -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/8/2011 9:03:42)

Yeah I decided to follow the style of a SyFy movie for this.



Clown the Jester -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/9/2011 14:28:40)

The first chapter had that terror monster feel I got from watching Jaws. YA know. An unstoppable beast that you can't see. I liked it.


2nd chapter: Coffee queen confused me but I found it very humerous.


Giant Crocodiles are always terrifying. Hm. Super Swamp. Intresting setting. We should have it in Herosmash. There are so many possibilities with such a place.



I like the monster hunt theme. Very nice.




Sorry I didn't comment before. I've been busy. But this is a great start for a story.




Sir Night -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/9/2011 14:53:15)

Thanks Clown. I was starting to wonder if anyone other than Shadowlord was even reading the story.

As for Coffee Queen, she's a secondary character of mine. I'd put the offer up before to use other people's characters in this story, but nobody took me up on it, so I figured she was perfect for the part.



Clown the Jester -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/9/2011 18:15:51)

Oh sorry dude. My bad.

You can use mine if you wish and I'm pritty sure Gray Silhouette wouldn't mind either.

Instead of putting up an offer, ask specific people you want if you can use them.



Interesting though. You may want to try doing a story with character you make up. You are obviously very creative at it.



Can't wait for pt3. Jeez the giant monster hunt in murky waters is just such a good idea. I really like it. No lie. I mean is that object over their a large log? Or a man eatting reptile? Was that a tail slapping the water? Or did someone throw a rock into the water? Did I imagine I was in a boat full of people? Or is something eating them as I speak. Did I hear something behind me? Or am I just going cra...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


SPLASH!



delta blitz -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/9/2011 18:26:16)

Sry I myself am busy writing my own story but I wouldn't want you to think that I wasn't reading your's so heres my comment:hmm....interesting story unforunitly the character of mine that would fit perfectly here isn't finished being explained so I will just give you a monster idea. How about a swamp leech that is fused with sometype of lich of some sorts= bloodsucking immortal maddness(perfect for those pesky clowns).



Jae10 -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/10/2011 0:39:55)

< I really really really had fun reading it so far. It had an eerie, sci-fi/action (as was previously mentioned) feel to it that made for an excellent beginning. I was so shocked the way that guy just shot those two dude so ruthlessly, without even hesitating. I cringed...it was absolutely infuriating. I'm ashamed to say that I was much relieved when those criminals got eaten. Sadly, I'm afraid of what happened to Crystal. I hope Coffee Queen can put an end to this terrorizing monster's insatiable appetite! But overall, this is a great story. It's like an awesome movie I can watch in my head! :D



Celestin123 -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/10/2011 16:14:40)

Wow! You've got a great story here, Sir Night! I really liked the monster-ish theme, and I loved the first chapter!
LOL, I was happy to see that you "dealt" with those nasty criminals but I feel pretty bad for those poor picnicers,
especially Crystal......

I'm very curious about this Coffee Queen character though, lol I love the way she thinks though.
"No movies and no villians to get because of a Drakkoniss, what am I gonna do now!?D="
I'm curious about her what her powers are too! I hope she doesn't suffer the same fate the others did though......



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/10/2011 19:07:23)

Celestin: Maybe the Coffee Queen can shoot coffee out of her hands.
Keep up the good work.



Sir Night -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/10/2011 22:07:26)

Wow, thanks for the compliments guys! Glad you're enjoying it so far. I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible.



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/16/2011 0:13:13)

I was right about the powers, I guess.


DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHN
I did not see that ending coming, I want to see what happens next.



Watziname WAT -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/16/2011 2:57:20)

Epic story!
As much as I hate to say it,it's much better than my first chapter -_-''
Can't wait to see what happenes next.
Perhaps Crocky-Wocky is Crystals friend now.

Anyhoo,cweepy D:
Yes,I meant to put a ''w'' instead of an ''r'' :P



Crystal Lion -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/16/2011 6:55:35)

Ok, that was unexpected. So... Reminds me a bit of Beauty and the Beast with the "Girl is friends with a monster," part. What happens next? I can't wait to read it.



megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/16/2011 7:51:50)

If you like, you can use me. I am sure that The Dealer would be interested in what lies in the swamp and how the monster came to be. Although, he would not approve of tearing it down mind. The Green section of the Colour Corps would be angry. In fact, he could probably send them to check it out since they are good in natural enviroments, what with their nature powers. Or whatever is in that safe. Keep in mind I edit this as I read.



Sir Night -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/16/2011 9:57:28)

I can use The Dealer? Sweet. I don't know enough about your character or your company to know what their interest would be in the monster, but if you want you can PM me this information. And I will definitely be able to use him in the story either way.



Watziname WAT -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/16/2011 23:12:19)

You can use the almighty Me too :P
War Pro's the name,smashings de game.
If ya want,I'll PM the information of me land-lubber.



Sir Night -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/17/2011 0:49:01)

Ok, go ahead and send me your information and I'll work on getting you in there.

Also, do you guys think it would be way over the top to add a soundtrack to the story? [&:]



megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/17/2011 4:44:01)

Sorry about the four PMs, I just wanted to send you my bios to do with The Dealer. I tried to keep it low, but I guess I got carried away. My apologies. But if you be so kind, would you tell me what you think of them and what ones, if any after the info dump, you think could fit in?

ALso, don't know about the soundtrack. It could be good, but I would suggest using lesser known tracks that give it a distictive B-Movie feel.[;)]



UnityDestroyer -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/17/2011 5:12:27)

Hmm...

An interesting one!

I passed my bio to you. Please take care of my Sci-fi bio.



megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/25/2011 4:27:19)

I read the latest chapters. Nice work on the Green Colour Corps by the way.[:D]



Arachnid -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/30/2011 13:10:56)

Very interesting story, I'd like to read more of it.

~Lady Zafara



delta blitz -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/30/2011 18:40:59)

Epic new chapters,and very unique as well. I like where this story is going and sadly I must say that I will be taking some time out of writing to read your story to the fullest. Also I give you permission to use the David Blitz from the perfect soldier story. the character I speak of is in the second story of this thread



Sir Night -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (8/30/2011 23:19:23)

Thanks guys!

quote:

I will be taking some time out of writing to read your story to the fullest.


Well I wouldn't want you to stop writing your own stories, but it is an honor that you said that!



Sir Night -> RE: (HS) Monster of the Swamp Discussion (9/6/2011 11:09:12)

Ok David, I finally started reading the perfect soldier story and I have to say that it's very interesting so far. And I can see that the David Blitz from that story will fit nicely into my story, so he's in. However, the story does look kinda long, so I need to ask: How far into it will I need to read before I know enough about him to write him into my next chapter?

And yeah double post, I know.



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