(HS) Cyan Eagle Ramix Taking Flight!! Discussion

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Ramix The Red Ace -> (HS) Cyan Eagle Ramix Taking Flight!! Discussion (10/1/2011 4:29:43)
Well I was notified that doing this was necessary so... here you go. If anything is missing here please inform me, I'd love some feedback since I'm hoping to be a writer and this is the first piece of work that I've revised so cautiously, but I'm writing this late at night so my skills aren't as sharp as they should be. Thanks in advance.

Goldstein -> RE: (HS) Cyan Eagle Ramix Taking Flight!! Discussion (10/2/2011 19:30:49)
GAH! The wall of text, it burns! Try spaces!

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