(HS) Eclipsing the Darkness story discussion (Full Version)

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Shadowlight1 -> (HS) Eclipsing the Darkness story discussion (11/23/2011 17:52:09) I decided to write a fanfic about my HS character, please tell me what you think. I'll add more chapters if it's good. http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=19827596&mpage=1&key=�

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Drakkoniss -> RE: (HS) Eclipsing the Darkness story discussion (11/24/2011 18:24:52) Let me guess, you got your powers from dark matter wells that only released themselves during a solar eclipse, found deep in the moon? I like this story. It seems like it won't have any of our characters, but that's fine, and could actually improve the feel of the story, anyway. It has quite a bit of potential indeed... and I like your writing style.

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Shadowlight1 -> RE: (HS) Eclipsing the Darkness story discussion (11/30/2011 17:50:37) I added the next chapter to my story, it's longer, but I'm not very experienced as a writer yet. I would appreciate some feedback.

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Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) Eclipsing the Darkness story discussion (12/1/2011 15:47:56) Enjoyable story few typos here and there but hey no ones perfect. Also I find the plot interesting.

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