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Drakkoniss -> RE: Of Satellites and Flintlocks (Discussion) (2/6/2012 22:46:47)
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Yes, I'd say such things DO shoot bullets out. XP
Gotta love the talking machinery of security-based DOOM!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah, German accents... I like that Gattling Gun's persona. :P
I liked him, too. Charismatic. A bit boastful, but with quite the potential, it would seem.
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“And, since I know he won’t say it,this is Mr. Roy Craine, our saboteur, subterfuge, and reconnaissance agent, all wrapped into one sad, broken package.”
You forgot a little something.
Hmm... Good at following orders...
Muahahahah... Yes, I did not burst that out with exclaimation points. That is what I call a chuckle under my breath. It was in reference to his comment about experience being a good teacher, but taking forever to work.
I like that the charisma falls flat on her. Makes it all the funnier.
WOO!!! DRUNKEN FORGETFULNESS!!!!!!!!!!! XP
Small place, that Tortuga.
"First impressions are usually better when made under the influence of a good drink," first made me think he was encouraging her to get drunk. XD
Hmm... 2 more gramatical mistakes so far, but not too bad... Though one appears to be a result of you changing your mind about making a direct quote at the last second, and making an indirect one.
I like the way you describe that bar. lol
That WAS an awkward moment. Hehe... You are quite good at adding comedy in there alot. I enjoy that. :)
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