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Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (DF) The tale of a dragonfuser. discussion. (7/1/2013 6:39:24)
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First things first. When I click the link in this thread you provided all the "?" are highlighted for me.
Now then ....
*Cracks knuckles.*
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Nasbor could hardly wait!
Why are you making use of an exclamation mark here?
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Esmeralda noticed the glint in Nasbor’s eyes and worried a bit, even though revenge is a great motivation it was also the most dangerous one, the young boy’s eagerness to avenge his family could easily turn into darkness.... when that happens... She rather wouldn’t think about it...
was, would happen
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“Oh I am going to, but you didn’t expect it to be easy? did you now?”
Did
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Esmeralda frowned<> “So many questions, I expect you to sit still because if you don’t you will never learn to truly focus! and even when you close your eyes, your other senses will take over.”
,, And
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Nasbor was even more confused now<> “My other senses? You mean my hearing and smell? What do you expect me to do? put my ear against a tree? sniff some gorillaphant dung?”
,, Put, Sniff
Nasbor comes off as an ungrateful brat.
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Esmeralda shook her head<> “Just sit down and do as I tell you to, try to hear the animals move and try to smell where they are. I will tell you when the hour is over and then we’ll look if you were right”
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last week Esmeralda prolonged the meditation from one to three hours, Nasbor could now exactly tell where an animal had been and where it went after an hour of meditating.
Since (the) last
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Nasbor however was getting impatient, he had been traveling with the old lady for weeks now and nothing <> changed for him except for that he could locate an animal with his eyes closed!
was getting impatient however, had
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“Oh really now?” Esmeralda grinned<> “then tell me where the closest deer is?”
,, Then
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“Is that all?” Nasbor asked with a smile<> “There is a deer about 100 meters* to the north, it’s drinking by the waterfall!”
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“Very good” Esmeralda said<> “What a pleasant surprise, you are a quick learner!”
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she looked at a tree, closed her eyes and put her hand in front of her.
She
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“Dravir!” Esmeralda said<> “A whole group of them!”
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“Dravir?” Nasbor asked<> “How do you know that? I didn’t hear them coming in my meditation<>”
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“Because you can hear about 200 meters around you <> this army is about a kilometer away from us”
while/and
How much dravir are we roughly talking about here?
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Nasbor’s jaw dropped<> “How?”
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“I’ll tell you once we’re save! There’s a hidden cave not far from here!”
safe
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