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Legendbreaker -> =Forum Contest= Thanksgiving with AE (11/9/2012 18:05:48)

Uh, I think we are supposed to post here if we want feed back, so here I go...

Thanksgiving with AE

Oh, Thanksgiving!
A great holiday to spend time with both the undead and the living!
I must confess,
whether it’s Thankstaking or Harvest,
or Oversoul’s beta test,
there is no better way,
to spend Thanksgiving Day,
then with AE and your family!

Please try to help, and if you don't like something, tell me how to improve it. Thanks!




DoomLord8989 -> RE: =Forum Contest= Thanksgiving with AE (11/10/2012 3:56:52)

In my opinion, the Thanksgiving and living rhyme are too far apart, so I'd reduce the words in the second line to something like: "A great holiday to spend with undead and living!" But it's only my opinion.




Blue Class -> RE: =Forum Contest= Thanksgiving with AE (11/25/2012 16:53:47)

I really like i think its great!




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