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Charries -> =Forum Contest= Story of a Hero (11/20/2012 1:00:22)

Hey forumites!

Here's a quick something I made up using the (fairly dodgy and hard to use :P ) recording equipment on my ipad.

It's still pretty rough, although because of time constraints i might just leave at that, and yes, i do know that i need a video with it to prove its my own work and it's for the competition, i'll have that included in my final attempt.

Here it is, so please enjoy!! And any sort of feedback (good or bad!! :P) is highly appreciated!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=td1asm0U3yo&feature=youtu.be

Cheers!




ASH*3 -> RE: =Forum Contest= Story of a Hero (11/21/2012 20:27:17)

Wow, I totally loved your song! The lyrics and tune worked together quite nicely in my humble opinion :) The only change I would suggest is for the ending. I think you should end with a low note on the last word "for," just to make it sound a little more dramatic and conclusive. But other than that, great job!




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