Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Frostval War 2013 Commentary (12/21/2013 22:22:22)
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The only real problem I see, Amon (and sorry for saying this so late after you posted it initially), is that the story seems to assume that the people who are reading this one have read the last one. I don't actually know who Grimlon is, or why (I'm assuming it's your own rp character) is eating souls. Beyond that, it's a well-written story. Perhaps linking to your last war story to serve as an introduction to the characters (or whatever story of yours actually serves that purpose) would help with that.
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