afb728 -> RE: Flamehead 12's Half of DragonFable (4/6/2015 3:20:57)
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I like the Serenity piece on a whole, but a few things stand out: 1) You're re-using the pose from Safiria, which apparently you reused from something else. Not necessarily a bad thing, and it's not exactly the same, but it's noticeable. 2) Her chin shading is weird. As someone who has unsuccessfully attempted to shade like that before, I completely understand. 3) I like Valtrith's tongue-thing. That's imaginative. 4) Color/shading are generally good. I don't know anything about weapons, so I'll leave those to someone who does. Keep up the good work!
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