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Arthur -> Whispers Discussion & Tuning (4/24/2014 9:56:37)

Here's my entry...!

This is the very basic version and my contest entry for Madame Vox' contest "Here's How We Roll".

Please do read it and let me know what all I should improve and cut out. It's currently exceeding the word-limit of 300 words so I need to work on that.

I'll post the relevant info tomorrow.

Have Fun...!



mulberry777 -> RE: Whispers Discussion & Tuning (4/25/2014 1:58:22)

Arthur that was amazing, I love Darker Than Black and I loved your fan fiction. Just keep writing it was amazing :D



Arthur -> RE: Whispers Discussion & Tuning (4/25/2014 2:02:16)

Oh... thank you so much, mulberry777.^^

I am glad to know that there's another Darker Than Black fan here in these forums. This is actually my very first time writing a fanfiction, so I am a bit nervous as to whether I've done DTB enough justice seeing as how it has such a dark and complex plot.

Also, do let me know if there is anything that I can improve upon in this story.

Thank you again.



Kian -> RE: Whispers Discussion & Tuning (5/12/2014 14:10:52)

I fully share mulberry's opinion! You did a great job!

PS: Thank you for your kind words on my entry! [:)]



Arthur -> RE: Whispers Discussion & Tuning (5/12/2014 14:16:24)

It was my pleasure. Thank you for reading the story.

You should've put up a Commentary Thread too, I mean, you should. The Contest Rules encourage you to do that.



Hemabody -> RE: Whispers Discussion & Tuning (8/16/2014 9:33:12)

This an excellent fanfic , they can even make an OVA out of this story , I am a big fan of this series , just like you [:D]



Arthur -> RE: Whispers Discussion & Tuning (8/16/2014 9:36:06)

Thank you, Hemabody. I am glad you like it. :)



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