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Rekindled

You say to end it here, but I don't.
You've hurt me enough already now <-- This 'now' here hurts your flow and sounds strange. It will break your rhyme though...
No one else ever will care, no they won't. <-- 'will ever care' flows a lot better than 'ever will care'
The spark is gone, I miss that small wow.

You tell me this as you leave:
"We just aren't right for eachother" <-- 'each other'
But you're the first one I've liked in a while;
I think that you could maybe be the one now. <-- This 'now' also sounds awkward. No rhyme to destroy here though...

"Give me a chance, just one more go;
I'll manage to impress you, <-- Maybe 'find some way' instead of 'manage'?
Rekindle those long-lost flames,"
I tell you from the heart

You say to end it now.
I am left standing there, wondering how
In this great world, as blessed you are, <-- Consider adding an 'as' after 'blessed'
Bad luck still comes in to mar
That which you have in love
Must someday fall.

What was that, another chance
I knew you hadn't left me
I still live, and I can win

Don't give up, and you'll succeed
They'll realize in the end
We are meant to be
A pair of two, you see. <-- 'A pair of two' is redundant, perhaps 'The pair of us?'

Nothing can stop us now
To think I wondered how
The world still kept spinning <-- I'm not sure how this fits with your ending phrase. Perhaps ending with something like 'My life would keep going on' in place of this line? Just a suggestion
Each day
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