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3/31/2012 21:14:43   
Glais
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spoiler:

Haha, I kind of anticipated he's be the main antagonist.


Out of curiosity, how long ago does this happen before DF?
DF MQ  Post #: 201
3/31/2012 21:17:08   
Mortarion
Member

Antagonist, ohhhhhhhh no, you are wrong, just too wrong, but let's say that it happened shortly after the Devourer was created
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 202
3/31/2012 21:22:38   
Glais
Member

Wait the story happens THAT long ago, or just Gladius' creation?
DF MQ  Post #: 203
3/31/2012 21:23:39   
Mortarion
Member

Gladius creation, I thought that was the question. ANd Gladius is also a forsaken, his soul has been uncreated, along with his home planet, and he was human
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 204
3/31/2012 21:26:05   
Glais
Member

Thus Gladius=ALIENS
DF MQ  Post #: 205
3/31/2012 21:27:06   
Mortarion
Member

Gladius created the aliens -_-
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 206
3/31/2012 21:27:45   
Glais
Member

Gladius=from another planet=Alien

Or, well he should anyways. I don't actually know the character.
DF MQ  Post #: 207
3/31/2012 21:33:46   
Mortarion
Member

As I said before, he was a human, he was pre-reset, wasa coloniser, and he is now currently imprisioned, he also has gone to earth
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 208
4/21/2012 12:43:39   
VanHellsin24
Banned


The poem gives me an uneasy feeling...


You did great!
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 209
4/21/2012 12:58:51   
Mortarion
Member

Thanks, I wrotte them during some hard times, glad you liked htem Van :)

By the way, have you read PAth to Madness?



On something completly unrelated I am thinking of making an ED story
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 210
4/21/2012 13:00:49   
VanHellsin24
Banned


I will read a Path to Madness but I'm working on my second L&L The Misadventure of Alaric Mycroft
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 211
4/21/2012 13:07:42   
Mortarion
Member

ok
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 212
4/21/2012 13:14:00   
VanHellsin24
Banned


You should check it out *wink*
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 213
5/7/2012 7:08:49   
Mortarion
Member

I'll do

Added more pick-up lines, hope they make sense
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 214
5/9/2012 2:58:46   
Glais
Member

Which chapters did you add to? They all look mostly the same to me.
DF MQ  Post #: 215
5/9/2012 6:10:06   
Mortarion
Member

I added on the second link you see
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 216
5/28/2012 0:12:10   
1412.
Member

Amazing story. I really liked it. Although there were some grammatical mistakes.
I think you should really continue it. I want to see how the Path of Madness will turn out.
The plot was enthralling but I did have to stop sometimes and read a sentence over, but didn't distract me too much from
the story.

Can't wait for you to post more!

< Message edited by 1412. -- 5/28/2012 0:15:18 >
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 217
7/21/2012 16:30:21   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


As per request.


quote:

It was a beautiful morning, Mortarion, <>, was walking in the woods near falconreach when he found someone


a short description of Mortarion.

Or you could turn it into something like this.

quote:

It was a beatiful morning or so the man walking in the woods near Falconreach thought. His name was Mortarion, <short physical description and possibly personal reasons for his walk> who was taken by surprise to find someone ....


I can't quite understand what you mean by "who had all of his ropes destroyed was famelic".

quote:

It was a beutiful day in willowshire but this was a cruel joke as the city was in ruins, of it only remained a refugee camp, in this morning a messenger walked trought it, searching for a horse; he had been tasked by guardian fortuna to deliver a message to falconreach asking for their help.


As you can see the messenger has more of a description than the protagonist, though he could do with a brief description.

quote:

In their chatting, they didn't notice that a woman had approached them. She was a statuesque, auburn-haired beauty, and when she spoke all of the heroes turned to face her, yet she didn't seem scared.


flustered (I don't see why she would become scared in the presence of the heroes a.k.a. good guys.)


Do you have a specific reason as to why you have 2 different font-sizes?

That's all for now.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 218
8/9/2012 13:47:43   
Mortarion
Member

Small update to the first post, A Path to Madness is part of the full saga called "The Gladius Chronicles"

Oh, I aslo found hte last name of Malorum, Varm, so his full name is Malorum Varm

< Message edited by Mortarion -- 8/9/2012 13:48:36 >
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