Drakkoniss
Creative! Constructive!
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The pleasure is mine, Strebbor. I have been intending to do so for some time, although, sadly, I was occupied with other things. Truly a wonderful story; I loved it from the begining. Thusly, It is fully, and wholeheartedly truly my pleasure to read your story, indeed, goodsir. Mr O'Hare intrigues me... O.o Arrow remover... Interesting choice of assassins... This will get quite entertaining, I think... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The selection of weapons makes me lol... it is QUITE amusing... (Quoted)With that he expanded his wings, opened a window, and fell off, much to Mr. O'Hares amazement. <- Hmm... Fell off? Interesting... I wonder what would happen if there was something directly below, which he was not aware of... Ah, Liberty City... I had forgotten you were there... hehe... this, my friend may become interesting a bit sooner than I thought (albeit I assumed there'd be action in the chapter after you met O'Hare, I thought it would be in the later half, and possibly in the form of a cliffhanger...)... Interesting power you have there, indeed... Brilliant of you to have figured out a way to get it within the syringes... then again, with your doctor theme, you would almost certainly use a syringe-weapon... Character-wise, with your background and personality, it makes sense, too... O.o The avenue of death, eh? Hmm... Took a whiz in your cornflakes? Strange figure of speach, there......... Nice emotional description on the way to face Necronomicus, btw. yep, sounds like the semi-typical angry villain who just got outsmarted and is irritated about it... I like how you have Celestin seeming to be the calm, centered voice of reason there, when Strebbor was laughing maniacly... makes me smile... *grins* O.o Didn't seem like a rubber mask, based on the description you made... Semptember the 13th (6:54 a.m.)is very amusing indeed... I wonder if you tried hitting him with a fish... Rubber Chicken? WOOOOOT!!!!!!!! Someone ACTUALLY decided to include the actual environmental effects of lightning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good guys don't interrogate people? HAH!!! He actually thinks all of us are that stupid?!?!?!?! Nice to use the uranium, too... very inventive... (laughs at the desperation/paranoia of Necronomicus' words) Must have quite a while before he unleashed the lightning, considering that lightning is impossible to dodge... YOu'd have to have gotten quite a bit away from the attacked area, too... Funny to me, too... I like Necronomicus... Urm... his personality... not the evilness... DOH!!! I forgot what the purple stuff does... Interesting to see how easily Celestin went down in that world... I presume he has more damage resistance and/or endurance in our normal reality... Whelk? I assume he meant whelp, unless that is some strange insult that I somehow don't know about... Funny thing is Celstin is immune to desease, so those threats were hollow. XP I enjoy Celestin's logic there, when they were discussing what to do with him... I like Russian weapons... The Makarov has too few bullets for my tastes, though... Arg... cancer of the brain is not fun... Nice memories... pity you missed the funeral, truly... Of course, I am assuming that is fiction, so the pity isn't real, but you know what I mean... Plastic... interesting... Probably won't go as straight as a normal bullet, but if the effects are taken from your power-mist, then that should make it useful enough to ignore that... albeit that could still lead to problems, and the fact that you could choose the wrong magazine in an emergency slightly lowers my opinion of the plan, but still quite nice... Gah, shock... I hate that... so annoying, sometimes... Albeit it is quite useful biologically... Nice idea to include injury without knowledge. It adds a certain uncertain realistic feeling to your story that I am sure to like very much. And to leave Billy there? A very nice touch indeed...
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