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7/16/2011 22:30:10   
UnityDestroyer
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Discuss my story named "Elements of Smash"

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7/19/2011 16:00:36   
mikeyc0312
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I read through your story and I think it is really good. Very well thought out with a decent plot line. However the grammar was, unfortunately, really rather poor. That is my one criticism, and I believe that if you can sort that out, it makes for an excellent story.

< Message edited by mikeyc0312 -- 7/19/2011 16:01:06 >
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