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1/14/2011 12:39:15   
Helixi
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Part 1.


Eve shivered as wind moaned through the city of New Argen. Her thin jacket offered scant protection from the hostile elements. Her skirt whipped around her legs as she hurried through the dawn, gloom slowly receding as the Sun filtered through the toxin-laced air.

Eve thought back to her night shift. People had flooded in, overwhelming her and the other ill-equipped staff. The poor had walked from the underbelly of the moving city to the doors of the hospital. The poor always surged forward, hoping to enter before dawn. The same pattern repeated every night, without fail. Eve shuddered, thinking of her priority case, a young girl, no more than five, who had been caught in a steam explosion. Her brother had carried her from the depths of the engine rooms, his face taut with worry as he handed her over to the doctors. As more men left the engine rooms to fight in the war, families took their place.

She was nearing her apartment building, a run down grey block, identical to millions across the city. Old newspapers gusted at the bottom of the steps, mingling with damp leaves from the stunted plants that grew from the ruins of bombed out houses. Rust peeled off the industrial barbed wire that festooned the front of the building and floated in the chilling breeze. Eve entered, ducking gratefully into the warmth. Inside was no more appealing that the outside. Peeling wallpaper garlanded the mouldy walls. A single flickering light bulb cast greasy shadows across the foyer and into the broken lift shafts. The bannister of the stairs tilted alarmingly as Eve climbed.

She sighed with relief as she left the communal foyer and entered her apartment. Mould crept over the white paint and Eve surveyed the scene before her with quiet revulsion. Her surroundings disgusted her and she found herself wishing she was back with her mother, outside of the city, on the other side of the war.


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1/14/2011 12:44:27   
Helixi
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Part 2.


Afternoon sunlight lanced through Eve's clean window, illuminating her room. She rolled over and came face to nose with her cat, Bast, who yawned in her face and padded her cheek grumpily. Eve smiled sadly and slid out of bed, cradling Bast to her chest. The clock read 2.23, its faint green luminescence casting a sickly light across the darkened corners of the room that the sunlight did not reach. Outside the window, ash from the engine rooms fell like snow and mingled with the slush in the road. Eve stared at the ash collecting on her windowsill, her black eyes sombre.

In a darkened corner, shadows coalesced around a form. Once fully corporeal, a pale, rakish man stepped forward into the dim light. Eve released her cat and turned to him. She did not look surprised.

“Evie.” His voice was thick with suppressed emotion. “My little Evie.” He stepped forward as she moved back, his face falling as she backed away.

“Why are you here?” She asked, her melodic voice seeming to dance in the air. At her feet, Bast hissed at the intruder.

“Leave.” Eve's voice wobbles slightly as she turned away, into her tiny kitchen. He grasped her arm quickly and turned her to face him, Laying a palm against her cheek, he murmured, “Please come back, Evie, we need you. I need you.”

“Thomas, please-just leave.” Eve stepped back from Thomas quickly, feeling a spark of vindictive pleasure as his face fell again.

Eve backed into the kitchen, fumbling for something to defend herself with. He followed her into the kitchen, his eyes hooded. Bast stood between them, as if trying to protect Eve.

“Your cat is very protective of you, little Evie.” Thomas' tone was mocking and barbed. His black eyes danced with malice as he considered Eve and her cat.

“She chose me a long time ago, Thomas.” Eve felt the industrial metal unit, cold against her back. “And, I seem to remember you being there...” She angled her head, challenging him to come nearer. He shook his head, half angry, half amused.

“You don't change at all, Evie. Even living with humans for so long has not corrupted you.” Thomas shook his head, seemingly in bewilderment. “Remember, Evie, the Alliance sees what you do here; they don't like it.” Thomas smiled like a feral animal, bearing his inhuman teeth, reminding her of her own predatory heritage.

“I'll see you very soon, my Evie.” Thomas stepped back into the pool of oily shadow behind him and dissolved into it, his eyes holding hers until the last moment.
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1/14/2011 12:49:23   
Helixi
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Part 3.


“Doctor!” Eve stirred as a nurse burst through the door of her shared office.

“It's your patient, Eve!” The student nurse helped Eve scramble to her feet and directed her down the hall towards the children's ward. Eve's heart dropped to her boots as she hared down the hall, her stained white lab coat fanning out, batlike, behind her. People parted around her like water flowing round a rock, their alarm clear. Eve burst through the door, her blonde hair in disarray. The scene that met her was catastrophic.

Lying on a mattress on the floor of the overcrowded ward was her patient, the little girl. Her steam burns had been treated; they had not killed her. Clotted blood streaked her chin and matted her hair. Eve took in her blank, glassy eyes and knew she was too late. A nurse looked up and gravely shook his head, gently removing his fingers from the girl's wrist.

“How?” Eve's voice rasped in the chilly room.

“We think it was a reaction to the pain meds, Doctor. It wasn't something we could have predicted, it wasn't in her notes.” The nurse raised her hand to comfort Eve, but reeled back at the black anger welling in her eyes.

“It never is in the notes, is it?” She said quietly. Around her, nurses looked at the floor, ashamed to meet her gaze. The other doctor, newly qualified, looked faintly sick. He met her gaze for a fleeting moment, then just as quickly looked away, his face flushed. Eve stared at the other doctor narrowly, the stepped past him and drew the moth eaten grey blanket over the child's face. She wished there was more she could do.
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1/14/2011 13:10:06   
Helixi
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Part 4.


Eve bolted the door behind her and sagged gratefully against it. The night had drained her; the girl had died, along with two other engine workers. Their bodies had joined dozens of others in the morgue. The Hospital sent bodies by the hundreds to the furnaces below the walkways of New Argen, as the mysterious Bridge Crew ordered. It sickened everyone, especially Eve. She was jolted from her reverie by Bast knocking the bag of food from her arms and pawing deftly through the contents. After not finding her expected food, she mewed pitifully at Eve and padded away. Eve sighed as she contemplated the tiny amount of food littering the greasy floor, then resigned herself to the fact she wouldn't eat later. Instead, she stepped into her kitchen and reached into a concealed alcove behind the door. Alcohol was banned in the city, as it was in all cities. This was her own personal supply that had slowly diminished over the years she had lived in the moving cities, constantly hiding from herself and from her own people. Grimacing, she unscrewed the rusty top and gulped the entire bottle down. Almost immediately, she could feel the effect. Teetering, she moved to her broken mattress and collapsed, the bottle rolling out of her hand as she lost consciousness.

From the shadows of her tiny apartment, a chuckle sounded. Thomas stepped forward into the grey dawn light. He surveyed the scene before him, taking in the bottle, the cat asleep in a corner and Eve passed out on the mouldy mattress, and smiled. He hoisted Eve over his shoulder; she appeared unhealthily thin and light. He scooped the sleeping cat up under his arm and stepped back into the shadows of the corner, dissolving into the blackness.

- - -

"Unghh..." Eve moaned as she slowly returned to consciousness. Her face was damp and there was a horrible smell in the air.

"Welcome back to the land of the living, little Evie." Thomas towered over her, his cocky smile clear even in the gloom of early night. He squatted next to her and tipped her chin upwards, amused at her feeble attempts to resist.

"You look the same as you did when you left me," he murmured, "All those years; it looks like they never happened!" He dropped her face abruptly and stood quickly, his eyes hooded.

"Why?" Eve croaked.

"The Alliance wants you back, Evie." His tone was curt.

"They could have sent anyone. Why send you?" She pressed.

"Revenge, my dear."
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1/14/2011 13:14:50   
Helixi
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Part 5.


On the North plain, where cities were sent for repairs, there were small land villages. Despised by the "movers", as city dwellers were called, they were nonetheless needed to perform vital maintenance on the cities. The engines, coal, diesel and petrol, were updated occasionally, supplies were replenished, hover disks were replaced. The land dwellers swarmed over the huge metal behemoths like ants, heedless of the jeers of the city people as they performed their vital work.

A day later, Thomas was soaring over the plains, his huge crimson eighteen foot wings effortlessly carrying him and his precious cargo. In his arms, Eve was asleep, weighing no more than a child would. In her arms, the cat was asleep as well. He smiled down at Eve, marvelling at her vulnerability. Below him, a city lumbered through the pass into the North plains, its flanks ripped and twisted like an old tin can. There was a fire roaring in its engine room, Thomas could smell it; he watched in detachment as the half the city burned. In his arms, Eve stirred and blinked drowsily. As he watched the city limp to the land villages, its sides still consumed by fire and smoke, Eve fought her way free of his vice-like grip. She plummeted towards the ground, struggling to open her wings. Thomas swore and dived after them, his own wings making him perfectly streamlined. The clips he had put on Eve's wings would be difficult and painful for her to get off when she was on the ground, let alone tumbling towards a burning city hundreds of miles an hour. He came along side her, fighting to grab hold of her again before she hit the ground. He succeeded, pulling her safely back into his arms.

She howled with frustration and punched him, cleanly breaking his nose. He reeled back in pain, his rage clear. Thomas suddenly dropped her and wrenched the clips from her wings, shouting, "Go ahead, Evie, fly!" Again, she plummeted towards the ground, feathers trailing in her wake. It was agony to open her wings at all; where Thomas had ripped the clips from her wings, taking with it feathers, bone and blood. Finally, after long torturous seconds of struggling, Eve opened them, a huge fifteen foot white span. She turned and corkscrewed through the air, flying parallel to the ground only a few feet below, then turned and swooped up to join Thomas.

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