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1/27/2010 17:48:53   
ringulreith
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The House Of Song

Comments and criticism are very appreciated!


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Thank you to Fabula, iChar, Shreder, Anon, CowFace, Zerminater, and anyone else I missed for assisting me in eng101! Your help shall not be forgotten.

< Message edited by ont -- 1/27/2010 18:18:09 >
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1/27/2010 18:23:09   
Shreder
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Hehe congrats! I look forward to seeing more of your stuff.
DF MQ  Post #: 2
1/27/2010 18:40:15   
ringulreith
Member

Thanks. And thanks for all the help on Eng101, too.

Edit: Oh yeah, you guys can also gim advice on the first-post introduction poem(ish) thing.
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1/27/2010 20:00:21   
Shreder
Member

On the topic of "The House of Song", I think it ranks right up there with Moonbeam as your best work. I read through it a couple times, and while I could see places where I would put something different, I'm not going to intrude myself on your style. Anyways my ranking of your poetry:

1: Moonbeam/The House of Song
2: A Silent Glade
3: Life
4: Limericks
DF MQ  Post #: 4
1/27/2010 20:25:32   
ringulreith
Member

No, if you see places where I can improve, please do tell! I do not mind; if it seems to not be my style, I will tell you. do not be afraid to point out errors.

< Message edited by ont -- 1/27/2010 20:28:25 >
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1/27/2010 21:11:41   
Shreder
Member

That's the thing though, they aren't errors, simply places where I can see the difference between our two styles. Don't change anything about "The House of Song" for me, I think it is very good the way it is.

Oh and if you have time, would you like to pop over and look at some of my newer stuff? *wink wink nudge nudge*
DF MQ  Post #: 6
1/27/2010 23:07:58   
ringulreith
Member

Heeh. I will, when I get enough time. Real life has a habit of getting into things you don't want it to.
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