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5/2/2011 19:13:59   
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Prologue
What am I doing here? Phillip thought nervously. He was walking through Darkovia forest with nothing but the contents of his knapsack with him. He had a short sword strapped to his hip, but he knew it would be no use against the monsters here, even if he knew how to use it. Phillip was a short, stubby man. He was clean-shaven, bald, and wearing steel plate armor in order to "maximize his chances of survival," as his boss had said. He held a parchment in his hand and a fountain pen in the other; the tools of his trade. I'm a scholar, not a soldier. he thought. Why did I get this job? But he knew the answer to that, it was because of his observation skills. His boss thought he could find and study the beasts better than anyone, since he had the talent of finding things that didn't want to be found. Even so, Phillip prayed that he would not find what he was looking for. His job was to gather information on a new monster sighted in the forests of Darkovia, and he had thought that to be no problem until he took his first step into the cursed woods. Alone. After wandering the forest for three days, he had come to the realization that he was lost, running low on supplies, and defenseless in Darkovia forest. The idea did not sit well with him. The endless night of Darkovia multiplied his fear, and the dark, dead trees around him did nothing to help relieve his terror.

"What to do, what to do, what to do..." Phillip said aloud. He stopped in a small clearing, with tall, dead grasses all around him and trees standing at all sides. Their thin braches hung down like gnarled claws, preparing to snatch him from the ground. Phillip shuddered, and put his hands on his hips. He looked to his right and attempted to see through the impenetrable forest, wanting more than anything to see a house, or any other sign of civilization. Seeing none, he sighed and looked back to his front. He froze. The beast he had been told to find now stood in front of him, no more than six feet away. It had the appearance of a horse, but it's skin was constantly shifting colors. It had a horn on it's head, much like the beautiful unicorns that Phillip heard stories about, but this monster was anything but good-looking. It was the size of the large Clydsdale horses that were used in some of the kings parades, maybe slightly larger, and much tougher-built. It had a pair of large wings, tattered and missing several feathers. Scorch marks could be seen on some, and the rest had the appearance of decay. The beast's body was horrifically injured, with a gaping wound on it's right side, showing several ribs. Similar cuts were on it's left flank and right calf. It's jawbone could be seen in the abscence of skin over the lower left side of it's face, and it's teeth were a row of needles; long, thin, and razor-sharp. As Phillip's gaze shifted to the monster's eyes, he saw intelligence, but the eyes were cruel, merciless, and penetrating. Fear spread through Phillip's body like a disease, the cold terror flowing from head to toe. This was the monster he was to study, but he knew he would not leave this place alive. He drew his sword, knowing that it would be useless; previous studies had revealed that the creature's skin was impenetrable to any physical harm and heavily resistant to magic. He also knew that these creatures could not be killed, only captured or disabled. StyxSteeds, that's what they were called, named after the mythical river that ran in the underworld of ancient mythology which could make mortals invincible by bathing in it. Phillip took a step backwards, holding his sword in front of him and awaiting the end.


The beast watched back. It examined the small figure before him, searching out it's weaknesses. This is one of the two-legs. It thought. It had watched as Phillip drew his sword and stepped back, radiating fear like the moonlight that fell from the sky. This creature holds one of the long-stones. Long-stones do not harm me. The monster took a step into the clearing and watched the little two-legs move away. It retreats. thought the monster. It is prey. The beast opened it's flame-lung, the sac in it's chest that it's fire came from, and let the flames trickle into it's mouth. Fire crept around it's teeth and grew until flames reached it's eyes. It watched as it's prey stumbled over a root and scrambled away, attempting to run. The beast opened it's wings, and they ignited. Fire filled each feather, bringing to life what once was dead, and lifting the monster from the ground. It flew between trees, easily catching the little two-legs that now looked back in terror. Such easy prey. thought the monster. It opened it's mouth, throwing flames from it's throat. The fire struck the little two-legs in the head, and it lived no more.

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5/2/2011 22:13:58   
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Chapter 1: Just Another Battle
"Hans! We can hold the front, go for reinforcements!" shouted Yulgar as he crushed the skull of yet another NightZard. The creatures never seemed to stop coming. Yulgar wore his ordinary blacksmith gear, holding his twin hammers at the front of the line. He stood with two dozen Guardians on the hill just North of Battleon, beating back the hordes of Zards charging like mad bulls toward them. The otherwise peaceful hill was now covered with bodies, blood flowing freely from nearly every soul, living or dead, in the fray that raged in the fantastic scenery of Battleon's surrounding hills. Yulgar stood at point, with the two dozen Guardians in a wedge formation behind him, all fighting like demons, and not the good kind. Zards of all kinds ran toward the city of Battleon, thousands of monsters leaping at the weary defenders of the great city. Hurry up Hans. thought Yulgar. We're getting tired out here.

Hans was in fact hurrying, almost too much so. As he ran back toward town, he crashed into Artix as he walked across the road towards the Guardian Tower. Hans fell onto his back while Artix hardly seemed to notice.

"In a hurry, are we?" said Artix with a smile.

Hans stood quickly, panting for breath. "Yes, a fight broke out north of town, and the Guardians there are getting tired. I was sent to get help."

"Then go no further." said Artix. "I know where you can find Pete, our town hero. He's teaching a class two blocks west of here, at the military training center."

"Thank you." said Hans breathlessly. He took off running west.

Meanwhile, Pete was teaching a group of young Guardians about the difficult art of knife-wielding. He was not impressively built, but any man who faced him in combat did not recommend doing the same. Pete was the town hero, decorated for heroics in combat, politics, community service, construction, and every other service that could be done for the town. Yet it was impossible to believe that this man was deadlier than the most dangerous assassins and possessed magical power that rivaled the Blue Mage himself. His face was pockmarked, and he did not have an intimidating figure. His build was slim and he had long, black, hair. His face was cleanly shaven and he wore the black armor of the Assassin's Guild, but any man that knew him did not call him a merciless killer. His brown eyes were full of intelligence, and they seemed to penetrate through a man's very soul. As he spoke, the young Guardians in the room listened with rapt attention.

Pete spoke with a clear voice, "...Now, a very important thing to learn about combat with knives is which knife to choose. The traditional iron and steel knives are durable, but they lose their edge fairly quickly and have difficulty making a clean cut. A ceramic knife is a decent alternative weapon, since it can be sharpened significantly more than it's steel counterparts, and holds it's edge longer. It's only downside is that it can not withstand the impacts of heavy combat and can shatter if swung or thrown into a shield or armor. The ceramic knives are highly useful when-" Someone knocked on the door. "Come in!" shouted Pete.

Hans stumbled, exhausted into the room. "P-Pete," he began. "North of town...there's...there's a fight, and they need you."

"All right, I'll head there immediately. Class dismissed!" he said, walking to his bag behind a sturdy oak desk as the Guardians-in-training moved toward the door. He reached inside the worn leather backpack's only pouch and removed a clean, long sword from it's magically enchanted opening. The blade gently radiated magical energy, and consisted of a golden handle, decorated with a stout crossguard, and a long, double-edged blade. Pete checked his assassin gear, then noticed Hans examining his sword. "This is Raynar's Superior Blade." he said. "I got it from Warlic a while back. It's a good weapon. Now, where did you say the battle is?"

Hans composed himself, "Yulgar and some Guardians are fighting just north of town, there are mostly Zards, but there are thousands of them."

"All right, that's all I need to know." Pete answered. He pulled up his hood and leapt upward to a windowsill facing north. He flipped open the window and jumped out. Hans ran over to see where he landed, but was unable to see him.

"Heroes..." said Hans, shaking his head. "Always prefering the dramatics." He thought briefly about how fun it would be to kill monsters for a job, then remembered seeing a dragon for the first time and dismissed the idea.

Pete ran silently through the streets of Battleon, moving swiftly and lightly past the Guardian Tower and it's neighboring buildings. He heard the fight before he saw it. The sounds of pain, weapons clashing on bone, and the howls of the wounded reached his ears while he moved up the backside of a hill. As he reached the top, he looked into the wide valley thirty feet below him. The Guardians had held their formation as well as they could, but the occassional Zard had made their way through the line and now advanced towards town. Pete alone stood between nearly a dozen Zards and the Guardian Tower behind him. Twelve Zards and one me. he thought. Not bad odds. He drew a ceramic throwing knife from his belt, and threw it into the throat of the nearest Zard. The green creature gurgled and staggered to the ground. Pete removed his AutoCrossbow from his back and loaded it. He took aim at another Zard and fired. He did not miss. He repeated the action with the other ten Zards, exhausting the Crossbow's ammunition supply.

"Pete! What are you waiting for?" shouted Yulgar from the front of the wedge. He had glanced over his shoulder briefly to check on the Guardians and had seen the town's hero standing idly with a strange gun in his hands. Slacker. he thought. Still, we could use more slackers who have the skill he does.

Pete suddenly appeared next to Yulgar. "What was I waiting for?" he said. "I shot down a dozen of those things just before you turned around to insult me. Oh, excellent timing by the way." He smiled smugly.

Yulgar pushed back a Zard with a brutal kick, following up with a quick hammer strike to the skull. "Nah, we were just making sure the fight was safe enough for our hero to come in." He returned the smile.

Pete laughed, "All right, so I guess you won't be needing me to do this next time, will you now?" He put his hands together in front of him, as if he were making a snowball during the Frostvall festival. A faint hissing sound was made as air was compressed together into an invisible sphere between his hands, building up massive pressure that was contained only by magic. When he was satisfied with the pressure build-up, Pete opened his hands toward the oncoming Zards. A massive invisible blast of air exploded forward in front of the town's hero, decimating hundreds of Zards instantaniously. The remaining Zards turned away from this new threat and fled back to their master, desperate to avoid the same fate they had just seen their brethren experience.

Pete clapped his hands together. "Well, I guess that's that." he said.

Yulgar looked at him, slack-jawed. "Well you could've come by and done that earlier!" he exclaimed with a chuckle.

"But how could a little hero like me go into a battle that unsafe without you people cleaning it up first?" Pete answered with a touch of good sarcasm. He smiled.

Yulgar let out a deep laugh. "Nice to have you here, my friend." He shook hands with the hero, then looked at the fleeing Zards. The ZardMaster was barely visible from this distance, but Yulgar would have sworn that he saw him turn and shake his head in wonder at the combined power of the Guardians of Battleon and their hero.

Pete turned and walked away, heading towards his home. That was easy. he thought lightly. As he entered Battleon's streets, he looked up at the sun shining brightly in the sky. A large, black bird flew through the air, screeching loudly as it smelled fresh meat in the battlefield below. The sight of the dirty scavenger tainted the beauty of the mid-day sky, and Pete looked back at the road. He saw one of King Alteon's guards walk toward him with a grim look on his face.

"Pete," the guard said. "We need you to meet with the King."

"Why?" Pete asked.

The guard grew uncomfortable. "I hate to be the bearer of bad news," he began. "But we're going to war."

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5/8/2011 17:00:32   
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Chapter 2: The End of the Beginning
Pete walked with the guard into King Alteon's palace, their feet clacking on the marble floor. Brilliantly-colored arches spanned the ceiling, and tapestries hung on the walls, bringing a wave of color into the room. Pete looked down the hall of the famous building; three doorways lined each wall, and one enormous steel door sat at the end, directly in front of Pete and his escort.

"Head through the door at the end of the hall, King Alteon waits for you there." said the guard.

Pete approached the door and it swung open on it's hinges, splitting in the middle as a servant somewhere pulled the door open. He stepped through and entered the throne room of the King. A sixteen-foot table sat in the center of the room, with chairs on every side. The King's throne was placed at the head, heavily-decorated and more than likely heavily-priced. The impressive King Alteon sat in the extravagant chair, as two men stood behind him. King Alteon wore an expensive gold tunic, white silk pants, and a red cloak. His pure 24 carat gold crown rested on his head. The man to the King's right was bookish-looking; he wore round spectacles and the formal robe of a scholar. He had a nervous disposition and constantly twiddled a quill in his hands. He seemed to be uneasy about being in the presence of both the King and now the country's hero. The other man looked to be the perfect opposite of the first. He stood proudly, as if he wanted everyone to see his military medals adorning the red Guardian armor he wore. He had a gruff beard and his eyes displaced an air of competence.

"Welcome," said the King. "I would like you to meet Travis and General Tuth. They will be explaining your assignment after you learn of the...situation we are in." He cleared his throat. "As my guard told you, we are now at war. But our enemy has superior technology, numbers, and resources, and there is no direct way to win."

"Who are we fighting?" Pete asked.

"I will explain in a moment," answered the King. "Now, where was I? Oh yes, the cause. This infernal war began when an assassin was paid by an unknown person to kill a the leader of a neighboring area. That area belongs to the Asgardians."

Pete's face flashed an expression of shock, "The Asgardians create some of the most powerful Mastercraft armor in the world! Their energy monsters could overrun nearly the entire kingdom in little time at all."

"That is why we need you to help us create a superior army." said the King. "Travis, please explain the plan to our friend here."

The bookish man called Travis began to speak in a thin, tenor voice. "There is a monster that is better than all others." he began, "This monster lives only in the deep forest of Darkovia, but there are a fairly largy number of them. They were recently discovered by some scholars studying plant-life near the Vampire Castle, and so we sent researchers to learn more about them. Now these monsters can not die. They can be disabled, but they can not die. They can breathe fire, fly, camoflage themselves, create the emotion of fear in their prey, and their skin is impenetrable to physical attack. That skin is what we need. Our theory is that if we use the skin of these monsters as armor for our elite soldiers, we could create super-soldiers capable of beating the Asgardian energy creatures and even the Asgardians themselves. These monsters are called StyxSteeds; named after the mythical river that can make people immortal."

"If these monsters are invincible, then how can we get the skin from them?" Pete asked.

King Alteon looked to General Tuth. "Explain what the researchers discovered, General."

The General coughed roughly once, then began. "While these monsters have impenetrable skin and enormous strength, they do have one weakness. They do not have the ability to heal from injuries. So, our theory was that if we find a substance that can damage them, we should be able to disable the creatures since they can't recover from the injury. Our researchers learned that the poison of a Chimera is like an acid them. We have had limited success by using traps that apply Chimera poison to the monsters and then stop the creature's movement."

"What must I do to help, your highness?" asked Pete.

"As Tuth said, we have limited success. Many times, the monsters have been able to escape the trap with only a few wounds. The soldiers manning the traps are usually...killed by the beasts." said the King. "We need you to both hunt Chimeras with us and keep the StyxSteeds in the trap once we catch them."

Pete laughed briefly. "Oh, is that all?" he asked jokingly.

"Since you seem confident, it should be safe to tell you that this job has been taken before. There is a two percent survival rate for the first trap. The probability decreases sharply for every trap afterwards." the King said.

Pete's face paled. "Oh." he said. "This may be difficult, then."

"Yes, very." replied the King.

"When do you want me to start?" asked Pete.

The King looked to his General. "My General is in charge of the operation. He can explain."

"Thank you, your highness." said the man. "We plan on leaving tomorrow to hunt Chimeras. Meet me and my men at Yulgar's forge first thing in the morning."

Pete nodded. "I will see you then."

"You have your assignment, you may leave." said the King.

Pete bowed respectfully. "Thank you." He turned and walked out the door. As he left the palace, Pete noticed that the sun was now blocked by many dark clouds on the horizon. Not a good sign. he thought. But I've beaten hundreds of monsters before, how bad can this one be? The hero would soon find out that these monsters were unlike anything he, or the world, had ever seen.

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