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7/3/2011 11:39:25   
Carly9467
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Part One: United

“Achillea, Would you like to join me?” Clown The Jester asked me. Clown was one of my friends, and he seemed like a really nice guy, and probably a good leader. So I replied with one, very short, confident word. “Sure.” Immediately after I said that, I wanted to take it back. But then, I remembered my mother Graveylen. and father. I never knew my father. And my brother, Velmur. The most annoying
good-guy you could ever meet. Well, now I am his enemy, so that's a good thing. When I was younger, my mother told me I had a twin. I can't remember what she looks like, or what her voice sounded like. All I can remember about her is her name is Ciela, and she ran away. I don't know why, and neither does mother. No one has seen her since. We all expect she has gotten eaten by a monster or something. Bleh. Good thought, huh? “Goodie!!! What are your powers, I may ask?” Clown ventured. “I am a Shape-Shifter.” Me and Ciela were the only Shape-Shifters in the family. It's kinda cool. “Double goodie! That could be VERY helpful!” Clown exclaimed. He seemed happy. Good for him. Good thing he's a friend. I would have gotten very annoyed with all his “WAHAHHAHAHAHAHA” things very quickly if he wasn't a friend. “So what do I do in the clan?” I asked. I wanted to know if I was gonna be the person who goes and gets lunch if all the other clan members were to lazy to get up and go get food. “You're gonna help me defeat Velmur and Drakkoniss!” Clown looked very pleased with himself. Eck. I really didn't feel like killing Drakkoniss. Velmur, heck yeah. I could do that any day. But Drakkoniss...hes a close friend. I couldn't do it as easily. Clown can do it. He'll probably throw a party when those two are gone. He's like that. But I'm not. I don't go around killing people for the fun of it. But to bad. Because you joined chaos. So stop being a big baby. I told myself. Ugh. I hate it when I yell at myself. “What was that..?” Clown suddenly whispered. “What..?” “Shh!!! Listen!” There. I hear it now. Rustling? So? It could be an animal or something. “Here I'll find out what it is.”

***

Ciela, Achillea's long lost twin sister, hid in a shrub. She though she found Achillea, but she wasn't sure because it's been so many years. Suddenly, she saw the girl she thought was her sister turn into a wolf. The wolf started sniffing. Yup. That's her. Ciela burst from the shrub. “Achillea!” She cried. Finally. She could see her sister, without having to worry about talking to the wrong person. “I’ve missed you so much!” Achillea turned back into human-form. She and Ciela slowly walked toward each other. They looked nothing alike. Achillea had purple eyes. Ciela icy blue. Achillea had blonde hair. Ciela pale brown. But they both had pale skin. That's the only reason Ciela knew it was her sister. Also because Achillea is the only other female shape-Shifter that Ciela's aware of. Ciela and Achillea flew at each other, giving each other a big bear hug. “I missed you too!” Achillea whispered. “Soooo much..” Achillea looked her sister up and down, Ciela did the same. They didn't look like twins, but they sure did act the same. Ciela admired Achillea's purple and black Iron Eagle armor. Achillea admired Ciela's looks. Her eyes were beautiful. Her hair silky, smooth and light. Both their skin was pale and smooth. “How did you survive?” Achillea asked. Ciela was day-dreaming. She instantly awoke. “Oh..uh...I don't really know. I just kind of..well...I don't know...Survived.” Achillea giggled. So did Ciela.

***

I didn't know what to say next. I just felt amazed. I haven't seen this girl in what, 10 years? 11? I always wondered about her, and now I can ask what happened!
“So, why did you leave?” I asked Ciela. I really wanted to know this question. It's been my question ever since she left. “Me and Mother had a fight. She said that I was to be the maid of the house, you the princess. I really didn't like that. She said that you were born after me, so that technically, you were the baby of the house, and I was the older twin. She said I was going to have to take care of all the chores and everything until you were older. We got into a yelling fight, until I couldn't take it any longer. I packed clothes, food, and I left.” I was amazed. I listened very closely to the story as Ciela described the fight. What I forgot was that Clown was standing right next to me. He, too, was listening. Ciela didn't seem to care, though. All she cared about was telling her sister what happened. “We were never there for each other. I with I had stayed. I made a really bad choice, and I regret it. I'm sorry.” I was at a loss for words. I couldn't speak? Wow. Stupid voice. Oh. There it is. But before I could speak, Clown spoke. “Wowzers! Achillea, I didn't know you and....who? Kiel? Were this close!” I stared at him. So did Ciela. “My name is Ciela.” Ciela decided to correct him. I thought I saw a flash of guilt on Clown's face, but it was immediately changed with the usual happy face of his. “Whoops, sorry, M'lady!” Ciela looked a little annoyed. I could tell she wasn't that fond of Clown. “Who is this, anyway?” Ciela asked, trying to get away of Clown's gaze. “This is Clown The Jester, leader of The Chaos Carnival.” I told my sister. She didn't looked interested. But that didn't really bother me. All I cared about was that me and my twin sister Ciela were united again.

Chapter two: Fight

Me and Ciela walked to a Hotel.
“So, What's The Chaos Carnival?” Ciela asked. She gave me a sideways glance, then looked ahead again. “It's a chaos clan...I'm in it now.” Ciela gave a little gasp. “You're EVIL?” I was a little surprised. My sister actually had a little bit of fear in her eyes. “I'm not evil. I'm Chaos.” Ciela thought through this a moment. “That's even worse. Why not be good, like me?” I stopped completely. “You're GOOD?”
Ciela nodded with pride. “Yes! Have you met Drakkoniss? I'm joining him. I might even be his sidekick!” She smiled at the thought. I didn't really like the idea of being enemies with my sister I just got to meet after 10 years. “But why? Chaos is so much more fun!” Ciela shook her head. “I like good. It's BETTER than chaos.” Ciela smiled, and kinda spit out the words real slowly, as if she was trying to make me jealous. “Uh, no it's not. Chaos beat's Good. So why in the world would you join GOOD???” I told her angrily. I don't really know why I was mad. I just..was. “Chaos is much more FUN than good! No rules! No anything!” I started to raise my voice a bit. “But you can take PRIDE in being GOOD!” Ciela yelled back. Soon we were in a full yelling fight. Some people even stopped to stare for a moment. “Then if we're gonna act like this, I don't want to be part of your life anymore!” Ciela started to cry a little bit. She turned into a wolf, turned around, and ran away. I just stood there. *Why did I do that?* I thought to myself. *Why?* I got so mad at myself I ran toward the hotel. “Give me the best room you've got!” I angrily hissed to the manager. The manager nodded, looking terrified, and gave me a key. I stalked over to the elevator, banging on the button that said, “5” on it. The button started flashing. But I could care less. All I could think about was Ciela, and her last words. They rang clearly in my head. “Then if we're gonna act like this, I don't want to be part of your life anymore!” I sighed. I didn't like how we fought. But I also didn't like how Ciela was good. Why can't she just JOIN Chaos like I did so we don't have to fight?* I asked myself. But it really wasn't up to me. It was up to Ciela.

***


Ciela ran and ran. She didn't look back. Just like she didn't when she ran away from home. She could hear her sister's words ringing in her head. “Chaos is much more FUN!” She cried at the thought of her and her sister caught in a battle. Suddenly, someone yelled one word. “STOP!” Ciela screeched to a stop. In front of her stood a man, not much older than her. He had reddish hair, reddish glowing eyes, and purple and black armor. He looked down at Ciela. Oop. She was still in wolf form. She suddenly remembered this, and she turned back into a human. “Hmm...Shapeshifter, I see.” Said the man curiously. He walked around me, his arms cradled behind him. He stared me up and down. “What is your name?” He finally asked. “I am Dreamer.”

< Message edited by Carly9467 -- 7/17/2011 2:01:16 >
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8/11/2011 2:02:58   
Carly9467
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Chapter 3: A dreamer

Ciela tilted her head a bit, wondering about Dreamer for a second. Then she shuddered back to reality, and whispered, “Ciela.”
Dreamer nodded. "Cool name."
Ciela sighed angrily.
“What?” Dreamer asked, giving a concerned look. Ciela pushed him away.
“Why were you trying to sound all sophisticated? It was annoying.” Ciela finally asked.
Dreamer shrugged. “I don't know.”
Dreamer didn't look much older than Ciela. He had an old dark-purple John Lennon T~shirt on, a pair of blue jeans, ripped~ up sneakers, dark brown shaggy hair, dark brown eyes, tanned skin, and looked to be about 14.
Ciela closed her eyes, trying to navigate a plane to get rid of this..this..loser. Then it came to her.
“Why don't we play a game?” Ciela suggested. “Like what?” “Hide 'n' Seek.” “Alright. I'll be it.”
Exactly how I planned. Ciela thought devilishly to herself.

“O.K. I'll count over here.” Dreamer pointed to a big, thick tree. Ciela nodded. “Count to one hundred.”
Ciela told him. When Dreamer nodded, Ciela ran off in the opposite direction. Dreamer started counting.

Ciela looked behind her before turning into a wolf.
Haha! Seeya later! Ciela thought proudly. She transformed into a wolf, running as fast as she could.

Suddenly, Ciela felt bad. A dreamer like him didn't deserve to live alone.
Ciela skidded to a stop.
Should I go and play with him? Ciela thought for a second. No, keep going. She said to herself. But he deserves better than living alone. She told herself. Why would you want to be friends with that loser?
UGH!


As Ciela debated with herself, Dreamer heard it all from behind a shrub. So that's what she thinks of me? He thought. He looked down at the ground. Then back up. Ohwell. Everyone has their reasons..


< Message edited by Carly9467 -- 8/13/2011 0:06:56 >
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8/12/2011 13:59:37   
Carly9467
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Chapter 4: A Start of Friendship

Ciela bit her lip, questioning herself on what she should do. Suddenly, she hears a rustling noise. Ciela whips around to see Dreamer, who was hiding in the shrub behind her.
“...Found you!” He says. Ciela sighed. She was not liking how this day was going.
She gripped his arm and pulled him out of the shrub. “What would you like to do? Your choice.” Ciela said regrettably. Dreamer tapped his chin with his finger for a moment. “Uhm...Oh! Wanna see something cool?” He asked enthusiastically. Ciela nodded in reply. “Ok.”
Dreamer led Ciela through the forest, until they reached a huge bush. “Be careful not to scare it.” Dreamer whispered. Ciela just nodded, but in her mind she was saying, 'scare what?'
Dreamer parted the leaves of the bush to uncover a scaly, red baby dragon. Ciela's mouth dropped.
The dragon had blood red scaly skin, with emerald green eyes. It's wings were small, so it probably hadn’t' learned to fly yet. It really was a sight to see. Ciela mouthed, “can I pet it?”
When Dreamer nodded, Ciela reached out her hand. The dragon's head shoved itself back, and so did Ciela's hand. But Ciela didn't give up. She was going to pet this dragon. Again, Ciela reached out her hand. The dragon's head went back again, but Ciela kept her hand there. The dragon soon realized that Ciela was no threat, and snuggled it's head in Ciela's hand.

***


I slammed the door of my hotel room behind me. I was still angry at Ciela. She was good! How can my sister be GOOD!?
I threw myself on the bed, frustrated. Sometimes, I hated myself. Sometimes, I hated my life. But this is not one of these times. Right now, I hate Ciela, which is rare, because I just reunited with her.
As I thought to myself, I realized how hungry I was, so I trotted downstairs to the dinning area.
There was plenty of food there. Right now, it was dinner time, so they had a lot of big meals, like: Ribs, chicken, steak, pasta, they even had ice-cream for dessert!
I picked up a plate, and started making my way around the tables. I think I'm gonna be content for awhile.

***


Dreamer tapped Ciela on the shoulder, mouthing, “It's time to go.” Ciela nodded and gave the dragon an air – kiss, then stumbled away.
“It's so cute!” Ciela ushered as they walked. The sun was starting to set now, and Ciela suggested that they try to find a nearby Hotel, or they'll end up sleeping on the ground tonight.
Ciela transformed into a wolf, and ran the way she came, Dreamer on her heels. She ran around trees, jumped over tree stumps, bolted around bushes, and finally made it into the city. She gasped for air. She had never run that far and fast without stopping. She transformed back into a human, and said, “Let's go find that Hotel.”

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