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10/18/2011 10:56:51   
Vector
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 here's the story

just don't forget to discuss once and a while, ok? ^^
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10/18/2011 16:21:11   
Goldstein
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*Ahem*...you have caught my attention.
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10/18/2011 16:41:26   
Vector
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 patience, young grasshopper... ;)
maybe strebor could try his... ehm... slightlydecayedbutstillverygrosslooking hand at this new opportunity... well, unless he's too busy or maybe even... ah, never mind, i just wanna know if he'd be willing.
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10/18/2011 16:51:52   
Goldstein
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Strebor will do lots of things. This would, I imagine, be one of the more pleasant ones.
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10/18/2011 16:56:26   
Vector
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 so... does that mean he'll try?
are you even sure what i'm talking about?
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10/18/2011 17:44:59   
Goldstein
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I don''t mind at all, I know you'll do him right.
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10/18/2011 18:05:27   
Vector
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 hmm... ok... looks like i'll have to come up with a believable reason then since...
spoiler:

you don't mind strebor getting an aquatian for a girlfriend... :|
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10/18/2011 20:55:45   
Drakkoniss
Creative!
Constructive!


 Greetings, random guy who seems to have created a new story, who I am also trying to /goto in-game, but am sad about being in Jemini where we can't talk!

Ready for the comments? No? I SHALL DO IT ANYWAY!!!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

But aaanywho...

Interesting prologue... Hard to comment much on it, other than the opportunities down by the river to be something to think about the effects of later... but a nice foundation, with intriguing questions, nonetheless.
DF  Post #: 8
10/18/2011 21:18:45   
Vector
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 random guy... who, me? :P

i don't expect much comment at all, since i didn't really put much length-wise into it.

*candle suddenly appears over head* idea! i want to make something that can fit with this song, but even i'm not sure if i can do it right. that's where i want help here.
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10/18/2011 21:24:06   
Drakkoniss
Creative!
Constructive!


 I love it when people have cnadles instead of lightbulbs... It's even funnier when their head catches on fire...

Oh, and sadly, I am not allowed to watch Youtube vids without express permission, so I cannot help unless you explain it/post the lyrics.
DF  Post #: 10
10/18/2011 21:32:02   
Vector
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 major bummer. see if you can listen to it some other way if you can, but here they are in spoiler format
spoiler:

Fear and panic in the air
I want to be free
From desolation and despair
And I feel like everything I sow
Is being swept away
Well I refuse to let you go

I can't get it right
Get it right
Since I met you

Loneliness be over
When will this loneliness be over

Life will flash before my eyes
So scattered and lost
I want to touch the other side
And no one thinks they are to blame
Why can't we see
That when we bleed we bleed the same

I can't get it right
Get it right
Since I met you

Loneliness be over
When will this loneliness be over
Loneliness be over
When will this loneliness be over
name of the song is "Map of the Problematique"


drakky's not the only who can help. if anybody has an idea how to use this as part of my story, say it. i might need all the help i can get here

< Message edited by Vector -- 10/18/2011 21:42:59 >
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10/18/2011 22:10:59   
Drakkoniss
Creative!
Constructive!


 I PMed you ideas.
DF  Post #: 12
10/18/2011 22:29:17   
Vector
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 replied to those ideas
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10/18/2011 22:36:14   
Goldstein
Member

Vector: You have no idea how excited I am. I can only imagine how're that's going to go down. Strebor is a suave fellow, so...
Post #: 14
10/18/2011 22:37:57   
delta blitz
Member

@vector: loneliness eh? *grins to himself* I know alot about loneliness but I don't think you want any of my tips( trust me you don't wisdom and life experience can be a very scary thing when mixed with imagination and sadistic thought patterns).
AQ AQW Epic  Post #: 15
10/18/2011 22:50:28   
Vector
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 try me delta. i'm no lily-liver
Post #: 16
10/18/2011 23:30:08   
delta blitz
Member

@vector: ok lets try having something more important to your character than his own life ripped from him right from in front of his face. Then lets have him beaten within a inch of his life and then shipped away into slavery on a isolated island that has harsh and random weather changes where he is forced to work the fields everyday( no matter what type of weather is going on,in only a pair of pants and a shirt) and carry heavy nobles(whom are evil and whip his legs as he walk) on his back and if he falls, talks back or tries to escape he will be viciously tortured. Start from there and tell me how it goes.
AQ AQW Epic  Post #: 17
10/18/2011 23:37:26   
Vector
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 you couldve at least had the decency to PM me this and spare everyone else the suffering... :P

however, this is only just an idea brainstorm, so nothing is really set in stone at the moment
Post #: 18
10/19/2011 0:54:41   
Shadowlord9k
Member

Saiyan: Hmmm let's see:
spoiler:


-Character gains powers
-Uses newfound powers to weaken the nobles
-Starts a revolution with the help of other slaves
-Falls in love about here-ish
-Corrupt nobles all die
-Lives happily ever after with love
yeah I can see a happy ending with that.

Vector: Well the "suffering" was not that bad, but maybe that's just me. I do have a plot idea, but I will PM it to you if you ask (and also work on the wording a bit.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 19
10/19/2011 9:14:29   
Vector
Member
 

 hmmm... alright, i'll bite. lemme see it.
Post #: 20
10/19/2011 12:46:51   
Shadowlord9k
Member

I have decided it to just post it here, but in spoilers, anyway my idea is:

spoiler:


Something is stalking the unnamed protagonist, he doesn't know who or what it could be. It could be a villain, seeking..."volunteers" for Skulldeep's newest experiment. It could be some evil monster that needs the unnamed Guy's help to gain back it's full power. It could even be a aquatian, for whatever reason you may think up.

As you can see it can also be more...frightening then Saiyan's idea, and it has more open possibilities.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 21
10/19/2011 13:27:20   
Vector
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 @SL9K: definitely opens the gate pretty wide, but i think i'll mod that idea to make it less frightening just because i can :P (actually, it kinda gave me a good idea that i can make it less threatening than both of your ideas)
Post #: 22
10/19/2011 13:34:52   
Shadowlord9k
Member

Vector: It's your story, I was just giving you a few ideas. It is entirely up to you to decide what you want to write, either way I wouldn't recommend the Sushi.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 23
10/19/2011 13:42:43   
Vector
Member
 

 is that what you call the aquatian?
who said i had to use whatever idea that came up first anyway? :P
anywho, i'll be able to think of something to mold this into
Post #: 24
10/19/2011 13:55:26   
Shadowlord9k
Member

I was just saying sushi in general, anyway I'm sure you will come up with a great idea.

A joking suggestion:
spoiler:


-Aquatians go to war with surface dwellers, all because the leader of Japan provided the food for the (world) peace talks involving the Aquatians...
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 25
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