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2/17/2012 5:54:40

Immortales
Banned

Chapter 1

Please comment on my work might help it improve: Needed Immortal Help

By: Elissa

721 B.C.

This is the day my grandson is born. It is also the day my daughter died. It is a day of mixed emotions. You see my grandson was born an unusual way. This day earlier my...my.. daughter died before giving birth. It was a sad day of how two lives were lost in a blink of an eye. This was very unfortunate that's what we thought. At my daughter's ceremony her body was burned. This was a sad day for my family and relatives. Ashes all that was left it's how a life ends in this world. IT was downright unfair I cursed and cursed the ground the sky even to myself. A lot of people mourned once more then an unfamiliar crying joined with us a baby's cries. Everyone else started stopping and were frozen in fear,awe, and confusion. These cries seemed to be coming from the .. the.. ashes. I took a step. Someone said "NO!! don't take a look not there, you're mad don't even think about it!!!!."

I didn't mind her andwent on then more people said "No!! Don't it's not there." I walked closer everystep faster than the last I knew this was gonna be a tale left in the mist in the days past. But but I just needed to see the truth. Looking around the people went nuts corner to corner left right like mad people. Denying the fact the truth that it came from the ashes. As I got closer the crying went louder and louder!!!. It was getting more intense by the closer I got there was this uneasy feeling from the ashes. This isn't your ordinary day. Then I got so close that now I can see the pile of ashes left. I stood there and a wild wind came to blow the pile of ashes. I looked down almost dead from an attack I could not handle I laid on the ground fainted as with the others.

The people remembered this day the day the boy from the ashes was born. I named him Asch the immortal child from the fury of fire to the ashes and gore. His coming to this earth was unusual and saying that. It I mean he Asch was normal looking and I do hope he lives his LIFE the fullest. Out of death comes the life of another.

Memories of the Immortal

I don't know what got into me about half the day I was hanging. My friends treat me well why do adults look at me this way?

This was the second time this day in an hour interval that I ended up being tied to a tree branch.

I got hungry so I went to the temple to eat. That was kinda it for me but people say it's a holy place in our city blah blah..

The temple was closer to my spot than grammy's house so I went there instead. It makes perfect sense!!!

So why am I hanging here! for the second time!! .....Hmm now that I think about it I did push the teacher off the window.

Wait he slapped me and hit me with his' stick thing first! Uhmm my rabbit is funny. Wait what?! Hey why am I hanging again?

Oh yeah I placed ropes around everyone's door steps then they tripped hehehe.. I remember that oh yeah we have rocky roads do we?!

Huh what am I saying Uhhgg.... Blech!! *cough* *cough* oh men I am getting messed up from all these what happened again?

A leaf went to the ropes just above me that cut them. I thought "showoff". I then remembered i am faaalliiing. Doug!! Pak!! I hit my
head on a rock.

The last thing I saw was a girl smiling at me pus the blood dripping from my head. I then fell unconcious for the next hour.

By: Elissa

I just learned that my Asch fell from a tree branch! I got to hurry to my grandson he's the legacy my only daughter left. His father didn't keep him long he died in a battle when Asch was just 1year old. I then took him in my custody shortly afterwards. Asch is a pretty naughty boy for a 5 year old. The punishments given to him a hit on the head, hanged upside down a tree branch, dipped in the water for a time then slammed bach on it and shaking his head numerous times. Those punishments will only make it worse for him. I can't think of what that child would do next. It might get even worse he was hanged from a tree branch twice!! ina a day a total of about 8hrs!. Oh goodness and now he fell on his head! I hope he is okay. I just hope so..please please be so..

Marks of hate

Grandad Poppy: "That darned Asch fool! look at my head that bump is huge." "I tripped because of that 'mistake' he said about putting a rope tied firm on my door step!!"

Kazim: "That's all you got I have a broken nose!"

Frees: "Pffity Your all so stupid and idiotic I needed two words of the same meaning to describe you!, I lost an eye cause of that 'prank' he did."

Cypran: "Pop it's your wife that held him in anyway!,it's your fault."

Grandad Poppy: "Oh who are you to complain did you even trip PUNK!!."

Cypran: "... I uhm stbbed my toe?...."

Frees: "I lost an eye.. an eye..." points at his lost eye "you stubbed you toe?"

Kazim: "What are you even blaming Pop about.. " points at nose "do you see my nose?"

Grandad Poppy: "Look at my head" gestures his head how it has bruises and a big big bump that's red as a pimple "do you even see
us?"

The 3 injured guys clenched their fists

Cypran: Hey hey! it's Asch were talking about....

The 3 injured guys move their shoulders ready to fight

Cypran: WHoa!!! wait were friends here....

The 3 injured guys get closer fis ready

Cypran: Uhmm? drinks on me?.. no please don't!..

3 guys: Alright! you got yourself a deal

Present Day

"These memories cloud my thoughts it's hindering my work"
Flips the burger patty in the air and uses the spatula to slice it in 50 pieces
"I still got it"
Looks into the widow and the sky
"I have to many what ifs in my life."
Shakes head
"okay back to work."

looking at Asch err Immortales his form seems to change child,teen,old,middle age etc.

< Message edited by Immortales -- 2/27/2012 7:16:01 >

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2/27/2012 7:18:46

Immortales
Banned

Chapter 2

Present Day
As I walk to my apartment building. I saw battles raging and smasher sfter smasher hittng each other. Robots clashing seemingly not caring about all the citizens around.After all these years history repeats itself. As you know I hate history it reminds me of my past and after living so long and being unable to fully forget hurts. I decided to let them stay with all these action. I climed up the stairs and out of my sheer lack of luck I tripped on rock. "What the?" I saw the rock how what is that even doing there I picked up the rock not wanting someone else to trip on it. I too it with me I went inside of my room. Nothing fancy just a bed and a T.V. a faucet a toilet all in one small room. All I needed to live I mean for a happy normal day. I put the rock on my window and summoned my triple blade scythe. "Goodbye mister rock." just then before striking the rock and blacked out. This always happens when I get a sudden flashback of my life. Something about that rock a memory close to it? what now what's a rock supposed to mean in my life. Pakk I fell on the floor as I spiraled into a dream.

Memories of the Immortal

I woke up seeing a girl in black clothes pointing a leaf at me. She seemed pale and utmost afraid.

"Huh who are you." She tossed a leaf right to face I quickly dodged left but the leaf cut a part of my right cheek.

"oww." How could a leaf even hurt me? "Hey why'd you do that?" She responded "to kill you."

"Okay that's a pretty good answer but no way!" I ran towards her and boy was I fast like a hawk on the winds!

She dodged me and her foot tripped me I rolled 3 times on theground. She picked a stone from the ground and tossed it to me.

I couldn't even see it then pak it hit my body. The stone seemingly went through my body. I thought this is how I die huh.

I felt something course to my body I quickly stood still then ran to the girl. But i'm a gentleman so I just ran towards her and she was awed and fainted before my power.
No that didn't happen. I ran towards her and started throwing leaves and stones at her.

She tried to run but I was faster she threw a rock at my heart but that just went through. Now I started slapping her and calling her meanie!!

I slapped and slapped then punched her in the belly. She cried and when I saw blood on my hands I stopped.

I didn't know what got into me They say it's a miracle she lived but after seeing her mouth coughing blood I started crying as well.

I ran knowing that I did something wrong. I realized I wasn't so clean to my head filled with blood my clothes were now red not a part
was spared. I ran the villagers looked at me like I was some freak.

I never really knew who the girl was after that day. But I thought somehow someway she might haunt me in my memories or other stuff.

I ran to my grandma's house she was so worried and awestruck by my appearance. My granddad was just there but for the first time I saw him in a diffirent state.

He was calm always and did'nt care for me but now he seemed almost afraid not for me but of me....

By: Elissa
Asch came home drenched in blood. Oh my oh my what sort of punishments did they do? What did he do? whats gonna happen? I feel like dying!! Uhh but if I do that who'll be left for him for my Asch? His grandpa just atays away from him. What's happening to this kid? What will happen to him? I gave him a bath to cleanse his wounds. But to... my suprise it was... just a few minor scratches on him but what troubled me was that big dot wound on his heart and belly. I was relieved but when Asch kept crying I calmed him down and put him to sleep.

Memories of the Immortal

This can't be happening.. to me. There was a meeting in the court about what do you know? ME not only did that suck it suck BAD.

They talked about how hazardous and bad for the minds of the youth I was. How I was a bad omen that was not in place.

So basically I had noone to go with me unfair? heck no , no, no, no, no, NO. It was just plain how do I put this they put up loooong speaches on the court.

It talked about how BAD I WAS it took 2 days to finish. among those days basically I heard that was wrong! you are wrong go away!!

Yeah they were saying pretty much this- get the heck out and we have bad stuff to prove it hahahahahahahahahahah.

Yes they laughed a lot. But the only thing that shook me was that girl I metI never knew her in the whole trial I guess the evidence was
enough.

So now I am sleeping on top of a tree away from the land I was used to. This was serious now my friends all of them away from me.

As I remember those thoughts the good times the bad they swirled around my head almost making me cry.

The memories were saying to me- look look at the life you missed. That was a heart aching moment in my life.

On my way here I wasn't allowed to bring anything and they made sure I could never walk back.

They said it was banishment but I thought- this is a death trial. Now I am alone waiting seeing how one incident ruined my life.

As I thought about it they the adults were always waiting for this one chance to flush me out of the town for good.

Marks of hate
"Is one of them here"
"The eight is out of the land Lord." "I heard he was banished"
"excellent.."

By: Elissa
The day Asch left was a tragic heart ache. The court was unfair and not one voted for him to stay. They were waiting for this chance I know they were. I never thought Asch could do such a thing. This memory might scar him for life. What if he does'nt survive oh my oh my what will happen....

THERE WAS A QUICK BUST OUT ON THE DOOR. PEOPLE SCREAMING EVERYWHERE OUTSIDE FIRES RAINING DOWN!!! FROM THE SKY. A MAN WITH A SPEAR STABBED ELISSA IN THE HEART THEN PULLED IT OUT THERE SHE FELL DOWN TO THE GROUND. HIS HUSBAND GRABBED THE SPEAR FROM THE MAN AND STRUCK HIM WITH IT. ON THE FLOOR HE FINISHED OF THE MAN WITH A STAB ON THE HEAD. "ELISSA?" "eelisssa.." "ELISSA!!!!" HE WENT OUT OF THE HOUSE AND SLASHED A RAIDER: A MAN WITH A SWORD; GRANDPA AIMED AT HIS NECK WITH THE SHARP TIP OF THE SPEAR HE CUT IT WITH EASE. GRANDPA WAS LIKE A WARRIOR OF THE OLD DAYS. PIERCING THROUGH THE ARMOR OF THE FOES WITH THE SPEAR. HE GOT A SWORD FROM THE GROUND AND THREW IT AT A FIRE BREATHER. THE SMASHER GOT A SUPRISE WHEN A SWORD CUT THROUGH HIS' HEAD WITH A SWIFT SWOOSH!!!. A SMASHER FROM THE RAIDERS THREW AN AXE AT HIM AND FIRED A LASER FROM HIS EYES. GRANDPA GOT THE AXE AND SPUN OUT OF THE LASER'S WAY. HE THEN THREW THE AXE AGAIN AT THE FOE. THE SMASHER BURNT THE AXE WITH A LOOK FROM HIS EYES AND MELTED IT. "HOHO I HEARD ABOUT YOU THE SUPER SOLDIER."" BUT YOUR NOT GONNA LIVE LONG ENOUGH TO.." HE WAS STOPPED AT HIS MOMNET A SUDDEN FAST SPEAR HIT HIM IN THE EYES THE SPEAR PIERCED THROUGH HIS' BODY. HE LAY DEAD ON THE GROUND. GRANDPA THEN SUDDENLY GOT HIT ON THE BACK WITH AN ARROW HE RAN THROUGH THE FOREST TO ESCAPE THE ENEMIES HE KNEW HIS' CHANCES WERE'NT GOOD HE WAS HEAVILY OUTNUMBERED. "THIS CAN'T BE." "IT'S WAS HIM ALL THIS TIME I SHOULD HAVE KNOW THE WORDS OF THE PROPHECY." HE MUTTERED TO HIMSELF "KEEP THEM WITH YOU AND DOOM SHALL STRAY AWAY LET THEM OUT AND SPELL DOOM TO YOURSELF!!" HE MUTTERED MORE WORDS SEEMINGLY GETTING LOUDER AND LOUDER
"THE ENTITY OF THUNDER; THE REVENANT OF STORMS; THE HEALER OF ALL DISEASES; THE WRATH OF CHAOS IN ITSELF!; THE LIGHT OF THE HOLY FLAME; THE KEEPER OF THE DOORS OF DEATH; THE SOLDIER OF TACTICS AND VICTORY; THE CHILD BORN FROM THE ASHES; THE SEEKER AND EYES OF HEAVEN; THE POWER OF-."
HE SHAKES HIS' HEAD WILDLY. "THE TH-THE CHILD BORN FROM THE ASHES!!!" "I NEED TO FIND HIM!!!"

Present Day
Wakes up "ugh man another blackout all because of a rock." Asch lifts and throws the rock hitting a clown on the streets.

< Message edited by Immortales -- 2/28/2012 4:54:30 >

Post #: 2

3/9/2012 9:03:09

Zeuzt
Member

Grandpa
Running down the forest after Asch was the only thing he was focusing on. He was trying to move on from the sudden death of his' wife and the fact that his' city where he grew up fell in love in and all the dear memories of his' life were in that city and was now spontaneously combusting and piling up into rubble.

He just had to move on keep on moving forward away from all those things that kept him from moving forward. He kept running and running around the forest at a fast speed. Punching a tree every now and then to leave a markso that he'll never get lost or go around in circles. Although he has the capabilities of 7 human beings combined he was still only a speck of dust in the forest.
"Where is that kid?" darn it I need to find him "Ahhrg!" he shouted. Better get a move on he thought to himself. Running all around the forest trails now he still did not see him. He was losing hope when he heard a scream "AHH somebody help or i'll hurt you sorry wahh okay just help it's eating me alive no ahhhh!!!!!!!" it yelped. "That's him." grandpa said. "Heck only he can probably threaten his' own help." he felt a little bit assured now but he also had to hurry...

"Movin' movin' coming through." He went straight at the sound of Asch voice as he got closer he knew it was him but he also felt more worried for everytime he went up closer Asch voice started sounding weaker and almost restrained.
Then there it was a pythagon it was like an anaconda multiplied in size by 5. That big a creature was toying with his' helpless prey... Grandpa was on top of a cliff the pythagon and Asch were about 50 feet below him. How was he gonna save him now. He moved away and turned back walking away. In his' mind voices screamed "yess ... that's it move away." "your!!! supposedly only hope of redemption and revenge and justice for your city there?!! and your letting it slip away!?!" "No NOOO!!! i'm scared." "you can't do anything now it's to late." "EVERYTHING MUST FADE!!!!" then he heard a familiar voice "I know everything fades but this child is one more life another destiny if everything must fade at least savor each moment while it last..." the voice said. "eelissa." What came next was really dumb of him.

He ran toward the the cliff at full speed and said "everything will fade sooner or later savor the moment? i'll do that right now!!!" He jumped of the cliff and went in diving position spinning around at an amazing speed. "aahh!" he was now on top of the head just a few more seconds before landing. He flipped back with feet kneeled and fist ready he landed on the head with a huge THUMP and then smack a punch on the head gravity and momentum on his side that ended the pythagon and it's head and body became stiff but the tail let go and Asch fell down.

He landed on his head and saw his' grandpa in a cool punch the ground pose. On top of the gigantic creature's head killing it and as if making it a throne for himself. Asch stood up and stared at him and said "Are you dead too?"

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