Gundisalvus
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The Death of Allison Alloway is, for all practical intents and purposes, my first completed narrative work. And before you ask, yes this play actually was performed in front of an audience. The actors seemed to really like the script, and the audience enjoyed the performance, but I'd like a more critical look at my script. I've found I just cannot judge my own work, so I'd really appreciate any comments. And as a side note, I retyped the script from a written copy as I had actually lost the original digital copy. In the process it's possible I made some mistakes. I've tried to weed them all out but man's capacity for missing obvious typos surpasses anything. So if you happen to see one, I'd appreciate mentioning it in a comment.
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