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6/20/2011 12:38:31

Prime Decantus
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Feel free to leave feedback on my poem here, Its one of the origional works by me and used to be the title of a song that our band played before we split up and went seperate ways. I used this poem to show how the world begins to change as you get older and all the fun and games slowly die away.

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6/20/2011 12:53:07

not steve
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This is quite an interesting poem, although I'm sure many would appreciate a link to it in the first post of this. (I had to go look at your recent posts list to find it.)

Would you mind a bit of a critique? Or need I ask at all?

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