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1/30/2009 19:15:12   
15cman
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Another poem called Right and Wrong.


Oh wow two pages, and quite a few poems under my belt.
DF MQ  Post #: 26
2/1/2009 18:57:41   
15cman
Member

Heh, I made a poem dedicated to Superbowl Sunday.May the best team win...*ahem* Go Steelers *Ahem*


That's weird.I read my post count from this C&C thread and it said 27, and when I looked at my post count in the C&C board it said it was 26.Strange.

< Message edited by 15cman -- 2/1/2009 18:58:46 >
DF MQ  Post #: 27
2/3/2009 10:29:49   
YukiKitty
Member

Is it alright if I ninja in to comment on your two latest?

"Superbowl Sunday": ...This one made me chuckle initially. It might be just the fact that I wasn't very interested in the Superbowl as a whole, but for some reason it also did seem a little lacking of that excitement though. I don't really know how to state it. Maybe it's just not my tastes. :/

"3": On the first read through I must say that I love how you put that verse into your own words and elaborated on each one of things "which remain." I also enjoyed the tone.

There is one spot where you forgot to put a space after the comma, and it's in the following quote:
quote:

poverty,fear,
Tadah! That's the only problem that I see.

Keep up the good work. I'll be reading. ;)
AQ DF  Post #: 28
2/3/2009 16:37:36   
15cman
Member

Thanks nfan.Your right I suppose, the Superbowl Sunday does lack the excitement associated with the Superbowl(Go Steelers), and as for that space-problem I'll fix that too.



Thanks again, ya make me feel appreciated :D *snugs*
DF MQ  Post #: 29
2/19/2009 20:59:51   
15cman
Member

*brushes off dust* Wow it's been quite some time since I last typed.So I decided to make a poem, called curious.
DF MQ  Post #: 30
3/9/2009 19:52:11   
15cman
Member

Exams are a killer, but I managed to sneak a poem in.It's called Farewell.
DF MQ  Post #: 31
3/17/2009 20:55:03   
15cman
Member

A poem called...ah...call has been made.You know where to find it :D.It's possibly one of my most favorite, so I hope you enjoy it too.
DF MQ  Post #: 32
3/28/2009 10:08:23   
15cman
Member

2 poems.Encrypted and Majesty.I really enjoyed making both of them and I hope my crowd of lurkers enjoys them too :D.
DF MQ  Post #: 33
3/30/2009 17:10:48   
15cman
Member

Revealed is up.The explanation as to why I made it is above the poem ;).
DF MQ  Post #: 34
4/25/2009 15:25:17   
15cman
Member

Fail is out.Insider poem.

So much time, yet so little.I feel alone here.I wonder if the 3 people who posted here will post again?

< Message edited by 15cman -- 4/25/2009 15:26:19 >
DF MQ  Post #: 35
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