LordDarkex
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Some of the best poetry I've found on this forum thus far. I love Fade; even without trying to read into and interpret it, the wording is beautiful. Just listening to the imagery gives off such a melancholy, mysterious atmosphere. "Flicker. The moon washes over a shadowed sea" I don't know what it is about this that gives me chills.. The raccoon series is great too LOOL it's just so funny Reading the line "He's the only raccoon in a hat" kind of bothers me a little bit cause it seems so out of place with the surrounding meter/rhythm. But it's still charming and everything ;D And your Dark Angel poem Oh my lordy lord so good To have your first 4 stanzas (stanzas? verses? I don't know) be so serious, so solemn, and then suddenly turn it around with "Coffee," which to be honest, I was not expecting at all, was complete hilarious...too genius. Or maybe it wasn't supposed to be hilarious idk coffee is some pretty serious bizniz
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