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9/19/2009 21:12:28   
Anon Y. Mous
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 I jes read through your latest poems. I'll just talk about "The Impossible".
I like the content. It made good points. The only thing that didn't quite feel right was that I got the feeling that it was kind of a broken up paragraph. (Lots of "that"s in that sentence.)


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< Message edited by green_girl02 -- 11/1/2009 22:13:50 >
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9/22/2009 23:59:20   
KageArashi
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She who writes in green,
Stands high as a queen.
With the gift of words,
like a Sheppard she herds.
Leading a generation,
through a writing vocation.
She speak her heart,
as her words depart.
Through our eyes,
it a great prize.
Which we all should keep in mind,
when our own paths we must find.
You thank you, Green_Girl,
for letting us depart with this pearl.

Ninjat Poof!
--KageArashi


< Message edited by KageArashi -- 9/23/2009 0:01:44 >

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9/29/2009 2:05:59   
Gianna Glow
Member

Lol, sorry about the wait everyone. I'll be getting to it soon. i'm almost settled into college and will be able to pick back up writing soon! :D Expect at least one poem put up tomorrow if I'm lucky... i started a new one tonight... so I should be done with it by tomorrow.
@Brante: Thanks! I'll get to work on fixing that! I'll also keep praying for you that your life settles out.
@mistermafio: Thanks! I'm glad you liked them! I purposedly did the switch there just for a change, but I've always been kinda iffy on it. I'm gonna go back and reread it and see what I think now. :D
@anon y mous: thanks! :D Glad you liked it, and yeah, it is a little disjointed. *sigh* if i ever get a ton of free time, i'm gonna go fix a lot of my poems.
@Kage: Awww! Thanks! That was so cute!
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9/29/2009 19:18:38   
Gianna Glow
Member

New poem! I actually wrote this as as a homework assignment for one of my education classes... its called Teacher
Sorry, i have one more, but I didnt finish it yet...

< Message edited by green_girl02 -- 10/1/2009 16:50:09 >
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10/1/2009 9:47:07   
Helixi
Member

Like the new one, greeny.

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10/1/2009 16:51:57   
Gianna Glow
Member

Oops, not sure what happened there.... stupid copy 'n paste button! Teaching There....
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10/18/2009 21:19:48   
Shreder
Member

I just recently came across L&L, so I'm way behind everyone else, but I would like to say your poetry is great. Anyways I'm too swamped with school work to do much in the way of critiquing now, but maybe some other time.

< Message edited by shreder110 -- 10/18/2009 21:54:35 >
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11/1/2009 22:30:04   
Gianna Glow
Member

Thanks Shreder!

Also, a note: Those of you who have noticed a lot of posts and such have disappeared. I decided to take down some of my poetry and thus had to remove all things related.
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11/18/2009 19:10:47   
BrantePyrus
Member

Any likelyhood of more poetry anytime soon?

< Message edited by BrantePyrus -- 1/20/2011 21:22:50 >
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1/16/2013 18:23:39   
Gianna Glow
Member

New poem.

The Search
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2/28/2013 17:20:53   
Gianna Glow
Member

New poem up. I wrote it for my english class. Its supposed to be a sonnet, meaning iambic pentameter, 14 lines, with a b a b c d c d e f e f g g rhyming pattern. It was fun to do.

Anyways, its called Never Again
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