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5/5/2010 20:40:26   
.::oDrew
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smoke (a love story)

i've begun a new thread because i'm
interested in creating a comprehensive,
unified body of work, with a clear theme
and overarching connection between all
of the poems contained. this train of thought
has borne "cigarettes (a love story),"
a project that is heretofore begun but
as of yet incomplete. perhaps once i
feel that i'm finished (we're poets, is
anything ever finished?), i'll expound
upon the writing process a bit more;
for now, consider yourself invited to
my poetic excursion. cheerio.

linky link/


< Message edited by .::oDrew -- 5/5/2010 22:03:39 >
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5/5/2010 21:26:28   
.::oDrew
Member

SECONDHAND

(the Prelude)

before i begin
myself -- smoking --
i with curious lungs
pass by the marlboro models
in conversation with the hollow air exhausting.
we stand, as outside the church
after a funeral, at the one-stop;
teeth click like jackhammers.
laboriously, when language runs thin,
we pull our fingers mouthward.
my pockets starve, empty.
i partake only as a witness

of the languid pale victim
writhing in a slow ballet
set to the requiem
of an exhale.

I.

on the second night
she bade my tongue permission
to her moist, rare mouth:
she has been used
before.

i exchange for heat
in currency
of single-finger strokes
and rehearsed whispers.

i watch her pour the wine
as i formulate the tango.
neither admits prowess on the floor
and yet we move in mindless unison.



ehh, this one probably isn't quite done. tell me how i'm doing.


< Message edited by .::oDrew -- 5/6/2010 17:36:55 >
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