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(COMMENTARY) The Rise and Fall of the Kingdom of Zealot

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5/26/2012 0:15:16   
VanHellsin24
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 Here it is.

Don't hold back. Destroy my soul if needed


Changed the title so people wont get confused between book and commentary updates

< Message edited by VanHellsin24 -- 5/26/2012 11:25:34 >
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5/26/2012 0:46:27   
Mortarion
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Hmm I like it, seems good
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5/26/2012 11:11:26   
VanHellsin24
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 Chapter One is complete. Had to take stuff out for the kid-friendliness of the forums. Chapters will be very very VERY long so don't expect non-stop updates.

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5/28/2012 12:21:00   
dogsrule100
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Its good so far! I liked the 1 chapter. I'm working on my chapter 1 right now. anyway...I kinda wish we could get more gory and more obvious with the bedroom...I think that it makes it harder to write and develop the characters been so well 10- age appropriate. So any way it is good so far...you should desribe the witch more...I mean is she pretty, ugly, or what?
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5/28/2012 13:39:15   
VanHellsin24
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 She appears very attractive but is actually a hag

< Message edited by VanHellsin24 -- 6/12/2012 17:27:45 >
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6/12/2012 17:43:20   
VanHellsin24
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 Chapter Two is complete
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