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7/16/2012 20:33:25   
Dragonman
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The thread is here

Tell me what you think. I'll be adding more soon!

< Message edited by Dragonman -- 1/25/2013 22:11:07 >
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 1
8/20/2012 19:00:31   
Dragonman
Member

I added the Prologue to my backstory Saga Yesterday! I'll try to add more to this backstory often, but no promises! (Also I have no spell check, so if you see a spelling error that doesn't appear to be on purpose, please tell me!)

I hope you all enjoy it!
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 2
8/21/2012 6:30:51   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
quote:

He wasn't lieing either, he'd go on to invent the submarine.


lying, about inventing a submarine <possible explanation what a submarine is as we're in medieval times and your character is a clone who (from what I understand) just hatched and isn't knowledgable about the world and its contents yet>

spoiler:

So, the Great Dragon of Water?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 3
8/21/2012 8:30:23   
Dragonman
Member

spoiler:

There is a reason he has the same name. But I don't want to give that away yet :)


Thanks for the Typo fix! And I thought I did explain a submarine. I guess I was too tired.

EDIT: This is only Chapter 1 Part 1. I'll hopefully finish it off today or tomorrow.

< Message edited by dragonman66 -- 8/21/2012 8:35:43 >
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 4
9/2/2012 0:10:46   
Glais
Member

quote:

He had almost gotten rid of it because, quite frankly, it was useless for fishing.

Zehahahaa...

Anyhow, this has proven to be quite interesting.

spoiler:

So is DragonMan66 from a distant future of Lore and more importantly...will he ever become mayor?
DF MQ  Post #: 5
9/2/2012 22:21:48   
Dragonman
Member

Thanks Glais...
Story update within 24 Hours I promise!

Chapter 1 Part 2 is up! I answered some questions!

< Message edited by dragonman66 -- 9/2/2012 22:53:03 >
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 6
9/3/2012 22:45:34   
Glais
Member

So I was right in one regard. Confusing, but interesting.
DF MQ  Post #: 7
9/4/2012 17:25:53   
Dragonman
Member

I snuck Chapter One Part Three up last night, then went straight to bed. Part Four is in the near future!
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 8
9/4/2012 17:50:34   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
quote:

I'm obviously completly aincient, I've learned how to do it to other people.

completely ancient

quote:

Like a fish that was looking out of it's bowl to see a pair of giant eyes staring at it.

its

quote:

We mustn't keep your mother waiting!"

musn't

quote:

thinking baout how being a Dragonlord

about

quote:

Theivery is not permitted in this

Thievery

quote:

What seems to be the prolem?

problem

I can see you were quite tired when you wrote this.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 9
9/4/2012 18:34:36   
Dragonman
Member

Haha, what gives you the hint... :). Thanks for the changes, I'm fixing them now!

< Message edited by dragonman66 -- 9/4/2012 18:36:45 >
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 10
9/22/2012 21:50:26   
Dragonman
Member

Chapter 2 Part 1 is up. It's just a silly little way of
spoiler:

Getting 66 out of a fight, he's only a day old after all


Hope you guys like it!
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 11
9/23/2012 5:01:40   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
quote:

unless you have good reason too.

to
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 12
9/25/2012 13:18:21   
Glais
Member

FIERY PNEUMONIA.

All that needs to be said.

I do feel the Laser guy is very out of place though.
DF MQ  Post #: 13
9/25/2012 19:24:27   
Dragonman
Member

@Glais: He's totally not based on Sparky Sparky Boom Man!

Chapter 2 Part 2 up between Today and Sunday (Depending on... things)
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 14
1/25/2013 21:11:16   
Dragonman
Member

Chapter 2 part 2 and Chapter 2 part 3 are up.

A return of a fan favorite (or at least my favorite).

Think of this as season 2 of my story, because I'll be writing more often now.
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 15
1/28/2013 6:36:37   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 I think it would be easier for your readers to read if you leave room between dialogue.

Reading your latest chapter also confused me as to where your protagonist currently is on Lore.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 16
1/28/2013 21:02:27   
Dragonman
Member

@Dwelling: Do you mean like add an empty line between the Dialogue or adding all the said the recruiters and said Sixty-Sixes in?

Also, I tried to establish that this is on an unamed second continent. Said continent is attempting to conquer what is then Slugwrath's Kingdom.

However, I didn't want to just say that.

< Message edited by Dragonman -- 1/28/2013 21:06:03 >
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 17
6/24/2013 19:41:43   
Dragonman
Member

OK, in case anyone cares, I'm mapping out a redo of this current story. What I have already written will remain, for the most part, true in the story. I'm just going to re-write it, and expand a lot on it.

However, to make sure it doesn't get incoherent, I'm going to spend a while on outlining and 'mapping' the story.

Stay tuned.
DF AQW Epic  Post #: 18
6/21/2014 15:03:36   
Dragonman
Member

I've had a criminal lack of direction so far. I've made it one of my summer projects to figure out where this is going and then redo-it, or at least do something (albeit it might be in create-a-quest)
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