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12/13/2013 17:27:47

Melissa4Bella
AmeSylph

=DF= Frostval War 2013

Here is where you can discuss each other's war stories if not in the war thread in the game forum.

< Message edited by Melissa4Bella -- 12/13/2013 17:28:55 >

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12/17/2013 11:59:00

Chaosweaver Amon
Friendly!

Well I put up the first chapter of my war story. Same characters as in my LAST war story. Any critique would be appreciated!

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12/21/2013 22:22:22

Gingkage
Wolf Rider

The only real problem I see, Amon (and sorry for saying this so late after you posted it initially), is that the story seems to assume that the people who are reading this one have read the last one. I don't actually know who Grimlon is, or why (I'm assuming it's your own rp character) is eating souls. Beyond that, it's a well-written story. Perhaps linking to your last war story to serve as an introduction to the characters (or whatever story of yours actually serves that purpose) would help with that.

< Message edited by Gingkage -- 12/21/2013 22:25:04 >

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12/22/2013 0:06:38

Chaosweaver Amon
Friendly!

Yes, I was thinking about introduction issues...I used the same characters as my 13th 13th War Story, but that doesn't explain much either. I've considered writing a full on story about them, with the individual war sagas as fillers. I'll be sure to add some info on it by the end of this one though.

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12/23/2013 21:18:01

Elryn

Custodian (DF)

*Elryn grins*

Just to tell everyone, I had a pleasure reading all these war stories during and after the war. Well done everyone.

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