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fircek -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/4/2008 15:25:22)

the first:[image]http://shrani.si/f/2z/xI/415uOXja/k.jpg[/image]
the second: [image]http://shrani.si/f/g/oh/10knp8hj/jh.jpg[/image]

1. picture: the picture is very nice done but the shining lines are to exosed. the mixture of the colors is great. every colour is fithing the other.
the character is very nice sprited and i like the white glowing sprite around it.the character and the penguin are very simbolic. the background is very nice done. but i dont agree with the mixture of colors in it.

2.picture: the picture is whoaw. impresive. the colour of the girl and the guiar are in the balance with the background. i like the glowing line from the end of the guitar neck. the eye in the background supplements the background. and the chinese letter gives the picture a symbolic essence.

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Winsrar™ -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/8/2008 15:42:53)

This is my last try.........

Art examples:
1st one
2nd one

CnC:

Alt img 1
the handle looks like it was made from 2 handles,combined,aswell as the blade.The colors are basic, the efect is cool,but I'm not a expert on efects
It could be better,recoloring in red and using a flame efect where the 2 blade separe and making 2 or more holes in the blades and adding fire there too.
overall,it's a good wep that I would like to have and I'l give it a 7/10

Alt img 2
it looks like 2 killguin daggers combined aftedr using rotating in MS paintand fused with a staff handle.It wasn't reclored so it's easy to see it.
It could have a longer handle,and could be recolored in blue graduating from the center(darkest) to the extreme left and extreme right(lightest)
I'l give it a 4/10

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P.S.:I hope the CnC training will help.....

Approved. You still need to place yourself on Pending.



DragonYugi -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/9/2008 17:23:34)

Part I ~ My Art
As I say I don't really have an exact ideea for how my gallery would be. But I will post 3 types of my... creations...
Image 1 :: Avatar
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff135/YugitheDuelMaster/City_Girl.jpg

Image 2 :: Mini-Logos
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff135/YugitheDuelMaster/Artist.jpg
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff135/YugitheDuelMaster/Project_Leader.jpg

Image 3 :: Signature
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff135/YugitheDuelMaster/Dragon_Trainers_Logo.jpg

Part II ~ The Commenting
Image 1 http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11272.png
It is a bit to blury for that image. You see the blur makes the woman (wich I supose is the main attraction point of the iamge) not correspond with the general enviroment (background). Also the way that the green part of the background transforms in the black one is very good realised if I may say. Nice work on the image but still there are some pros and cons you should consider:
+2 Background (Nice combination, renders etc.)
-2 Blur (Makes the image a little disturbing for the eye)
+1 Text ( Kyoko Fukada - Grafh :: Nice color used for it)
So a +1 results: You need a little more practice on that type of image and you should let the blur tol down a little and concentrate on other nice effects like bloom, sharpen, color disruptors etc.

Image 2 http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11273.png
I really like this one. I see you didn't use the blur tool to much so it is a good thing. Still the eyes of the girl in the image seem a little..... sleepy.. It is not good for the text that says "Breath"....... The way she lookes is more like a "Last Breath"....... Maybe that is the theme? O_o
+2 for background
+1 for text
-1 eyes of the girl
You get a +2 wich means that you have some good talent in there and but you still need to fix some minor problems... In overall you are ok!

Part III - The Mighty Agreement
I, DragonYugi, hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved. You still need to place yourself on Pending.



Swordhunter -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/9/2008 20:09:36)

Part 1:
My art? Gosh, I don't even think... Wait! What's this? O.O I think I've found something buried beneath the ground... Wait, wait! YES!
Just some... Random thing I whipped up not to long ago
Now where did I lea... Oh! Here it is! Another piece :D

Part 2:
Ah, a signature, brings back memories :S
It's nice, it was always nice, but it's bright. The part behind the gecko, it almost distracts to much from the picture itself, also throws off the lighting in my opinion, something that could be improved on would be to simply fix it up some by adding some dark and light contrast. Like how the red of the eye sticks out on the green of the entire thing, but it almost could use more than just that color wise, maybe throw in some other colors and such, I dunno, just more of a personal opinion probably. Lines beneath the text could either use to be more visible or more non-existent. Just kinda distract from stuff that should be more attention grabbing. Just... Kinda throwing that out there.

The second one, looks flat. Yes, the red light/render, I have no idea what it is, thing is kinda bright and adds, but it just doesn't do enough for the overall lighting of it. The BG seems flat compared to the person. And the only flow I see is in the guitar, the rest of it just kinda seems... There in my opinion. Dunno if that was the thought behind it, but it just seems to not stand out as much as I think it should.

Haven't done that in, like, years. :O Hope it was... Good enough I should say :S >.< >.> <.<

Part After 2

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I realized I couldn't post and it made me sad, so I saw this and just had to do it. :)


Approved. You still need to place yourself on Pending.



Severin -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/10/2008 19:19:21)

Art Samples

Art Sample 1 | Flash CS3

Art Sample 2 | Hand Painted

The first is supposed to be a statue of Jesus, like one you would see in a cemetery or church. The second was just a creative outburst of extreme randomness. Most of my work is done in either Flash or PS.


Constructive Criticism | Image #1


This one is brilliant. The girl is very attractive and beautiful. I especially like how her skin tone and colour match the background but are contrasted by her black clothing (if there is even enough to call it that :P).

The colours used are very nice, with the exception of the blues and purples. I think they distract the viewer from the rhythm of the other colours and take a little bit away from the overall picture.

The text is a great colour and even a nice font for the picture, but I think it could have been a couple sizes bigger. It is a little hard to read...

Aside from these minor details though, I think the picture is really nice.


Constructive Criticism | Image #2


OMG. I absolutely love this one! Frogs are some of my favourite animals. The colours you used stand out really nicely too, especially the reddish/orange coloured eye. That really grabbed my attention. I also really like the expression on the frogs face, it makes me feel happy! :D

The background is also very nice. The colours match real smoothly with the frog, and make the overall picture even more eye catching.

Again, the one thing I think you could've done differently is the text. The colour and size of the text is fine, but I think it would have looked a little nicer with a different font. The cursive font doesn't really add anything to picture, and in my opinion doesn't go well with the rest of it. I think it would be a nicer touch if it was a more messy/grunge type font to match the chaotic background.

All in all though, a very pleasing picture. I would be honored if someone had made this sig for me! ;)


Finally my Oath!

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Approved



_RaDiAnCe -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/12/2008 3:30:48)

[image]http://i497.photobucket.com/albums/rr332/shadowsoul890/dawnofawarrior.png[/image]

[image]http://i497.photobucket.com/albums/rr332/shadowsoul890/rike.png[/image]




Constructive Critisms


[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/Pae.jpg[/image]

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/sentimento.png[/image]



TAG 1:

Very beautiful tag but the lightning is too bright.The lines at the bottoms of each text are not clear.The red eyes seems not a good combination with the background.The Watery effect did not match after all.The text "Pae the ravenous gecko" Catches my eyes and it really match the render or picture.

TAG 2:

An Artistic Tag.The Text "Sentimento" really adores me.The Tag really is peaceful.The lighting is good.The Focal is good.the chair did not match the background for me.The underline underneath the "sentimento" really match the tag.A quiet atmosphere,it inspires me.An emotional tag.A VERY artistic tag you have made

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Sythius -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/16/2008 10:33:56)

Gambler Class
Artix GrayScale

[Alt Image1]
Okay, first off. Grats on the picture, it generally looks very nice. But their are a few faults.. Such as the proportions, the wings are too small, and the neck seems a tad thick, but proportions are hard anyway, so good effort. The other fault is that the head, neck and wings seem to not be in scale to the legs... The legs look like they're in a slight distance form the rest of the body that can be seen. But well done, good effort! :)

[Alt Iamage2]
Well done, it's a good attempt. Doing Iso on a ship is no easy task I assure you. But their are a few issues... the first I noticed was the Door on the Deck, You have done it slightly the wrong way around.. The door takes up a somewhat bigger area than the hole, you can easily sort that by lining ti up with the hole more, the next issue would be that some parts aren't very Iso, such as the Target, and the Dummy.. sorry to say this but they'll need a total rework from scratch to make them look Iso too, but it shouldn't be too bad if you use what you have there as references. The mast has also been highlighted wrong, it's been highlighted as if ti was a cuboid, not a cylinder, trying looking at some pictures of cylinders and use them to adjust, then my last issue is with the right sail.. it also needs some shading like the the left.
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Raul08 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/16/2008 15:20:35)

1.Works
First
Second

2.Constructive Criticism
[Image1] = The lights are a bit too shiny but the first thing you see is the girl with her toy...
IMO the font is not the best match with the render but because of the shiny background it seems very interesting[:D]

[Image2] = There is a beautiful woman and she get all your attention.The background is a bit uncleared but it make that image more interesting ... "Sentimento" is the name for that work.

3.
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LordofAces -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/17/2008 17:33:15)

1. works
Work 1
Work 2

2.Constructive Criticism
Image one
It's a nice image, however the back of the gecko looks quite pixely. Also the image is a bit too bright. The gecko's colors are also a bit faded (or that's just my computer)


Image 2

The background colors of the picture look faded, also the woman's face is shiny looking, also the arm lookes blurred try to make it clearer.


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Beowulf Z -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/18/2008 20:15:47)

Image 1: http://img296.imageshack.us/my.php?image=taurenwarriorrs7.png

Image 2: http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=evilwarriorur9.png

Constructive Criticism:

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/24gkqvr.jpg?0.11018700%201224368338

- Excellent detail displayed here, more than what I'm capable of for sure; I also like the weaponry on the left arm. The only criticism I could offer however is the perspective being a little off, the holes in the missile launchers could use some more darkening too to add depth but I assume it's a sketch, so depth may not be of much attention. All I could say is that the left missile launcher use some more foreshortening to add a more dynamic look in relevancy to the accompanying left arm ( with the machine gun ).

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Morning-Dancer.png?0.53712700%201224368320

- The contrast in this image is very nice, adding almost a "steamy" effect to it. The text however could use more blending, but the placement of it isn't too bad. The image however of the woman could be lowered slightly to give maybe a more appealing perspective, but that's just my thoughts.

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v4porizer -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/19/2008 8:49:07)

i hope it's okay with handdrawn only. because i do not have gimp,photoshop or any other program

the betrayer

dark warrior

constructive criticism:

as some of you may have seen, i can be quite harsh about some things. so i'm just gonna make this short and simple

image nr 1

the render is nice but it seems very smudged out, like the letters on a wet newspaper.
the splash effect in the bg is very well placed
i'm not so fond of the green nuance you have chosen for the sig but that is actually only a matter of taste

image nr 2

the colors in this sig fit very well with each other
i can barely see the text because of the blur
the render seems almost misplaced in the bg

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whos john? -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/19/2008 20:40:31)

http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x274/luke399/0001copy.jpg
http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x274/luke399/0002copy.jpg

^^first 2 episode of a DF themed comic
Constructive criticism
image 1 (disorder)

this is an awesome sig. but in my opinion the glow would look better it it covered all of the frets rather than just up to her hand. i think you should spread the "sparks" to make them just as dense on the right side of her body as the left. but then again the image IS called "disorder" so i guess evening things out might be counter productive.

image 2(pae)
i really like this sig, the only problem i see in it is that the text looks kinda weird. you could easily fix this by changing its color or effects


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PyroXavier -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/20/2008 3:43:04)

Art Examples
[Artwork Example Number 1] ~ Xan 2008 Recolored to Green
[Artwork Example Number 2] ~ Mogloween 2008 Signature

Constructive Critisms

CnC #1 - http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/scene2wj4.png?0.83359400%201224486950

~This pics looks good but could use some touch ups. The edits for the bar such as the guests were very edited in very good. The sprites need some clean up. Their edges look very rough and needs a smoother outline. The armor for the guests and the character itself look too highly detailed that it almost makes it not look good. For the enemy, adding a weapon would be a much better addition to the pic since the enemy looks as if it is not doing anything. Adding a weapon of its armor and mask color would be a nice addition. Also, the enemies legs look off. I cannot tell which leg is which. (e.g. Left leg is right, right leg is left). The recoloring of the crystals were well done. So far, the edit looks great but it just needs the touch-ups mentioned in this CnC!

CnC #2 - http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/zsvo6c.png?0.14121200%201224488200

~This dragon edit looks great except for a couple things. First of all, the dragon's head is large for its body. A possible resizing of the head should help in improving the pic. Second, there are some pixels that can be noticed that should be erased (not that this is much of a big deal). Third, the edges of the dragon looks slightly rough. Making the edges smoother would make a very good edit. Fourth, the background doesn't match very well with the dragon. I suggest a blank black or white background or using a background in AdventureQuest, DragonFable, MechQuest or AQWorlds and editing the dragon sprite in! Overall, this dragon looks great but with the touch-ups included in this CnC, it will be better!

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entity 101 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/20/2008 12:03:18)

Hand Drawn Art 1 Hand Drawn Art 2

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Critique:
Image 1:
[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/snuggles.jpg[/image]
This image is good, but seems unfitting to it's name, see - the penguin like creature the girl is snuggling up to dosen't look the part.- i would have put a more cuddly creature. also the writing on the penguin's chest is unclear, the anime girl is very well done by the way.

Image 2:
[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/sentimento.png[/image]
This image i have to say i dislike. the picture's background colours are the same as the girl and her gutar. this seems to meke the picture quite boring - the only main colours i can see are cream, grey and white.though the image is clear, and fits the name.

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whos john? -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/20/2008 13:01:16)

alright ill try again
http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x274/luke399/0001copy.jpg
http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x274/luke399/0002copy.jpg

constructive criticism

image 1
this is a great pic. the whole sig has a nice layout and the bird was very well rendered.i especially like that the effects on the background bring emphasis to the birds assumed motion.
there isn't much that i don't like about this sig but one thing that comes to mind is that the color scheme on the background doesn't seem to match up well to me. you might try a brown or dark orange to go with the color of the bird or a blue similar to the feahers on the lower part of its wings
Overall you did a great job on this sig.

image 2
except for a few slight problems i think that this is a very well done sig. the first qualm i have is that the top left corner gives a feel of too much empty space. to fix this you could make the text larger,but i like the text the way it is. another possible soluiton is to make the whole image a bit shorter in actual height, but the downside would be that you would have to show less of the girl.
the other problem i see is that the smoke that is coming from the girls shoulder looks a little too hard edged a simple fix would be to blur it.
overall this is a nice sig gives off a cool vibe and the colors go great together.


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umm... do i have to do the join thing again?

Approved. And yes.



joncthree -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/21/2008 0:12:31)

drawing one

2nd drawing

Drawing two is from like 2 years ago, and i only used it because my other really good dragon drawing is saved as a .TIF and photo bucket won't take .tif's

IMAGE ONE; desire CRITICISM:
My speciality is in hand drawn art, so this may come off a little harsh, but i think that the back ground seems to be a little... for a lack of better words, spastic. The lines and splotches and circles all tend to take away from the girl, who is well done by the way. I would say try to stick to one kind of color scheme, like say go from a light blue to a dark blue instead of the pink to brown. For that specific pisture, i would say stick with pink because of the girl and the Desire. Or instead change the brown to a dark red or something. I dont mean to make it sound like it's not a good sig, just that its not a GREAT sig.

IMAGE TWO; Morning dancer:
well... first of all, morning dancer seems like it should have more bright colors, maybe an anime girl and boy dancing, or just a silly anime girl acting outrageous. Morning dancer should be more light hearted, and this is just a little bit inappropriate to me. Hey, im a guy, and i make dumb jokes about that kind of stuff all the time, but that doesn't mean it belongs on these forums (trust me, i've been told by mods not to make distatsefull jokes) but this isn't meant to be a joke and if it is it seems to be taken a little bit to far past the edge of appropriate. It would be a good sig for maybe myspace, or facebook, but just not quite right for these forums.



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OKIDOKIE, hope i make the cut! i guess i'm a little bit of a harsh critic, but in my experience what hurts now, helps later.

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Denolth -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/22/2008 15:10:09)

Picture 1: http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr309/dudu_95/Generalien.jpg
Picture 2: http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr309/dudu_95/BillytheAlien.jpg

Picture 1
The first picture is very well drawn. If you look at his arms, you'll see that his arms are doing some movement of battling, like a "come on!". His hat let us think he is a commander of an army of aliens! As he is smoking, it let us think he is a old alien... The red in his arms lives the picture with a color different from green. The variation os colors is not that much, but it's enough for us to think he is a rare alien.

Picture 2
Billy the Alien one of my best drawings, but he is simple and... Mysterious. You think when you see him: his mouth looks like a jack-o'-lantern! It's because his past is not the best one... He was tortured by its master and almost killed. One day, he escaped and met that guy (Image 1). After that, he bacame part of his army. If we take a look again in the picture, we'll see that the alien is not that bad, he's only trying to appear in that way. You cannot see his feet, because he doesn't have!

Hope you like it!

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sir zeke -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/22/2008 15:18:51)

My Artix 08' Advertisement http://www.freewebs.com/aqwtimelords/artix%2008.png
And Heres My New Form Of ChickenCow http://www.freewebs.com/aqwtimelords/chikencow.png

all my art is viewable at http://www.freewebs.com/aqwtimelords/


Note: i am doing the non-sigs

First Image:
i like the scales on the back and the wing design is quite admireable...The Tail is kinda fat at the end i feel as an artist it would look better if it was tapered to a point its also needs a little more clean up on erase marks and one of the horns seems to bend in more than the other

Second Image:
I like the boot design but they should come off his legs more...what im saying is that they look like they are skin tight at the top...it might be hard to understand.... I think his Shoulder Straps Should Be A little higher on his shoulders and his arms should be a bit less thin and his neck is quite long and thin for a warrior and his back arm could use a bit more shading

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well....hope this is alright....thx for reading my post can you show artix my artix 08 ad?

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dark beelzebub -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/23/2008 11:01:58)

art 1
Art 2

Constructive Criticism 1 - I like the idea of drawing dragons but they never seem to turn out the way i want them to wheras yours looks like it turned out pretty well the only thing i have a problem with is the proportions of the head to the body i think it looks just a bit big but if this was changed i think it would be a very good drawing

Constructive Critiicism 2 - I didnt know taking a picture of Dragon Fable was art what would have been good was if it showed one of your characters maybe using a speical power or defeating the enemy or showed some speical equipment that you may have found either way if you improve on your artwork you may be able to get good someday

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sir zeke -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/23/2008 13:09:50)

My New Artix 08 ad! http://www.freewebs.com/aqwtimelords/artix%20campain2.jpg
My New ChickenCows! http://www.freewebs.com/aqwtimelords/chikencows2.png

Constructive Criticism:

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/fy2x4h.jpg

1:The shading in this drawing is impresive there are however some spots that i feel could use a little more shading...perhaps under his neck that can be easily fixed by making it slightly darker shades in that area also under the horns could be a bit darker also one of his teeth seems to blend in to the skin this can be fixed by simply drawing a few lines to make it look more like it is in his mouth not on his skin altoghether its pretty good thou

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/zsvo6c.png

i feel the wings do well at dipicting how the dragon would fly and the spots on his head and neck add woderful detail to the head and neck however i do feel the neck is a bit out of proportion it could be inmproved by simply making the head a bit smaller i also feel it could be be lighter the dark shades of blue can make the image hard to understand and lastly i feel that his front legs are also kinda out of proportion and could be slightly larger easily fixed by just makeing them a little biger

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Thank you!

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Raul08 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/24/2008 16:28:22)

Own Art
Image 1
Image 2

Creative Criticism
Death From Above
In my oppinion the background colours are working fine with the render...but also is too bright in the right side near the head of the eagle. The bright of the background is making you to focus on the render and help you to see all the details.
"Death From Above" is a perfect title for that work because the render looks like a perfect assassin. Maybe I'm wrong but "eagle88" don't fit good with the image.My favorite detail of the image is the eagle with his mask wich takes all your attention.

Breath
The dark-red background give an interesting look to the image but in my oppinion that image don't need so much glowing details.I'm disappointed because the girl's face is too bright.The possition of the render and the colour of the background fits almost perfect and give a relaxing look.Maybe I'm wrong but in my oppinion "Relax" is a better title than "Breath".When i've seen that image for the first time all my attention was focused on the girl so that is maybe the best render ever possible.

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.Fullmetal_Tmd -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/24/2008 20:48:26)

Own art (just old stuff):
One
Two

Constructive Criticism: Well, its been so long since I've had to actually think, so my brain might be rusty =/.
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/snuggles.jpg?0.97156800%201224894570

First off, the focal point is a little unclear to me. My eyes are drawn to the bright lines on the side, not the render on first look. I also dislike the glow around the render. It also seems a little blurry to me, or my eye sight is faltering. I also feel that you could of expanded the canvas a little bit, everything seems so confined. On the bright side, though, the color scheme fits the image perfectly.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Breath.png?0.88645700%201224895203

The first thing I notice, is the over-contrasted C4D render in the corner, which looks pretty bad IMO. Aside from that, the render doesn't seem all that well blended, it could of been better. Again, color scheme fits together, but the render is looks a little blurry too, so it could of used a little sharpening (might be my eyes, idk). Also, there seems to be two lighting sources, one from the over contrasted c4d, and one above the render, and its a little distracting.

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LordofAces -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/26/2008 12:26:27)

Works:
Work 1
Work 2

CnC


Image 1
I like the head of the dragon, the teeth look so realisic, and the horns are awesome too! But the neck is really too big, if you made that smaller, it would look great! also save as .png next time ;)

Image 2
I really like the person up top with the red robes, the yellow eyes make it look like it's watching the entire crew. The oars look a bit choppy, but they look functional. The boat's end is square making it look... odd.. And by the prow the sword the person has purple pixles (or is that part of the sword?). over all it's a great picture, keep up the good work!



I LordofAces hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.



Sir Dorigo III -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/26/2008 14:44:42)

1. Art:
a. Art 1
b. Art 2

2. CnC:
a.(Handdrawn dragon, full body, turned around to look at you) I like this piece. I think the tail is done well and the way you can see through the wing offers a new perspective. I thnk that the ways you could improve this piece would be a larger body and a longer neck. The snout should be elongated and the leg scales would look better if they were more pronounced. Lastly, the artist should color the dragon so that it follows a pattern and looks realistic. The colors depend on the dragon's mood but but black and red with blue fire, could top of this dragon's look

b.(pirate ship) I think this piece is a good mixture of colors and that the skip looks preety realistic. I think the characters themselves look real, although it might look better if they were a bit bigger. Although the design of the ship itself looks simple, the characters, the crow's nest and the arget make it look great. the only thing would be to change the ends to round to make it look more traditional.

3. I Dorigo hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved



The iNinja -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (10/26/2008 19:46:21)

[image]http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq38/Voltinova/Hells-Devils.gif[/image]

[image]http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq38/Voltinova/Earths-Angels-1.gif[/image]

CC
ALT Image 1
It looks rather plain, and done in paint, altough it is rather impressive. It also looks like it is very poor in quality, and should've been done in a different program other then Paint

ALT Image 2
It looks rather copied from somewhere else, as if someone else had made it, but thats just knowing DragonFable. It just plainly looks too copied. Otherwise good image.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.



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