[Poetry] Lux's Collection-Comments

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Lux -> [Poetry] Lux's Collection-Comments (8/1/2008 12:00:12)
Here it is. Enjoy and comment, please...I want to know what you guys think. I'll add more soon.

~Shade~ -> RE: [Poetry] Lux's Collection-Comments (8/4/2008 17:09:43)
Oooh! New poem! Well, student, here is your critique. It is good. That's about it... I mean, I really do like it. I don't find much wrong with it, but I am a horrible critiquer. ~Shade~

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