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Lux -> [Poetry] Lux's Collection-Comments (8/1/2008 12:00:12)

Here it is.

Enjoy and comment, please...I want to know what you guys think. I'll add more soon.




~Shade~ -> RE: [Poetry] Lux's Collection-Comments (8/4/2008 17:09:43)

Oooh!

New poem! Well, student, here is your critique.

It is good.

That's about it... I mean, I really do like it. I don't find much wrong with it, but I am a horrible critiquer.

~Shade~




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