Poetry: By me, myself and moi.

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Jjtee -> Poetry: By me, myself and moi. (9/3/2008 6:18:04)
Hi guys! It seems that I am the new guy around these parts, so please do go easy on me :). I would love to have some feedback on my work, what style you prefer, how I can improve and different topics and such for me to tackle. So I do hope you enjoy my work and without further ado... Oh one more thing! I've split them up into posts that make stylistic sense, for your viewing pleasure (and my slight OCD). Anything with a rhyme or sonnet style will most likely start here until it overfills. I don't see that happening all too soon, as I hardly write rhyming poetry. But you never know! Rhyming English summer is rather fickle. Just like the poem :) Sonnet I is rather self explanatory This is my newer, shorter and higher impact free verse works. Short free verse My finish line keeps moving . Writing poetry is like running a race? Lie with me. Poker and women go hand in hand. Finally, these are my older and longer free verse works. Longer free verse The Conjurer . My experience with performing magic (as a little side hobby of mine). Friends. Written after reading American Psycho. I hope you see the resemblance. Of course you are free to read them all! Thanks for stopping by, do feel free to write any criticisms or comments here.

Jjtee -> RE: Poetry: By me, myself and moi. (9/22/2008 11:42:44)
Just a note that I have updated my page with yet another new poem. Although I must warn it is rather random. http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=14800376

Lady Eliac -> RE: Poetry: By me, myself and moi. (11/7/2008 7:29:26)
quote: The grass flails at my arms, It sails in the breeze Sweeping with all the calm, In the endless green lit seas. You are brilliant. This one verse I adore, very, very much--it reminds me of "Green Finch and Linet Bird." I really like your style. What you are saying with three words can be thought of and then described in seven. So much more is going on than originally seems to be going on...Brilliant. Just...Just brilliant.

Jjtee -> RE: Poetry: By me, myself and moi. (11/26/2008 17:37:46)
Newest poem inspired by the tube (London). http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=15118273 Hope you enjoy.

Jjtee -> RE: Poetry: By me, myself and moi. (6/17/2009 20:11:07)
A poem that has been long in the waiting. One I have worked on for quite some time, and is likely to be revised and worked upon. It is rather long and has been inspired by the writing style of TS Eliot, so forgive some of the odd language. Anywho I hope you enjoy it as much as I did writing it! http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=16172759

Jjtee -> RE: Poetry: By me, myself and moi. (12/22/2010 6:19:10)
After a rather long hiatus is a quick poem on London nights. I tried to parallel alcohol and religion, but I fear the symbolism isn't all that strong. Regardless I hope you enjoy it, even if it is a little rushed. For you non Brits out there Booze=drink, trollied=inebriated. http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=18453927

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