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Feoras ToxArch -> The Trammels of Poetry ~ Comments and Criticisms (9/11/2008 22:15:23)

The Trammels of Poetry

Enjoy... or else XD

~Feo



Crimzon5 -> RE: The Trammels of Poetry ~ Comments and Criticisms (9/12/2008 3:03:06)

Or else what? *stands up and thrusts his chest*

lol

Man, the words were deep.

quote:

His senses began to withdraw,
still concluding he was without flaw.
Pride has left him foolish,
and an appearance now ghoulish,
the lad's goals were never to unthaw.

THat has got to be my favorite part.



Feoras ToxArch -> RE: The Trammels of Poetry ~ Comments and Criticisms (1/15/2010 13:17:59)

Wow... sorry for the late response. *dusts off thread* Oh man... do I see cobwebs?

I remember writing those for school long ago, so I never really enjoyed them at the time *points up to title* which is why my thread was named so. Now, after looking back and comparing them to ones I've written recently, the similarities between the old and new are striking. I'll update the thread accordingly from now on.

Regards,
~Feo



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